<Deleted User> (24803)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 07:39
Longings of a lovers heart. Sad but beautifully expressed. Relatable.
I hope you found your love back into your life.
Comment is about missing you (blog)
Original item by kartikeya
<Deleted User> (24803)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 07:35
"You could call me and flowers would bloom.
You would not see the trace of the ice,
You would not see the gloom and doom,
No more loneliness and life could be nice.".....nothing could surpass these words.
Loved it to bits and pieces. I kinda hold onto these love poems, gives a kind of satisfaction to my heart. May love thrive in abundance in every beautiful heart.
Comment is about You Could Call Me (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
<Deleted User> (24803)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 07:32
Beautifully written. A fair tribute to your loved one...what joy it gives to a longing heart, reading poetry about truest love.
Comment is about Only For You (blog)
Original item by alan barlow
<Deleted User> (24803)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 07:28
How pleasant one feels reading those remarkable days of history. Well captured and written. Memories, flashbacks, all overflowing during these new normals.
I enjoyed reading this.
Comment is about A dish served cold (blog)
Original item by Anthony Emmerson
<Deleted User> (24803)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 07:26
So like those old non pandemic days. I guess we must be missing those good old days.
It's the irony, a history being written.
How ungrateful can humans be, now we realize in pandemic days.
Comment is about Two poems for lost love (blog)
Original item by Anthony Emmerson
<Deleted User> (24803)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 07:12
thank you Po.
Comment is about Poisoned ivy (blog)
I really enjoyed this one. Thanks for posting . It was a lovely start to my day.
Comment is about A Pirate Named Clyde (blog)
Original item by Lisa C Bassignani
What a wonderful expression of words (your sample). !
Comment is about Emeka Collins (poet profile)
Original item by Emeka Collins
Brimming with hope and sincerity! A much needed reassurance in these dire times. Well written!
Comment is about I Am With You (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
Po, you are very encouraging. You have huge talent and to read your kind words is very uplifting for me. Thank you for your welcome.
Comment is about Shehariah (poet profile)
Original item by Shehariah
<Deleted User> (24803)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 05:08
thank you Shifa for reading and appreciating the poem.
Comment is about Poisoned ivy (blog)
<Deleted User> (24283)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 04:11
blessed in the arms of love....great write...made me smile....power to both of you, you both look simply great. true love does exists.?
Comment is about I Need You (blog)
Original item by Jared Harris
<Deleted User> (24283)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 04:08
sincerely written. a wise fool i mustn't say?
Comment is about YOU DON’T SEE ME (blog)
Original item by Maatla Mog
Shifa...I have no idea how to respond to that. I am humbled by your words. Thank you. I just write what is inside.
Comment is about Darkness, Farewell (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
Thank you so much, Shehariah for taking the time to review so many of my poems. Your kindness is unmatched!
Comment is about City Lights (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
Your poem, albeit concise, is packed with emotion. Perfect!
Comment is about Soul Songs (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
Shehariah, thank you for your uplifting words. You're really kind, and I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment is about What Lies Above And Below Us (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
I have read a lot of poems on this platform and I can confidently say that this is one of the finest pieces of work on this site. The melancholy and poignancy in this poem is astounding!
Keep writing!
Comment is about Darkness, Farewell (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
Thank you, Nicola stopping by. Afterlife to me is such a fascinating yet terrifying concept. I often catch myself fantasizing about paradise, but blissfully ignore the entire concept altogether once I begin to spiral down a cesspool of hellishly terrifying thoughts. Appreciate your input regardless! Your question can start some really healthy discussions.
Comment is about What Lies Above And Below Us (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
Thank you so much, Abdul and Shehariah for not only stopping by but leaving such wonderful comments to this poem also. Your remarks are always appreciated!
Thank you, D.W. Hamilton for leaving a like. Much appreciated!
Comment is about Can You Hear The Moon Sing At Night? (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
What depth! I really enjoyed this read. I love the line “existence is a potpourri of fragments that surround us beings.” You have wonderful talent and write brilliant poetry.
Comment is about What Lies Above And Below Us (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
Thank you so much, Shehariah for your kind comment!
Comment is about The Cost Of Your Hand (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
Oh wow! This is a beautiful poem. Beautifully written. Such vulnerability here!
Comment is about The Cost Of Your Hand (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
There is a child-like wonder to this poem that I really like. I can feel it in the words.
Comment is about Can You Hear The Moon Sing At Night? (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
I really like the picture of humanity you’ve painted here with your words.
“How many of us are truly living?
And how many merely breathing?”
Only the brave will answer these honestly.
Comment is about City Lights (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
I’m really glad I decided to do this. Thank you for the encouragement, Po.
Comment is about Darkness, Farewell (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
Sat 18th Jul 2020 00:08
I try to be creative
sometimes like Frankenstein
I create Monsters!
?
