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keith jeffries

Tue 31st May 2022 00:31

Knowing and loving oneself is the way to wisdom.
Good poem
Thank you for this
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 30th May 2022 23:47

Maybe if BoJo joins the ranks of the ennobled, he can adopt the
motto "Deceiving is Believing". He has plenty of examples
from the past to turn to.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 30th May 2022 23:47

Thanks Stephen
A community in uttermost grief was told the police waited over an hour before moving in.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 30th May 2022 23:43

KT - glad to raise a smile. Life can be so serious sometimes!

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 23:32

John,
you excel your poetic skills when it comes to raw emotion, grief and loss. This poem was written by you but could be written for you. I was drawn to the line "No pair of humans can attend each other's funerals". A strange but true thought which had never occurred to me before I read this poem. Suicide has a devastation which other sudden deaths cannot compare with. It is often a loss which cannot be explained which adds to the sense of grief. Well crafted and straight from a broken heart.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 23:23

John,
A deeply moving poem that must have been heart wrenching to compose. It is filled with love and a profound sense of loss; the desire to turn back the clock and restore and explore the emotions you so avidly express. This poem took my breath away by its depth of feeling. Very well written, a gem in fact.
Thank you
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 22:01

This is a quality poem which must have required quite some thought. The imagery is incredible. I enjoyed this enormously. Thank you
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 21:58

Tantalising and full of imagery. " Do you smell as good as you look?" This line encapsulates the poem. Well written and well thought out.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 21:48

Clare,
This poem reminded me of my father who fought the Japanese during the Second World War. I was an immediate post war child and my father and mother steadfastly refused to talk about the war years and what they had experienced. I can so well relate to this as war bring personal tragedies as well as the wounded and the dead.
Thank you for this. A special poem indeed.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 21:43

Clyde,
This poem intrigues me as it generates a sadness all of its own. Somehow I think many readers will relate to this. It is quite beautiful.
Thank you
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 21:38

Mike,
I enjoyed this poem as the last line provoked memories of my mother organising tupperware parties in the 1950's or 60's. I have a vague recollection of pale green cups with a white interiors. They seemed to be plastic to me. However, thanks for this.
Keith

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Starfish

Mon 30th May 2022 20:18

Hear, hear!

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John Botterill

Mon 30th May 2022 19:50

Thanks Keith. Much appreciated 😀

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 18:31

You take the words out of my mouth John. Excellent poem.
Thank you
Keith

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John Botterill

Mon 30th May 2022 17:39

This speaks to me, Keith. I agree with the sentiment. It takes us longer to construct buildings and furniture with no aesthetic appeal.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 30th May 2022 17:31

Thankyou, Keith. Knowing a little about your background, your comment means a great deal to me. Yes, this is a tragic situation for so many.

And thanks to Frederick, Stephen, John and Julie for liking.

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 14:35

Stephen,
this poem trips along almost as a sing song which brings to life the theme of celebration. I too remember street parties with lurid memories of jellies and the dreaded blancmange. A treat nonethe less during a time of ratioing. I am of course referring to the Coronation of 1953 when I was five years old.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th May 2022 14:29

Stephen,
A very moving poem which speaks to us today as we see the suffering of war, a problem which plagues humanity. Those who are left, women and children are the most affected and this is a scar on their lives. Very well crafted and poignant.
Thank you
Keith

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John Coopey

Mon 30th May 2022 10:27

IndeedStephen. There is a James O’Brien clip on YouTube where he identifies Johnson’s strategy as “It’s too early to talk about it until the Met reports”. Then “it’s too early until the Gray report”.Then “ it’s too late now we’ve got the Gray report. It’s time to move on”

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 30th May 2022 08:53

Thank you, John. And thanks to Steve and Bethany for liking.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 30th May 2022 08:41

Thanks, Julie. I think I'll stay with kilos where I am!

