Please Close the Door Behind You
Local Stockport drifters
Stench stained bench
Half empty cans
Homeless drinkers gather
Surround poetic circle
Protective art barrier
A Retrospective show
Giving active minds
Creative upper edge
Sunlight hours fade
Following the distant
Tangerine tapering glow
Early Summer visitors
Decide to go.
Comment is about April 2025 Collage Poem: Remove the Thorn (blog)
Original item by Stockport WoL
Thank you for reading and the kind comment.
Comment is about 'Goodnight' (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram
It’s always great to see how others interact with the Muse🙏🏻🕊
Comment is about appraisal (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
~on “quetch” - Thanks kindly dear Rolph🕊️🙏🏻🌷and sand particles do find themselves in the oddest places even after a thorough clean or two 🕊️🙏🏻🌷
Comment is about Rolph David (poet profile)
Original item by Rolph David
Many thanks Auracle for your comments and feedback. It is much appreciated. 👍
Comment is about Life Is A Porn Movie (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Dear Rolph,
Thank you for your beautifully worded message.
Your insights into the imagery and the significance of the bond we shared are particularly meaningful to me.
It's comforting to know that the poem's intention to capture the enduring nature of connection resonated with you.
Thank you again for taking the time to share your thoughtful reflections.
Best regards,
Naomi
Comment is about DUSK AND DEPARTURE (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Thank you Rolph.
I appreciate you taking the time to read, reflect, and comment.
It feels nice to be seen and heard.
Comment is about Handle with care (blog)
Original item by James R
Flowers makes the world smells good. Flowers is like a woman, with flower bees is sad. (joke) 😅. I love your poem!
Comment is about Flower #1 (blog)
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Thanks kindly dear Rolph🕊️🙏🏻🌷and sand particles do find themselves in the oddest places even after a thorough clean or two 🕊️🙏🏻🌷
Comment is about q u e t c h (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
They seems happy and contented walking
By the sea shore, thinking of nowhere to go,
Only their steps should know,
The salty breeze carries stories untold,
Of love and adventure, of hearts brave and bold.
Their simple living I was enchanted, I was fascinated,
I wish I have more time to stay,
Since I don't own my time due to uncertainty of work mission,
Though I don't want to go, I can't say no.
That is why, I leave my heart in this place,
I promise to come back again soonest... next year!
Comment is about I took a shot when I visited Micronesia by the sea shore. (photo)
Original item by AirlogRigsMaria
Thanks for the latest likes on this one.
I've been away for a few days, and although my imagination has been in overdrive my words are stuck in the gearbox.
I'm waiting for the road to open up in front of me, let's see.
David.
Comment is about Aubade-esque (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Tom Doolan, Thanks for sharing your precious time reading my poem. God bless!
Comment is about Infidelity (blog)
Original item by AirlogRigsMaria
I like the artistry, Tom.
We've injected ourselves onto the Earth. Now Earth is ejecting us into space.
Whatever we rave, there's some porn creative out there for lust to crave! (hope you don't mind my commenting)
Comment is about Life Is A Porn Movie (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Mon 14th Apr 2025 08:06
James,
Your poetic lines here are a haunting meditation on love, loss, and the fragility of human connections. The way you describe love as "gifted to each chosen place" conveys both its beauty and its transient nature. The imagery of "vestiges" and "litter" speaks to how easily things can be discarded or forgotten, even when they were once held dear. Your line, "My passions lichened, as attuned with stone," evokes a powerful sense of emotional stagnation and decay, contrasting sharply with the longing to "strive for unbroken ground." There's an undercurrent of persistence in your poem—despite the withering and the loss, there's still a drive to keep moving forward. The tension between love’s fragility and the need to continue is a deeply poignant theme in your writing.
