<Deleted User> (17847)
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 21:23
Great poem Martin! Ava Gardener, now there IS a honey if ever I saw one-yum yum!?
L.S,
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 17:47
Thank you for the like!
A
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Nicola Beckett
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 17:37
So many gifts where delivered to me today from my friends at church x
Comment is about Cancer (blog)
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Hi Simon! Liked this one, better late than never! Loved the refrain.
Also' there's only one spirit to listen to, that's the beating of my heart.'
Deep sentiments expressed with an apparent lightness, but underneath that's not the message.
Jennifer
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Thanks Anna and Martin! Glad it meant something to you.Jennifer
Comment is about A visit to Vulcan (blog)
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<Deleted User> (24283)
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 16:43
All the best for your book. ?
Comment is about Adam and Selina Part.1 (poetic story) (blog)
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Po, as always my friend your opinion always means alot to me. I just wish to express myself to those who can relate and encourage. This is what were here for!
Moon.girl, I'm actually in the process of writing my own book lOl and this piece entails both reality and imagination.
Express with your heart, your lips don't need to speak ?
Comment is about Adam and Selina Part.1 (poetic story) (blog)
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:49
I can visualize this though I've never been eye level with a horse, lol.
Lovely!
A
Comment is about A visit to Vulcan (blog)
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:45
Agreed. Stupid and dangerous and unsightly.
What do you think of crocs?
A
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:44
He's lucky to have you as a partner.
You are a good sort.
A
Comment is about SECOND CHANCE (blog)
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:40
Wow. We all need this too.
A
Comment is about The unchosen path (blog)
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:38
I needed this. In fact we all do.
You're a darned good read, ya know that?
A
Comment is about Bully the week (blog)
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:37
This is worth a second read. And a third. And a fourth.
Brilliant.
Comment is about Every picture (blog)
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:35
Traumas don't die out, do they?
Punch their lights out. But don't let it consume you. Go out and just sit on the grass somewhere and watch the flowers, the trees and feel the grass.
Let it go. You've forgiven yourself.
A
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:32
I know many girls like this. I could be one myself. Maybe I haven't found the right bloke yet.
Lovely.
A
Comment is about Don't call me honey (blog)
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:29
Thank you Martin! I appreciate your comments and your interest in my work.
Much gratitude,
A
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<Deleted User> (24283)
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:27
Such a lovely cat, beautiful yellow eyes.
I can only smile at this write. Really an innocent killer cat....muaaaah?
Comment is about We Never Suspected A Thing (blog)
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I think your gut instinct of writing it down and putting it out there is right Cynthia. A marvellous poem.
Keep safe my friend
Martin
Comment is about SECOND CHANCE (blog)
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I totally agree with you Bob with this. The arts council has just started up again in this country looking to give money to what as seen as a worthy artistic cause.
Nice one
Comment is about Young Musicians (blog)
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thanks for the 'likes' and the kind comments
I think you're all right about bringing back memories - for me it was part of the furniture that reminds me of home - funnily enough not really about music - more a piece of furniture
I appreciate you all taking the time to comments
Ian
Comment is about You Could Own An Upright Piano (blog)
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Hey Ray I love the juxtaposition her of horror laced with a degree of humour in your delivery.
Nice one mate
Comment is about THE GARDEN OF Dr. MOREAU (blog)
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some interesting and significant observations M.C.
Comment is about RIGHT ON OSCAR! (blog)
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Well said Hazel. Its always a joy to see you posting.
Nice one
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We had an upright piano for a while so that my kids could learn to play. But they soon got distracted by other things and so it just became a dumping ground for all our stuff.
Great poem Ian which I think will evoke numerous memories for any number of folk
Hope you are keeping safe
Nice one mate
Comment is about You Could Own An Upright Piano (blog)
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A condemnation of the consumer world in microcosm and its temptations of mock sophistication. Nice work Martin. The rise and fall of the powder compact !
Ray
Comment is about Don't call me honey (blog)
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Thank you Po, not looking for comments and likes, just hoping some would get to the end and see my wish not to offend! ?
