Hi Keith,
Thanks for your comment, always means a little more than a like to me so I appreciate it.
I used to live on coffee 3 a day in my teenage years but switched off it in early 20s and am now a herbal tea/water fan. Every one has something they rely on to stimulate them whether healthy or not, it's just a case of moderation and context I suppose. I'll stick to music, TV and films for my sedentary stimulation and don't think I'll return to coffee anytime soon lol.
Thanks,
Rich.
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I appreciate your spontaneous liking, David, thank you.
Bethany
Comment is about Against the background of a Winter Sky (blog)
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😂 Been there Mike, read the highway code book, worn the earholed cotton wool, seen the perfect dashcam film and so has Mum-but no change with the huff and the puff and I'll blow the house of your driving skills down 😂
Comment is about Store Drive (blog)
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Don't tempt fate Mr. Stolgard!
Thank you, Tom, Hugh, Stephen Gospage, Stephen Atkinson, Aisha, Holden, Manish, Tim, rob, Leon, Evan
very very much!
Bethany
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Thanks for the link up plenty of podcasts to select.
Listened to your show yesterday Ruth it sounded like Grant, Andy N and yourself had a great time doing it.
😂😅😁😃😄
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Thanks for all your likes
Manish
Hugh
Holden
Stephen G
Aisha
and
Auracle.
Comment is about Getting in the Right Frame of Mind (blog)
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It's a very nice post Rasa! Lovely audio 🌷
Greetings back from the Netherlands!
Comment is about The Magic in Mundane (blog)
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that's certainly a beautiful description
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Thanks for likes Graham & Aisha 👍
Comment is about Pain Is Pleasure (blog)
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great chill-out piece of escapism until that is more than an ill wind blows in from Russia-😱
Comment is about Dreamcloud drifter (blog)
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I'll raise a glass to that Graham ( apart from Metallica 😉 )
7 likers=7 thank you's
Comment is about CLASSICAL WATER MUSIC (blog)
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Thanks Tom ( Classical water music )
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Hello Rich,
Coffee has always intrigued me, especially those who find it an essential morning drink. Many claim it to be a stimulant, but I am unimpressed and find that this beverage has little effect on me. I drink tea in the morning and during the day but would often prefer water, a glass of wine or a fruit juice. I would be interested to know the effect of coffee on you personally. A thought provoking poem.
Thanks,
Keith
Comment is about Coffee the face (blog)
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An event which is physically manifest in our bodies, marking those born before and after its occurance. In reality it was the test dates in the desert which are detectable in the bodies of those living at the time and thereafter.
Thank fuck all those thousands died that we might live in peace eh, because that worked.
David
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Thanks for the overnight oats to those who sent them.
Just to expand a little on your comment Landi (or my response to it) carlin later distanced himself from his own offerings of solutions by saying in later life that he regarded himself as an observer and recorder of humanity, tbh I think this was a strategic (if honest) attempt on his part to maintain the validity his earlier work. I understand his action and he was a huge voice.
The truth is any artist who truly believes they can impact directly on atrocity might be a little off kilter. What is said may well influence people's positions and their thinking but it won't do much with immediate impact on those suffering violence or abuse or even damage to the planet. That said the slow shift is vital. I am a cynic but do acknowledge cynicism can be a very negative force which on occasion stifles action which could be beneficial to situations requiring more than a shrug of the shoulders.
Balance in everything I guess.
David
PS...Some comics deliver/delivered their comedy poetically, Lenny Bruce, Carlin (a student of Bruce) I would even venture to say Stewart Lee who is probably unknown in the US...and definitely Alexei Sayle.
Comment is about De-Compose (blog)
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Extremely relatable on many levels, it also made me chuckle. I really enjoyed this. Thank you Mike
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Thank you for liking my work Holden, I really appreciate it.
Thank you
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Lol landi,
I wouldn't argue with George Carlin, the man was a genius.
Thanks for popping by.
David.
Comment is about De-Compose (blog)
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Thank you so much Helene. I agree, writing is a therapy for me as well. It has been helping me with quite a bit. I appreciate the kind words, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you
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"..a lot of comedians I hear, when they complain about stuff they seem to imply that everything could be alright if we just do this or just do that. I don't care. It's never gonna work--if you think there's a solution, then you're part of the problem. That's what I believe..."
--George Carlin, Late Night With Conan O'Brien, Airdate March 20, 1996
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Thanks a lot Tim and Stephen for your most generous comments, it means a lot to me.😊
Comment is about A Coachman's Lament (blog)
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Keep writing Evan! I am 69 years old and writing has been a life-long therapy for me. Getting thoughts, emotions, and observations on the page somehow lifts me up and helps me transcend all the trials and tribulations we face. Love the lines "Talk to the loner. The one that speaks the least has likely observed the most. Eat at that dirty restaurant, the one that has old rings from past patrons resting their drinks on the splashed, soapy, unclean tabletop." Puts the reader right at the scene. Awesome writing!
