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keith jeffries

Thu 15th Oct 2020 19:24

Why should we not be all things to all men? To understand and to accept different life styles and philosophies is to embrace humanity and not sit on the sidelines with concealed prejudices.

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keith jeffries

Thu 15th Oct 2020 19:22

Graham,

I have learned that acceptance is better than tolerance, which seems quite patronising. My brother in law once said that he and his wife tolerated my sexuality and I felt quite demeaned. I asked if he accepted me fully but no reply was forthcoming.

Keith

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 15th Oct 2020 18:41

Superb reflective piece of poetry. But, must admit, I quite like the sound of being a bit of ' celestial debris ' ...but I've always been easily pleased ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 15th Oct 2020 18:37

I must admit John, I've tried them luke warm with a bit jam on, and it's a bit of alright ?. But mainly it's on a Sunday's dinner filled wi' gravy!

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Shifa Maqba

Thu 15th Oct 2020 18:34

What an enchanting poem!

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John Coopey

Thu 15th Oct 2020 18:31

Stephen - As a heathen from Nottingham, my experience of my mam’s Yorkshire puddings encompassed having them with treacle on as a sweet.
My father-in-law likes them with raisins in.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 15th Oct 2020 18:27

I worked with a lad years ago who used to fill a cold Yorkshire pudding with clotted cream & blackcurrant jam...?
But what a delicious poem!

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John Coopey

Thu 15th Oct 2020 18:01

I gather you Devonistas do it “wrong-road-round”, MC.
And many thanks for the Like, Stephen.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 15th Oct 2020 17:48

Great poem, great lyrics, great song!

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 15th Oct 2020 17:40

thanks Ray - glad you liked it ?

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keith jeffries

Thu 15th Oct 2020 17:13

Trevor,

This is a masterpiece of poetry and I do not say this lightly. So well composed and full of deep thoughts. It merits more than any one reading and is a means of serious reflection.

Thank you indeed for this.
Keith

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 15th Oct 2020 17:12

Thank you John. Healing poems are my favorite to read and write!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Oct 2020 16:57

Seems like Nottcutts should change their name to match their
cutbacks! ?
Now for my own cup of Earl Grey and a slice of chocolate sponge
cake.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Oct 2020 16:52

Simple, forthright - and understood. Not least when we seem to be
increasingly under pressure to be "all things to all men".

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Oct 2020 16:40

Extenuating circumstances require extreme measures
If we are to continue experiencing earthly pleasures! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Oct 2020 16:34

Sardonically stimulating - I enjoyed this - with its lines that show
seductive Linda as essentially a down to earth sort when all is said
and done ! ?

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Greg Freeman

Thu 15th Oct 2020 14:29

I do think that maybe our generation had the best of it, Trevor. Avoided having to go to war, not bearing the brunt of the economic catastrophe that is Covid. Oddly, I've tried to delve deep into my father's experience of wartime, to experience vicariously what I escaped.

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kimberly

Thu 15th Oct 2020 14:26

Thank you so much, John. ??

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 15th Oct 2020 10:25

I read this piece with great interest and listing one's 'credentials' in this way is very illuminating. I'm not sure what place the pictures have in understanding the piece (I'm not a keen picture-adder enthusiast) but I like the clarity/brevity of this and wonder what would be on my list should I write one.

Much is said about diversity today and if the truth be told most of us 'tolerate' others' views/proclivities/religions etc as a form of acceptance.

This simple list is saying, 'this is me' take me or leave me. Honest, which I like.

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julie callaghan

Thu 15th Oct 2020 10:14

I think I need to take up skipping, thanks for the tip. ?

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Michael Triandam

Thu 15th Oct 2020 03:17

Hannibal Lecther would have enjoyed this one.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 15th Oct 2020 02:15

The Blue Grim but Good Band

Poetry we sing
madness mixed in
somewhat crazy lyrics
but in this
Collage magical song
disguised so well.

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keith jeffries

Thu 15th Oct 2020 01:53

John,

a profound and sincere declaration in this poem. Apart from having no daughters, because I am gay, I roughly fit the bill, but my soul is wounded at the photo of Alan Hennining. It fills me with horror and a sense of desolation. I love this poem because I am one who drinks, thinks and am simply human.

