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John Coopey

Fri 5th Nov 2021 08:37

Many thanks, Holden. And thanks for the Like, Jordyn and Aisha.

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Telboy

Fri 5th Nov 2021 08:07

It's a most unselfish act, to share your leaves with your neighbours.

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Telboy

Fri 5th Nov 2021 08:04

Is there nothing in her own country that gives her cause for concern? Why is she always picking on us?

And if she is determined to highlight things abroad, why not pick on the worst offenders first? Can't remember seeing her in China....

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 5th Nov 2021 01:06

Thank you so much, Stephen, your encouragement really means a lot! ?

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 5th Nov 2021 01:01

This is brilliant, John, vraiment magnifique! ?

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John Coopey

Fri 5th Nov 2021 00:04

Thankyou, Stephen G and Stephen A.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 4th Nov 2021 22:07

Sounds beautiful & beautifully captured in your words, Julie ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 4th Nov 2021 22:01

Le classic! ? V ???

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 4th Nov 2021 20:55

It should go down a storm there, John.
Steer clear of South Kensington though.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Nov 2021 18:29

Sheep to the shearer? ?
Kids? Think back to Shirley Temple and little Jackie Coogan etc.
and realise how they can be used by big business. Cynical...moi??

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John Coopey

Thu 4th Nov 2021 18:23

Leave it out, Stephen! It’s the only blow-job I can get these days!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Nov 2021 18:23

The simple humanity of the theme deserves a joyous welcome.
But why "For I will lit a candle for you" when "light" is the right
word for a present or future act of this sort? "Lit" is for a past act.

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John Coopey

Thu 4th Nov 2021 18:21

It is rather threatening for we old men to be lectured by a young girl, MC. Have you noticed that no-one says she has been wrong?

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John Coopey

Thu 4th Nov 2021 18:19

Thankyou, Stephen and MC. I hope to perform it at tonight’s Open Mic in Gaul. (Sorry, that’s Goole).

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Nov 2021 18:06

This really is top notch of its type. It reminds me of the song
sung by the late lamented Kenneth Williams who also used
the "language laughs" to memorable effect. But even his
song wasn't as comprehensively inspired as this material..
A cracker!

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 4th Nov 2021 17:21

A real tour de force, John. I once saw Gerard Depardieu in a film where he pursues Catherine Deneuve in a motorway service station while impersonating a chicken. Alors...

Gerard Depardieu, avec son grand nez
Et qui se prend pour un poulet.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 4th Nov 2021 17:03

A fine poem, Keith. I love the idea of nights out manouvering days.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 4th Nov 2021 16:59

Splendid, and I learn a lot.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 4th Nov 2021 16:52

Thanks for the likes, Stephen, Holden and Pete.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 4th Nov 2021 12:22

Thank you so much for the comments
Holden & Julie ?
Stephen, Tom & M.C. Wonderful comments from wonderful poets.
And, yes M.C. let's hope we never fully understand the horrors that so many have endured. Thanks again ??

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John Giordano

Thu 4th Nov 2021 12:10

Thank you (:

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John Coopey

Thu 4th Nov 2021 08:38

Thankyou, Jordyn for your kind thoughts. Branwell, too, for the Like.

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Thu 4th Nov 2021 02:32

As always, I enjoyed the read. This flows effortlessly while maintaining it's humor. Thank you!

-J

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Thu 4th Nov 2021 02:28

I love this piece. Thank you for sharing.

-J

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Greg Freeman

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 23:08

We have the garden room, Graham, but it's rather cold and wet and muddy down there at this time of the year! Thanks for your kind words, Ray.

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raypool

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 22:33

A real delight of lightly presented goodies, in a casual style that runs through much of your work and draws us in inimitably (or something like that!).

Ray

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Mike McPeek

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 19:01

Thank you Stephen. Always appreciate your comments.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 17:39

A very tender poem, Mike. Scattering ashes does provide some 'closure', whether one likes the word or not. I found it a very moving moment.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 16:48

Cheers, Stephen. If you leave it too long to revisit the past, it's hard to find your bearings. That's what we found!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 16:39

Thanks very much for the like, Julie.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 15:16

The succulent from Sainsbury's, brilliantly grounds this. I think she deserves one of those garden room studios Greg. Start saving up!

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 13:19

Thanks for the kind words SG. I suppose the lines represent a
reaction to much of what I see and hear via the various media
outlets nowadays.
And thanks, one and all, for the "likes".

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 13:09

Brutally powerful. I have a feeling that a certain WW1 poet
who wrote of the lowering of blinds would applaud this writing.
Bravery and cowardice...those two creations of circumstance...
will always linger, the thought of which can be as destructive
as any shell to the mind and body. I wonder if a lack of
imagination and a surfeit of it can create their existence at any given time in the confused hell that is war. Over the top one
moment....cowering, arms wrapped around heads, the next.
This is an admirable accomplishment about a horror-filled subject that only those who have experienced it can fully
understand.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 12:47

A very real depiction of what is can mean to lose control over
the motor that drive the moving parts and become like a vehicle
with a starter that tries vainly but can't move its host. A fate
none of us would ever wish to endure or see happen to others.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 12:42

Addiction: finding something you like and then liking it too much
to give it up. It can be positive or negative in the long term. The
trick is knowing the difference and dealing with it.

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John Coopey

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 11:48

You are easily pleased, Kevin!

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Tom

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 11:27

Fantastically written and incredibly moving. Great writing Stephen. I hope you're sharing it widely, this deserves to be read by many.

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Tom

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 11:21

Thanks for your lovely comment on Under The Old Whale Bones. I hope everything is good with you Jennifer. Cheers, Tom.

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kJ Walker

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 10:29

Paints a great picture of the nation's capital.

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kJ Walker

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 10:17

One of my favourites.

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keith jeffries

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 07:54

A quite remarkable poem, written from the heart and raw in its content. Many of us have succumbed to addictions and realise to our dismay the damage we do to ourselves. It can become an going tragedy. You have so well put it all together that any fellow sufferer can relate to what you say. I wish you well for the future.

This is one of the best poems I have read for some time.
Thank you for this

Keith

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John Coopey

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 17:46

I nail a dead cat to the door, Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 17:18

Thanks for the like, Kelvin. It was intended to be more of a general meditation on life and death, but, thinking about it, a funeral setting would be appropriate.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 17:15

Thank you for liking the poem, Kelvin, and for your comment.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 17:13

A superbly accomplished, moving poem, which becomes more profound with each verse. The rhymes are an integral part but the power of the language means that one hardly notices them.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 17:03

Thanks, Greg. A lovely poem. We used to roam a place called Bluebell Woods, near Rainham in Essex, and it occurs to me we never saw a single bluebell!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 16:58

Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 16:49

Good poem, John. Ever thought of trying water cannons?

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 16:46

I think you have captured the tolerant and welcoming side of London, Aisha. Very enjoyable.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 16:41

This is very good, MC. The finish is superb.

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