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about Handle with care (blog)
Original item by James R
Mon 14th Apr 2025 08:03
Marla,
"My Memory of You" is a beautiful, bittersweet reflection on love and time. The clarity of your language gives the poem a quiet power, allowing the emotions to unfold naturally. The memory of sitting on a bed and dreaming about the future captures the innocence of youth, while the lingering feeling of love that remains speaks to the enduring nature of certain connections. The line, "Even when we're old, to me, you'll still be Sue," is both heartwarming and wistful, encapsulating the idea that some bonds, though changed by time, are never fully lost. It’s a lovely tribute to both the passing of time and the love that remains anchored in memory.
Cheerio,
Rolph
Comment is about My Memory Of You (blog)
Original item by Marla Joy
Mon 14th Apr 2025 08:00
Good morning Red,
The imagery in "q u e t c h" is striking, evoking a barren, unforgiving landscape that seems to mirror emotional isolation and regret. For me, the desert becomes a symbol for lost moments and buried memories, each breeze turning over pages of the past, carrying with it the weight of things that can never be undone. The oasis, hidden in the mind, offers both hope and sorrow—a place of refuge that remains out of reach. It’s a poignant exploration of the struggle to move forward while being haunted by what’s left behind.
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about q u e t c h (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Thanks for likes: Manish, Naomi, Black_Rose & Nigel Astell. 👍
Comment is about Life Is A Porn Movie (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Mon 14th Apr 2025 07:54
Manish, there’s something deeply moving in the way you explore the delicate beauty of "firsts." You’ve captured the quiet significance of those moments before anything truly begins—the anticipation, the vulnerability, and the sweetness of something new unfolding. The way you describe love, first felt by someone who once thought it out of reach, is tender and profoundly human. The imagery you weave, like a plant blossoming or the meeting of the Sahara with the Nile, speaks to the profound shifts that occur when new life, new hope, enters unexpected places. It’s a poem full of longing, tenderness, and the quiet strength found in beginnings that carry us toward something greater. Fantastic!
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about Firsts (blog)
Original item by Manish
Mon 14th Apr 2025 07:50
Marnanel,
"The Top Line" is striking in its sharp, incisive commentary. The way you distill complex political motives into clear, vivid lines is powerful. Each opening sentence you highlight cuts to the heart of the manipulation behind those words, and it’s an impactful reminder to question the rhetoric we hear. Its structure enhances its message—each stanza is a punch, and the last line hits especially hard. You've captured a kind of cynical clarity that’s both unsettling and thought-provoking. The poem is a perfect critique of how political language can shape our perceptions and the systems we live in.
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about The top line (blog)
Original item by Marnanel Thurman
Mon 14th Apr 2025 07:45
Naomi,
What hauntingly beautiful lines! The way you capture that quiet grief, the unspoken thoughts shared between friends, is so moving. Each suggestion for where your friend could rest feels deeply personal and vivid, yet none of them can fully capture the essence of what remains. The final lines, especially—about the bond shared and the way he continues to live in you—are perfect. You've managed to convey the complexity of loss with such tenderness, and it leaves an echo of peace amidst the sadness. Truly, it's a beautiful reflection on memory and connection. Great job!
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about DUSK AND DEPARTURE (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Mon 14th Apr 2025 07:39
Thank you Naomi, Manish and Nigel Astell for your "like". I really appreaciate it.
Have a nice day,
cheerio,
Rolph
Comment is about Erased In Silence (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Mon 14th Apr 2025 07:37
Good morning Yanma, Hélène, Holden and Stephen,
Thank you. Your kind words gave it applause (and possibly a standing ovation in its own mind). It’s a quiet joy to know these words found you well.
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about A Quiet Strength (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Cheers Rolph, your comment is much appreciated.
I like to inform people of the possible problems with their car.
🤔😉👍
Comment is about Wandering Expositions (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Thank you Stephen. Chris was my friend for well over 50 years. I miss him.
Comment is about Avoiding the dirge (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Kalyani,
Your style is honest and powerful.
Marla
Comment is about Mirror at 2am (blog)
Original item by Kalyani
Thanks for the likes RBK, Manish, Stephen, Tom and Holden.
