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The Allied Forces War Cemetery - Italy - 25th April 2021

Seemingly so peaceful a place

with birdsong, birches, and smooth green lawns

verdant with the lake of tears past shed.

But what agonizing long gone secrets

lie hidden below those ramrod white stones?

Lonely deaths in a field, under a hedge, along a dusty road,

seeking animal-like a quiet hidden place undisturbed

to draw that now welcome last breath.

 

So young, so many lives unlived,

seventeen, eighteen, nineteen, rarely over 30.

Pilot, radio operator, gunner

shot down in their silver bird high overhead.

From the heathered moors of Northern Highlands

with skirling pipes, St. Andrew's Crosses, Stag's Heads,

or Kukri wielding, tough wiry goldskinned men

from the eternal snows of Deodar heights.

From Waltzing Matilda lands and Kiwi haunts,

from frozen icebound Scarlet maple nation.

Elegant bloodcoated Guardsmen, Punjabis, Marathas,

a once romantic Skinner's Horseman from crinoline times.

A Russian Commissar sent to organize Resistance

in hope of future sinister developments.

Six pointed star of a 'future composer' mourned as such by family,

another young Mozart's life cut short, perhaps?

 

How many different Gods urgently, despairingly invoked,

implored for a final, merciful end to suffering,

in the filthy, stinking,clinging mud and blood

spread in the once lovely, greygreen, sunlit olive groves?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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John Coopey

Tue 20th Jul 2021 18:32

Very poignant, Jennifer.
I used to be Verger at Selby Abbey and it was a source of pride to me that for Remembrance Sunday the Abbey offered poppy crucifixes not just in the shape of a cross but as Stars of David, and with Muslim, Hindi and Sikh inscriptions,

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jennifer Malden

Fri 9th Jul 2021 17:20

Thanks Elizabeth, Abdul, Holden B renda and M.C. for the likes, and MC for the comment. Unfortunately so many young lives are still being lost in conflicts which will be forgotten again.

Jennifer

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 8th Jul 2021 12:45

A poem of poignant power. "Ramrod white stones" - so
evocative and right! The rest marches on to pull us along
through a journey that tells of so many lost young lives and
half-forgotten conflicts. US Union Army General Sherman said
"War is all hell" - and these lines remind of that reality in the most
personal way.

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