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John Botterill

Thu 17th Mar 2022 16:59

Thanks, Kimberley, so much for the way you've engaged with my poem!
I suppose we must be willing victims, where the song says something specificclly to us and we connect it our own reality. Delusional, then! 😂

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kimberly

Thu 17th Mar 2022 16:42

Oh, I enjoyed this and had a good laugh as I’ve just written a poem about a lover sending a love song. We certainly do get wrapped up in love songs as they build up the emotions, and warrant us to escape from reality. In fact it becomes a delusional reality, so do we blame the love songs or the harsh reality of life?

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 17th Mar 2022 15:22

Never lost for words. Forgive my own wry smile on that subject..

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 17th Mar 2022 15:17

A saying from many years ago (like certain other truths they do last) is that it isn't possible to reason with a person who lacks
reason. The subversive tone of this symphony also lasts and
gives hope when reason fails. (But I'll stick with his 5th - thanks.)

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 17th Mar 2022 14:34

Ah! very clever. I saw what you did there. Come to think of it, many of His Bob's work would fit in the current climate. 'Masters of War' comes to mind.

Nature knows no boundaries, a great line! And very true to boot. I planted a new asparagus bed this morning and felt good that it won't be ready for 4/5 years yet. I hope to enjoy at least one mouthful.

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John Botterill

Thu 17th Mar 2022 13:59

Thanks Holden for your really supportive comments! 😎 I suspect they are motivated by money rather than ethical considerations!!!!

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John Botterill

Thu 17th Mar 2022 12:56

Fascinating. I love the description of the music and the haunting link to current events. Have we really moved very far forward? Fine poem Stephen.

I used to ask classes 'Who wrote Beethoven' s Last Symphony'?
The answer was never Beethoven! 😂

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 17th Mar 2022 12:53

A really enjoyable poem, John, and it makes many excellent points! 😎 Indeed, the "morality of love songs" probably ought to be questioned! 😄

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John Botterill

Thu 17th Mar 2022 12:44

I have spent my entire life on this metaphorical M24 😊 Fine poem Ray!

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John Botterill

Thu 17th Mar 2022 10:48

Very wise. Stephen. A thought-provoking poem
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John F Keane

Thu 17th Mar 2022 10:14

The sea is perennial poetic inspiration.

Great onomatopoeia in this one.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 17th Mar 2022 10:11

You're right, Julie, heartwarming and more heartbreak in equal measure. But love and good luck to this lovely family. Remembering the husband's hunger strike. We really needed this news.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 17th Mar 2022 10:09

Sorry I haven't got round to commenting on this poem before now, Tom. Wonderful settings and details - "I’ve got a skull full of sea /
and the sting of that thing, it lingers / squid ink ..." - Thinking about the end of the world, near the top of the world.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 17th Mar 2022 09:41

Thanks very much for your comments, John. For those who read this interview yesterday, just to say that we've now added a sound file of Antony's lyrical and very moving recent poem 'If the end comes ...'. You can find it below the interview.

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John F Keane

Thu 17th Mar 2022 09:31

Great questions and answers. Poetry or discourse won't change a thing of course but dialogue matters, anyway.

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Tom

Thu 17th Mar 2022 09:25

I love this Olivia, I can picture it so clearly.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 17th Mar 2022 01:15

This ghost of bad memories
chasing demons keep hold
pray hard fight back
he will help your strong faith.

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Tom

Wed 16th Mar 2022 23:33

Thanks Stephen, Jordyn, Kim and Holden. This one is massively overwrought, but that's kind of the point and fitting for this particular protagonist 😃 Thanks for reading.

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raypool

Wed 16th Mar 2022 23:06

Thanks for the observation Mark. I would agree that the burgeoning of the motorway network was a commercially inspired decision with the colossal run down of the railway system. With the benefit of hindsight..... !

That's interesting Stephen, I had no idea. Sounds rather different from the German autobahn case.

Ray

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Sunshine

Wed 16th Mar 2022 22:28

M.C that's the crux of the story. There's always someone bigger and mightier than the tyrant 💪

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Sunshine

Wed 16th Mar 2022 22:26

Only prayers can do this miracle.💐

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Sunshine

Wed 16th Mar 2022 22:25

So true Nigel. Thank you💐

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Sunshine

Wed 16th Mar 2022 22:24

Thank you Stephen and Nigel💐

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John Botterill

Wed 16th Mar 2022 19:33

You sound like an expert. Poet and gardener! Impressive! 😀

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Mar 2022 18:02

That’s a relief!
And thanks for theLikes, John and Holden.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 16th Mar 2022 17:45

But a convenient one, I guess.

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Mar 2022 17:32

It’s a bit of a dump, Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 16th Mar 2022 17:30

Some years ago, my adopted home of Belgium was well known for building roads which finished abruptly in the middle of nowhere, when the budget ran out or the road crossed into another region which was not willing to pay for it. Literally, roads to nowhere.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 16th Mar 2022 17:23

A tough read, Russell, but I admire the writing.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 16th Mar 2022 17:01

I should check for leaks, John.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 16th Mar 2022 16:57

Nice one, Ray. Someone once said to me; 'I'm an enthusiastic gardener, when I feel like it.' Keep at it!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 16th Mar 2022 16:46

Thanks for the likes, John, Holden, New Shoes and Reggie's Ghost.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 16th Mar 2022 15:43

These roads to hell are invariably paved with political intentions!

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 16th Mar 2022 15:38

Thanks SG. I tend to agree with you. The job is hardly geared
to making decisions that are rigid and consistent across the board. Indeed, the words "yes" and "no" are fraught with risk
when uttered by those in positions of influence in that line of work,. And it's a necessity to know the dissembling and deceit
that exists in life. not least when ambition and power exist in
all their unappealing varieties. Harking back to my own old line
of work, it helps to think like a crook when dealing with a crook!! 😌

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Mar 2022 13:50

Vraiment, Telboy.

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Telboy

Wed 16th Mar 2022 12:47

Shades of Clochmerle😀

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 16th Mar 2022 12:37

Don't we know it Ray!
These last couple of days have been nice and warm here and we have made a good start tidying and waking the soil up. The garden beasts haven't properly woken up yet it seems.
No matter what tribulations the garden brings there is always that time in the evening when a glass of wine in hand one can survey one's little plot of the earth and say 'I did that'.

snails and slugs await in the trugs........priceless!

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julie callaghan

Wed 16th Mar 2022 12:17

Thank you Greg. Trying to look for the positive stories. So many people doing brave and selfless work.

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julie callaghan

Wed 16th Mar 2022 12:16

Thanks for the likes.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 16th Mar 2022 12:10

Wonderful details in this, Olivia. Very enjoyable poem.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 16th Mar 2022 12:08

Keep up your good work, Julie!

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raypool

Wed 16th Mar 2022 11:13

Thanks for reading and liking Russell, Holden and Stephen !

Thanks Greg much appreciated. Bonkers of course but my speciality to chime with much of the world we live in. I read today that some years back there was a proposed route to be known as the M31 which was partially built as the A329M to link the M3 and M4 as that does now, Where will it all end?

Stephen, I remember that spur. That reminds me of a toll road from the M6 to avoid a long detour near the M42. I'm utterly confused now.

Ray

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Jimakos

Wed 16th Mar 2022 11:00

Thank you for giving me a taste of home.

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Tom Harding

Wed 16th Mar 2022 09:39

Thanks for the likes and comments all.

I feel I couldn't get the last verse right, so I would welcome and constructive criticism or rewrites if anyone had any thoughts.

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Ghazala lari

Wed 16th Mar 2022 04:15

Thank you for your comment on my poem veiled🌷

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New Shoes

Wed 16th Mar 2022 03:45

sounds like your replacement holds promise!

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New Shoes

Wed 16th Mar 2022 03:29

The last three lines speak volumes. I believe there in, is where the mastery begins.

Thanks for your wises insights

Willow

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 16th Mar 2022 00:10

Thank you for the kind comment, Stephen, it genuinely means a lot! 😊

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John F Keane

Tue 15th Mar 2022 21:17

Yes, it's a great poem. He is the best UK poet writing today.

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John Botterill

Tue 15th Mar 2022 21:01

I loved your samples, Pamela, particularly fear which was extremely realistic and gripping. Great skill, I thought. Looking forward to your blogs! 😀

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