I thank you for this
keith

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JOHN F B TUCKER

Wed 14th Oct 2020 23:29

One of my university teachers (the renowned poet David Morley) said a poem should always zip back up to the title once you get to the bottom, and for me this poem of yours does that very well. ?

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John Coopey

Wed 14th Oct 2020 23:08

My Beezer Bantam did about 40, John.
Thanks for the TJ link. I had forgotten this song.

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Julian (Admin)

Wed 14th Oct 2020 22:52

hallelujah! Hold the front page! Best news since POTUS got ill.

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Emeka Collins

Wed 14th Oct 2020 20:26

Thank you @Stephen

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Emeka Collins

Wed 14th Oct 2020 20:19

Thank you so much Keith. We can't stop talking about this until things change.

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keith jeffries

Wed 14th Oct 2020 19:42

Emeka,

This is the best poem I have read in a long time. It is brilliant. The voice of the suffering silent majority in Africa who are exploited beyond belief. I salute you for this work of art.

Thank you
Keith

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JOHN F B TUCKER

Wed 14th Oct 2020 17:54

I like the positive healing energy in this poem, the determination to not succumb to a darkness, also the way the line lengths are so natural - they do not have to fit into a particular schematic or regime - which enhances that theme of being free in the natural world. Brilliant!

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Shifa Maqba

Wed 14th Oct 2020 17:40

Your poem captures the mood of this year perfectly. No matter what context or interpretation, it makes for a timeless read. Excellent job!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 14th Oct 2020 16:52

No objection.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 14th Oct 2020 16:49

This is a wonderful poem. Thanks.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 14th Oct 2020 16:46

Excellent poem. Love it.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 14th Oct 2020 16:12

Greg - I'm not a fan of a "freedom" that permits the sharing of
a potentially deadly disease but I've always favoured the sharing of
common sense. Thanks for the comment.
Brian - that's the fun of poetry. It's all about interpretation.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 14th Oct 2020 16:07

Neat! Like the famous song tells us -
"Unrequited love's a bore
And I've got it pretty bad..."

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 14th Oct 2020 15:45

Thanks for the kind comments and likes, everyone. I'm glad that you found this poem enjoyable. It was originally called 'The great taste of better people' but at the last minute I shortened the title. I suppose it depends what kind of taste we are talking about.

As you say, Tommy, not a case of Hobson's choice, although one wonders who these 'Better People' are and how long they will stay that way. And is it too late for us to join them? Do we want to?

More questions than answers, as usual.

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 14th Oct 2020 12:21

We're all misfits & outcasts to somebody Simon. But what a great poem !

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Isobel

Wed 14th Oct 2020 10:29

Well Julian and Greg - I'm pleased to advise that your reposting of this article has prompted us sisters to get together again and think about singing. In fact I'm in the process of penning our next masterpiece!

Health, wealth and Covid permitting, we'll see you again at Marsden in 2021!

Isobel ❤

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Tom

Wed 14th Oct 2020 10:29

I love this Tommy - and echo Tony's comments. You've got me thinking of something I want to write now...

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Tony Hill

Wed 14th Oct 2020 10:03

This is lovely in a very melancholic way. Tony

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 14th Oct 2020 08:53

Thank you Keith for your wonderful comment! The shackles are chaffing a bit at the moment!

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Shifa Maqba

Wed 14th Oct 2020 07:40

Abdul, it's always such an honor to have your remarks grace my comment section with their presence. Thank you!

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d.knape

Wed 14th Oct 2020 03:13

Si
to sigh
I will try
now goodbye!

?

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d.knape

Wed 14th Oct 2020 03:11

thanks.
the Gospage
according to Stephen!

well it sounded like that to me.

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d.knape

Wed 14th Oct 2020 03:10

thanks for your comments on
"when someone dies"
it put a lot into it
it took a lot out of me.

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keith jeffries

Wed 14th Oct 2020 02:55

A masterful poem which exudes power and passion. I love every word of it.

Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 14th Oct 2020 02:32

Abdul.

Thank you for your recent comment on one of my latest poems. I appreciate the time you spent reading it and forming your comment. May I may also say that I admire your work enormously and hope to see more of it. I respect and value your work. Continue writing and when the pen runs dry go to immediately to the ink well.
Best wishes
Keith

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John Coopey

Tue 13th Oct 2020 21:37

Unusual and excellent.

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John Coopey

Tue 13th Oct 2020 21:32

Indeed, Stephen. Let’s hope we never have to find out.

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