Unfortunately the more I read others work, the less confident I seem to become. If my writing does not offend I will continue to post and try to do.
Comment is about Attempting Poetry (blog)
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What a fabulous piece of poetry . I think this must be among your finest to date
Nice one
Comment is about A visit to Vulcan (blog)
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A fantastic gritty and truthful piece of poetry.
love it
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Thanks Nicola, Jennifer
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<Deleted User> (24283)
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 14:37
This is a lengthy poem....but one that keeps you glued till the end.
Aslam why don't you write novels and scripts. If it was a real conversation then your memory is too sharp. And if not, then your imagination is way too good. I think it could be half and half of both. And that's what make you a writer poet.
No matter what the end is....this is a thriller romance poem.?
Comment is about Adam and Selina Part.1 (poetic story) (blog)
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Thanks Leon, Poem, Stephen and Abdul for the likes, and Leon and Poem for the comments. Agree about horses being some of the most beautiful animals, and one can be very fond of ones which are not equine beauty queens or Mr. Universes! I spent hours working the bellows for the smith, as it is always fascinating to watch someone who is very good at his job.
Thanks again, Jennifer
Comment is about A visit to Vulcan (blog)
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simply a beautiful piece of poetry that flows along nicely.
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<Deleted User> (24283)
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 14:27
I totally agree with this piece. The education system needs overhauling.
Your child is the best. Every child is. I agree.
Comment is about Wake up teachers we are not all the same (blog)
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<Deleted User> (24283)
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 14:17
A powerful write, studded with brazen truth and reality. Most of us are oblivious, many are ignorant and many negligent but, reality cant be changed.
Change is inevitable so is death. We can choose former, for later will anyways approach us.
It's time to change our mindset, ourselves, our family, our locality......think local, it goes global.
Bravo!
Comment is about We have become a dead grandmother (blog)
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Thanks so much everyone x
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Anna
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 14:00
Love this! Just so spot on!
Comment is about Manspreader Ha-cha-cha-cha (blog)
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Moon.girl through weakness comes strength, but you're right. The eyes are the gates to your soul and the mental scars you have are where the light shines through ?. Thank you for your kind words and Po my mannnn
Comment is about Why does it terrify me so? (blog)
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Po
I'm right behind you in your urgent mission to change the course of the future direction of human nature.
Pax vobiscum my friend.
Comment is about No humans live here (blog)
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<Deleted User> (24283)
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 11:27
Bipolar personality....doesn't sound a defect in here.... what a combination of opposite qualities....I like this one....brief is the theme for today....hahaha
Good one Dean
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<Deleted User> (24283)
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 11:24
Welcome back home to WOL ...hehehe
You can write anything...personal sites can be publicised. You can leave a link on your profile too.
Thalia baby and calliope....holiday is over...get back to work...Alert .... Don is back.
Comment is about Where Have You Gone to Poet Don? (blog)
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I hope some WOL readers get through to the end.
Maybe I should have written my attempt with the ending at the beginning.
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Nicola Beckett
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 02:53
El pintor, you promise me chocolates you do not bring, but in your studio zone, I know you think of me..........
Comment is about The Muse's (blog)
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Nicola Beckett
Thu 2nd Jul 2020 02:20
Leon there's a girl who keeps screaming and shouting because herchildren have been taken from her, have you any idea what that feels like
Comment is about SECOND CHANCE (blog)
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<Deleted User> (17847)
Wed 1st Jul 2020 19:56
A beautiful poem about one of the most beautiful animals in the world
LS
Comment is about A visit to Vulcan (blog)
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Yesterday
Had a couple of flies in my kitchen,they were difficult to catch,
They inspired me to do some research and a plan I did hatch.
Comment is about Confessions of a fly (blog)
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Thanks are due to Dreazy, Rich and Po.
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john short
Fri 3rd Jul 2020 00:21
Yes, the monkeys are in charge of the zoo. Well a few months back the British public were given a chance to vote for sanity and common human decency but they decided to go with incompetence, lies and corruption.
Comment is about A well planned return (blog)
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