Truely a wonderful work.
Awesome!
Comment is about Fathers Are Wonderful People By Helen Stiner Rice/Translation In Amharic/ by Alem Hailu Gabre Kristos (blog)
Original item by Alem Hailu G/Kristos
Thank you moon.girl to like my work.
Comment is about Lost Soul (blog)
Original item by Anmolpreet Kaur
<Deleted User> (24283)
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 08:44
Often we dissolve into the liquid we are put. But reheated on high temperature often returns the basic self.
Inspirational write!
Comment is about Lost Soul (blog)
Original item by Anmolpreet Kaur
<Deleted User> (24283)
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 08:36
Bravo! This is the best I've read from you. Its simply a great poem with equal status that of Keats or Shakespeare.
You deserve a medal. This poem is good. Needs to be included in books.
Rhyme is good, parts of speech used is good, diction and vocabulary all good.
Punctuation just needs be done. And trust me its the best one.
Publish it Dean.
Comment is about Nature Freely Gives (blog)
Original item by Dean Fraser
<Deleted User> (24283)
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 08:22
Someone's owning up to many hidden facts. Seems proud achievers of the same though?
Comment is about the lack of you (blog)
Original item by sun
<Deleted User> (24283)
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 08:16
Hi Po
Sun and moon.....our heavenly bodies on an increase on Wol....hehehe
Comment is about the lack of you (blog)
Original item by sun
Rajeev Ranjan
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 07:42
प्रणाम अच्छी कविता भईया
उनके आशीर्वाद से हमें उनके विचारों को प्रचारित करते रहना चाहिए, मेहनात की कामायी, बचो की पढाई और दुसरो की भलाई
??????
Comment is about His Last Journey - An Ode To My Father (blog)
Original item by Sanjay Pandey
A lovely tribute. Father has the ability to say everything in minimum words and a place in our heart that can never be replaced?
Comment is about His Last Journey - An Ode To My Father (blog)
Original item by Sanjay Pandey
Thank you...thank you...so much!
Comment is about The Same Thing Anyway (blog)
Original item by Dean Fraser
<Deleted User> (24283)
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 05:45
Tears of hurt
Tears of pain
Tears of love
Tears of gain
Tears are sentiments in physical form.
Crude!
Comment is about Fresh Tears (blog)
Original item by Zimbili Shezi
<Deleted User> (24283)
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 05:43
Such beautiful sentiments of deep rooted love that often snatches everything good from us. Although painful but love is love. It's a kinda high one must experience. It only happens to those who are in true love. Lust and infatuation don't lead to sleeplessness and of course having your lustful feelings achieved in physical form leads to more lust but often people mistake them to be feelings of love.
Awesome!
Comment is about the lack of you (blog)
Original item by sun
thank you, Nicola Beckett, for a like!
Dr. Kishore
Comment is about Rule of universe (blog)
Original item by Dr. Kishore R. Nikam
<Deleted User> (13740)
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 05:25
I take great strength in your words this morning, my body is extemey weak, I feel battered and bruised, holding on to dear ife, clinging but here.............
Comment is about Fondly remembered (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
This is heartbreaking but I can relate and feel the tug on my heartstrings. ?
Comment is about the lack of you (blog)
Original item by sun
<Deleted User> (13740)
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 05:03
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 03:46
sorry you had a bad childhood.
I feel sorry for kids who have no father
but also the ones who have horrible ones.
Be the best Father
you can be!
Comment is about kJ Walker (poet profile)
Original item by kJ Walker
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 03:43
ha. no wonder your husband is hiding
behind the Hydrangas.
He looks leery of what may be around the corner!
haha
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
RoseMary
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 00:15
Feelings could be true
Follow your heart
Don't follow the lies
Emotionally charged write.
Comment is about Unsent letters (blog)
Original item by kimberly
RoseMary
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 00:07
Well loved and constructed. Beautifully crafted!
Comment is about Fondly remembered (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
RoseMary
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 00:05
Karma intervenes too soon. Justice arrived on a platter.
Karmaic write.
Comment is about A hard cat to swallow (blog)
Original item by hugh
RoseMary
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 00:02
A poet once wrote
His death is life to many
But when a poet dies
His death is death to many
Poems leave a bunch of truth behind
Discovered too soon
Cold write!
Comment is about In memory of a great poet (blog)
Original item by Alem Hailu G/Kristos
RoseMary
Sun 21st Jun 2020 23:59
A nightmare continues ..... new normal follows.