Comment is about My Memory Of You (blog)
Original item by Marla Joy
Hope you do, Steve. A day out that helped you forget the world's troubles for a while, and a reminder of our green and pleasant land. Thanks for commenting. And thanks for the Likes, Nigel, Red Brick, Tom, Holden, Flyntland, Marla, Hugh and Trevor
Comment is about The Esk Valley line (blog)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I don't know, Yanma Hidayah.
But I appreciate you interacting with me. Giving me the chance. To do things better.
Comment is about A Fleeting Beauty (blog)
Original item by Yanma Hidayah
A very fragile and emotive reflection. 🌷
Comment is about SHATTERED AIR (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Thanks for like Naomi. 👍
Comment is about Human Race (Shut your face) 👥👥 (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
His factory is still there, Stuart. We saw it when we visited Krakow.
Comment is about A Poem on Schindler's List (blog)
Original item by Stuart Vanner
Congratulations to Andy! His poems are always perceptive and enjoyable.
Comment is about Andy Porter looks forward to debut pamphlet (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
A grand day out, Greg. I never made it to Whitby, but maybe I will some day.
Comment is about The Esk Valley line (blog)
Original item by Greg Freeman
A marvellous poem of life and loss, John. Worthy of his memory, I think.
Comment is about Avoiding the dirge (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
A fine achievement, Rolph. The rhyme and rhythm are mesmering, and chime perfectly with the wisdom of the verse.
Comment is about A Quiet Strength (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Sat 12th Apr 2025 22:31
Truly wise words, in a beautifully composed poem, Rolph!🌷
Comment is about A Quiet Strength (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
You poem, in rhyming couplets, is worthy of its subject, Mike. A moving, decent piece.
May he rest in peace.
Comment is about 'Goodnight' (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram
Dear Rolph,
Your message is deeply appreciated.
It's wonderful to know that the poem resonated with you on such a profound level, and your interpretation of its themes is insightful. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts so eloquently.
Best regards,
Naomi
Comment is about SHATTERED AIR (blog)
Original item by Naomi
I agree with what you say, Steve, and now I read your poem in a better light. It's true that AI gives you nothing new, and it also has no shame either. It's a sobering thought that it creams off content from WOL.
Comment is about Look! Here's Me as an Action Figure! (blog)
Original item by Steve White
Thank you, Graham, for your generous comment. It is much appreciated. I would of course be grateful for any further feedback from your side.
I started writing this after hearing an old BBC recording of 1984 with Patrick Troughton as Winston Smith.
Rolph- thanks as always for your perceptive comment. Yes, it was a reference to Trump's remark in the Oval Office.And Trump seems to be someone who is permanently angry, resentful or out for revenge. Like a rather overheated Big Brother, in fact!
Uilleam- we should be vigilant. No one deserves to disappear. Even Paul Daniels couldn't do it.
And thanks to everyone who liked this poem.
Comment is about Angry Man (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Awesome, inspirational poem, Rolph. Every word lifted me up. Love the rhyming too.
Comment is about A Quiet Strength (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Your poem reminds me of... M...E 😊
Comment is about A Fleeting Beauty (blog)
Original item by Yanma Hidayah
Thanks, Yanma Hidayah. Personal experience inspired me.😞
Comment is about Wisdom (blog)
Original item by AirlogRigsMaria
~on “song to the stars” - Good day Rolph David! Your review is quite a wonderful work of reflective exposition. I am truly privileged and honoured. And it touches me so much that I am spurred on to read this poem through another’s eyes and find adjacent meaning in my mind’s own iteration. Thank you so much 🙏🏻🕊🌷🌷🌷
Comment is about Rolph David (poet profile)
Original item by Rolph David
Neill Barnard
Mon 14th Apr 2025 14:52
Apologies for those who don't speak Afrikaans, this poem is very personal and had to be written in my native tongue
Comment is about ñ Pa se liefde vir sy seun (blog)
Original item by Neill Barnard