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Thanks for the comments, Graham, and Leon, and for the Likes, Steve, Stephen, Tom, Hugh, Manish, and Holden. It means something special to me, to be part of a community arts project in Northumberland!
Comment is about Puffins at Coquet Island (blog)
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The best water music there is! Leon wonderful
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Hi Stephen - Thanks for positive feedback 👍
Thanks for likes - Stephen & Holden 👍
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Thank you Stephen en offcourse Holden. Love.
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Reminds me
of my visits to Penmon point Anglesey ( boat trips to Puffin Island )
Comment is about Puffins at Coquet Island (blog)
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People could be forgiven for tiring of angry poetry, I believe they should be. I used to enjoy my angry writing, these days I do not harvest much enjoyment from it because it is as tiring to write as it possibly is to read.
Also angry poetry does not do much by way of bridge building, it serves to voice an opinion and probably reinforces division more than narrowing the gulf. That said it can consolidate solidarity among the like minded.
Bitterness is another perception that anger might portray, this is unfortunate because it is not always the case. I have repeated often John Lydon's chant "anger is an energy" of course it is true, and anger can be harvested for good if manipulated very carefully. Mostly anger is an individual vent utilised to disipate something often damaging to the person venting.
Anger in poetry is a little like using shock tactics for attention, both can become tedious and will turn some readers off...quite often it leaves the author preaching to the choir, what's the point of that?
The alternative to shock and anger can be honesty delivered in a calm mediating manner. The down side of honesty and calm reasoning is that it can lose peoples attention very quickly, it is also in most cases a more convoluted process which many people are unwilling to give their time to. It is not as comedically maliable as anger or shock as a delivery system. I often think the stand up comedian has the best of both worlds in this regard, in one moment he/she can shock and rant in the next he can explain his rationale...short poetic verse is a difficult process by which to convey those emotions simultaneously, leaving the author exposed to accusations of irrational/misplaced anger or purile shock tactics. Of course there are those accomplished writers who have achieved such heights in ability, very few though and certainly none who are new to the art form that I know of.
My apologies for this extended comment, I thought it might be useful to share my own awareness of the limitations (on occasion) of some of the forms/vehicles of expression I use. Also that it doesn't exclusively please me or fill me with feelings of satisfaction.
David.
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Interesting to note that ten years they've called you back Greg.
Looking forward to many more coastal poems perhaps?
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such a profound and generous comment BS ( and many more gallery fillers of the same standard to come I can assure you ) 👍
ALL liking lads I salute you 👍 X 6
Comment is about In our lost curved ball world (blog)
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There's real feeling and meaning here, Tim. Excellent poem.
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Excellent, Tom. The audio is really well done.
Comment is about Pain Is Pleasure (blog)
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Many thanks to Allan Sutherland of Amble Writers for including this poem in his imaginative and collaborative arts project 36 Views of Coquet Island. I wrote it more than 10 years ago, after a family holiday in Northumberland, when I never dreamed that I would eventually live up here
https://allansutherland.substack.com/p/7-to-12-36-views-of-coquet-island
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Thanks, Stephen & Tom for the encouragement & support. Glad you liked it! 😊
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Great read, as SA said, love the flow
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You're welcome. I like it so much I downloaded it.
Comment is about Pain Is Pleasure (blog)
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so much like my life *chuckle*
Comment is about My fictional past (blog)
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I think it's quite epic.
If we've made it this far as humans, we surely must come up with solutions for the problems plaguing our planet.
And please don't feel guilty for meating and meat-eating. It's also the joy-of-living.
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Thanks for your feedback & comments Larisa, Bethany & Auracle 👍
Thanks for likes Manish & Hugh 👍
Comment is about Pain Is Pleasure (blog)
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Sat 20th Apr 2024 19:56
Very clever Manish. I like how you used the coachman to inject the present into the past as he thinks about his past.
Comment is about A Coachman's Lament (blog)
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Thank you beth, food for thought indeed. Thanks everybody! Special thanks to Holden!
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Yes, there are plenty of good people beneath dodgy flags.
Thanks for reading, comments and likes folks.
David
Comment is about You can kill some of the people some of the time but you can't kill all of the people all of the time (blog)
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Thank you so much Keith. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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There isn't any shortages of masterpieces in your minds gallery Leon-bravo!
Bethany
Comment is about In our lost curved ball world (blog)
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keith jeffries
Mon 22nd Apr 2024 15:11
A definite termination. I loved the wording and the ending.
Thanks for this,
Keith
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