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Sorry for the delayed response ! Keith I know what you mean. Pretty revolting. Thanks for reading.
Thanks Brian , I seem to attract them in our garden, or something does!
Po and Stephen, thanks so much for liking.
Ray
Comment is about BLUEBOTTLE (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Nicola Beckett
Fri 17th Jul 2020 22:52
Ps does P. C MEAN politically correct or police constable, ps I still believe in the afterlife, read David Holts book Believe
Comment is about Chocolate Tree (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
Nicola Beckett
Fri 17th Jul 2020 22:49
Is it so wrong to believe in the afterlife, many do, Robins and white feathers etc, butterflies etc all signs
Comment is about What Lies Above And Below Us (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
Shifa _ just awesome. One to savour like a rich red wine. Gets better with every read.
Comment is about Can You Hear The Moon Sing At Night? (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
Leon, I'm beyond honored to have received a comment as beautiful as this. Whether or not I win an award is a different story altogether, but even if I do, it wouldn't matter as much as this.
Really made my day! Couldn't thank you enough.
Comment is about Can You Hear The Moon Sing At Night? (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
<Deleted User> (17847)
Fri 17th Jul 2020 19:24
Shifa! omg! I'm absolutely speechless at the quality and depth of sentiment in this fabulous piece of real poetry!
Methinks it won't be long before you receive poem of the week award
( surely! )
Hope you don't mind but I've ' saved ' this gem in one of my folders in order to read again and again and again and again! ?
but I will have to wash the green-ess out of my eyes each time ?!
L.S.
Comment is about Can You Hear The Moon Sing At Night? (blog)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
This poem was a slice of Paradise.
~M3RK
Comment is about My Safe Place (blog)
Original item by Maddie Wilson
Thank you for your kind comment!
Comment is about Shifa Maqba (poet profile)
Original item by Shifa Maqba
I put them in the Read Aloud app on my pc, unfortunately the pc can read and speak with more clarity than me. I especially struggled with this one as you quite rightly pointed out in your earlier comment.
Comment is about The Blue Tit (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thanks for the comments and likes, wasn’t sure how this on would read to others. I can’t read it out loud myself?
Comment is about The Blue Tit (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Bluesky, thank you for your kind words. I have lived a life of fear since I was a child. I allowed fear to rob me of so much over my lifetime. I’m now learning to suffer through fear to reach out for what fear has fought to keep away from me.
Po, that’s brilliant! I’m going to write that down and keep it posted at my desk.
Comment is about Drowning Pt. 1 (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
Bluesky, thank you for that. This is a reflection of what addiction did to my life and how my self-reliance left me shipwrecked. I was so hopeless and powerless in my addiction. Now I am finding hope again and strength again as the smoking flax of faith is once more rekindled.
Po, I am humbled by your words. I am also left quite speechless after reading your reply. I will take your advice. I am a novice and in my excitement I posted these last night. Thank you.
Comment is about Aftermath (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
I am writing from a lifetime of repressed emotion and living in the darkness of addiction and depression. Sobriety has given me the gift of being able to unlock these emotions and release this darkness through my writings.
Of all your replies so far, I appreciate this one most. I will take your advice. I have felt worthless and shameful for so long. I know that isn’t my home any more.
Comment is about Casualties of War (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
Po, I’m really appreciative of your feedback on these. I also really like your poetic responses. Good stuff!
There is a darkness I find within me that it has been my habit to retreat to. It’s a dead place that keeps me addicted and ashamed. It still has sway in my life. This writing is me deciding to live another way.
Comment is about Darkness, Farewell (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
"Tit for tat?" A neat piece of avian activity for our amusement.?
Comment is about The Blue Tit (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Ha-ha...inventive and amusing...a welcome combination at any time.
Comment is about Pandemic Poetry (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Po, thank you again. I really like “from a spark to a flame, from seed to aflame.” Very apropos.
I wrote this one while contemplating the road ahead of me. I am a recovering addict and alcoholic and have made quite a mess of my life.
Comment is about Fallow Ground (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
Ooer...M.R. James lives in these lines! Spooky.
Comment is about Arts Of Stone (blog)
Original item by simon lucan
Shifa, I really appreciate that. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Po, great pen name by the way, thanks. I appreciate the feedback.
I wrote this one after taking 21 Excedrine PMs. I just wanted to be numb.
Comment is about Flatline (blog)
Original item by Shehariah
Don - you're absolutely within your eagle-eyed right to call me to
grammatical account. This aberration was the result of declining
eyesight and a sticky/temperamental keyboard on my not-too reliable PC. I have now corrected it in chastened remorse. ?
Comment is about HUMOUR IS THE RUMOUR (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (24803)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 07:42
Larisa this is beautiful. You have a heart and pen of a lover. It directly touches the softest zone of my heart. How beautifully expressed.
Comment is about Your Love (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska