Marked Deck

In the circus of sentience, 

stumbling towards the provenance

of the primordial pain, 

a haunting in search of an origin, 

as a lunar manoeuvre 

marks the deck, so we can

play pretend, as we 

bevel and splice, that 

the trickster won't tinker 

with the dice, but will

shapeshift instead into 

a makeshift saviour, armed

with all the ancillary 

answers we'll simply 

have to deem first-rate,

just because they taste, 

for a moment, like escape. 

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 16th Mar 2022 00:10

Thank you for the kind comment, Stephen, it genuinely means a lot! 😊

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 15th Mar 2022 17:06

Impressively sustained from start to finish- a high-wire act.

Holden Moncrieff

Tue 15th Mar 2022 01:03

Thank you so much, John, I'm truly grateful for your kind words and encouragement! 😎

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John Botterill

Mon 14th Mar 2022 22:41

Wow. This is so clever, Holden. You weave together complex ideas and imagery brilliantly. I am in awe! 😎

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