Vivid dream!
Comment is about Masking the Truth (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
<Deleted User> (13740)
Sun 21st Jun 2020 22:32
Victims of child abuse can't be silenced
Comment is about QUESTION (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Po, that is the best response I could have ever asked for. Thank you! ??
Comment is about Unsent letters (blog)
Original item by kimberly
Thanks for your thoughts, Stephen and Moongirl.
Comment is about WHAT I COULD HAVE LEARNED IN LOCKDOWN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
thank you so much Abdul and Rosemary
Comment is about Solitude (blog)
Original item by Joseph Matondo
Po I don't know whether I'm worthy of returning as a neutered tom cat belonging to a spinster school mistress in the next reincarnation? I need to earn thousands of brownie points in this life to make it possible and even then someone else makes the final decision.
Thank you for pressing the like.
Comment is about The return of the sunshine days of yore (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Stephen thank you for your generous comment and your action of activating the like.
Comment is about The return of the sunshine days of yore (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
Philipos
Sun 21st Jun 2020 18:25
There was a WW2 Black American air pilot wing as well I seem to remember MC, as I am sure other US Black military units too. The isolationist impact of Novo thwarts rationalism in some, although I am horrified with what happened with Police actions recently in the USA. Unforgivable.
Comment is about ABSURD IS THE WORD! (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thanks, K J Walker, for stopping by, and hitting a like!
The likes for this poem are much precious to me!
Dr.
Comment is about To, the Dad (blog)
Original item by Dr. Kishore R. Nikam
Yes, Abdul Ahmad, history, sometimes, seems to be very brutal!
We are carried away in wrong directions, and after wrong aspirations, and, unfortunately, remain unaware of the loss, hidden therein.
Thank you, for your heartfelt comments, and a like!
Dr.
Comment is about To, the Dad (blog)
Original item by Dr. Kishore R. Nikam
I know how you feel, John. We watched17 episodes of House of Cards before we gave up and requested counselling.
Comment is about WHAT I COULD HAVE LEARNED IN LOCKDOWN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Sun 21st Jun 2020 18:09
Thank you for your Kind words Abdul, they help sustain me.
Mortimer
Comment is about Hangover at 6 AM on A Thursday (blog)
Original item by MortimerBlooming
A fine, uplifting poem.?
Comment is about The return of the sunshine days of yore (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
I liked this, though to be quite frank I would have been far better off as a child if my own dad had abandoned us.(but that's another story)
This is about the dads who put food on the table, and looked after their families. These are the ones who's example I hope I followed when bringing up my own kids
Comment is about DADS (blog)
Original item by d.knape
A kind of a circus act "crippling defiance of human structure".
Comment is about STILETTOS (blog)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
The sun's blinding brightness may obscure Venus's presence but her enduring beauty shall appear when the weary sun once again needs takes its beauty rest.
Another well crafted poem Mortimer.
Comment is about Hangover at 6 AM on A Thursday (blog)
Original item by MortimerBlooming
Decisions are made in real time and influenced by our stress on what our priorities at that time were.
Humans often regret history's revelations of that time.
A touching poetry.
Comment is about To, the Dad (blog)
Original item by Dr. Kishore R. Nikam
Moon.girl and Cynthia
Thank you ladies for your comments on this poem.
Abdul
Comment is about The return of the sunshine days of yore (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 21st Jun 2020 15:49
Whether a real situation or an empathetic one, you will have touched 'nerves'. Although, you might lose a few sympathetic readers with 'It's not fair'.
Comment is about Melancholy (blog)
Original item by Damon Blackery
Thoughtful, bold and splendid. And well penned.
Comment is about Non, Je ne regrette rien (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Charming - full of 'life' itself.
Comment is about The return of the sunshine days of yore (blog)
Original item by Abdul Ahmad
I like your outlook and your poetic skill.
Comment is about The Same Thing Anyway (blog)
Original item by Dean Fraser
A hard subject brilliantly shared. I really like how it could be literal or metaphorical.
Comment is about Artemis (blog)
Original item by Clive Culverhouse
I don't know about any other readers, but you sure mesmerise me!
Comment is about The Forbury Gardens (blog)
Original item by David Cooke
Anna
Mon 22nd Jun 2020 11:35
Thank you!
Comment is about Anmolpreet Kaur (poet profile)
Original item by Anmolpreet Kaur