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 30th May 2022 08:36

I think you have captured all the terror and confusion of this tragedy, Nigel.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 30th May 2022 08:28

Very good, John. The 'move on' mantra is becoming an all-purpose method of washing away the past. And if you pretend something didn't really happen, then you didn't really lie, I suppose.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 30th May 2022 00:51

Thanks for all your likes
Frederick
Holden
Stephen G
Stephen A
Rudyard
julie
John B
and
Your Royal Poetess.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 29th May 2022 21:43

JC - do remember that in this country government offered salutary condign punishment in exchange for the act of the
population in giving up their firearms back in the day when they
were .- and for countless years had been - lawfully held. Check
for example, old f/arms cunningly disguised in various ways..
But in typical deceitful political style, the protection of the law
has been steadily eroded down the years until it now merely
pays lip service to punishment and, instead, offers huge
satisfaction to the "we are all guilty" brigade who see no evil and hear no evil. let alone admit that evil actually exists! The,
US on the other hand, has a somewhat less gullible attitude to what is promised and rigorously defends their enshrined citizens rights., whatever the cost in sporadic albeit tragic individual terms. Their evolution was far quicker - and harsher
as a consequence - and they are prepared to pay its cost...from the
fight for independence through various
subsequent conflicts across its vast
continent in a relatively short period of history, always mindful of all the many sacrifices made along the way.

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Rick Varden

Sun 29th May 2022 18:04

Thank you Stephen. I originally wrote it as a childrens poem.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 29th May 2022 17:51

Thanks Stephen G, Holden and K.Lynn. See that now Trump is saying that the only solution is to arm the teachers!!!!!!! Am sure Far West schools in the 19th C weren't so dangerous, if they had them in some places.

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John Marks

Sun 29th May 2022 17:30

September’s Baccalaureate
A combination is
Of Crickets — Crows — and Retrospects
And a dissembling Breeze

That hints without assuming —
An Innuendo sear
That makes the Heart put up its Fun
And turn Philosopher.

Emily Dickinson

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John Marks

Sun 29th May 2022 17:25

Thank you sincerely Holden.

The summer ended. Day by day, and taking its time, the summer ended. The noises in the street began to change, diminish, voices became fewer, the music sparse. Daily, blocks and blocks of children were spirited away. Grownups retreated from the streets, into the houses. Adolescents moved from the sidewalk to the stoop to the hallway to the stairs, and rooftops were abandoned. Such trees as there were allowed their leaves to fall - they fell unnoticed - seeming to promise, not without bitterness, to endure another year. At night, from a distance, the parks and playgrounds seemed inhabited by fireflies, and the night came sooner, inched in closer, fell with a greater weight. The sound of the alarm clock conquered the sound of the tambourine, the houses put on their winter faces. The houses stared down a bitter landscape, seeming, not without bitterness, to have resolved to endure another year.

James Baldwin, Just Above My Head

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clyde McCulley

Sun 29th May 2022 16:03

Yes, the mystery continues! Perhaps she was going to see her lover, the groceryman.
Thanks for comment

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John Coopey

Sun 29th May 2022 12:45

Thankyou Bethany. You’d have to go a long way back to my early school reports to find anyone calling me “clever”. “Too clever by half” was what I think they wrote.
I agree with you, MC, about being “economical with the truth”. The point though is that he may have gone beyond that by actually lying. There is a difference!
And as for getting the broad brush strokes right and painting over his ethics, it’s up to us to care. If we don’t it shows what sort of society we are becoming. A sad departure from those standards our predecessors set.
And thanks for the Likes, Frederick, Stephen and Holden.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 29th May 2022 12:10

The post of Poet Laureate has not been without controversy.
Robert Browning is reported to have written "The Lost Leader"
in some anguish after William Wordsworth, formerly a radical,
had agreed to become Poet Laureate. But then poetry and the
term "precious" are hardly strangers at certain levels of the
written word.

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John Botterill

Sun 29th May 2022 12:10

Loved your comments Stephen and Bethany. Made me laugh out loud!!! 😂👍
Thanks for the like, Nigel.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 29th May 2022 11:27

I have long suspected that those entering politics approach the
job with built-in personality adjustments that adapt to suit the
situation and that today's variety merely reflect the fluid
morality that pervades public life today. Behind Bojo there's
someone else just as "flexible" - or as a certain senior civil
servant once observed in a famous case involving the government and its ministers - a readiness to be "economical
with the truth"! I think that as long as Bojo is successful with
the "broad strokes" of his office, he'll survive in a society that
itself has become very forgiving of all manner of social
solecisms and a marked decline of standards that used to be
taken for granted.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 29th May 2022 11:11

Glad you liked it Ruth.
😎

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Sun 29th May 2022 11:02

I most definitely fall in with the previous comments John


but don't phone me and I won't phone you 😁

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Sun 29th May 2022 10:52

yet another of Mr Coopey's constant clevernesses! 👍

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Nigel Astell

Sun 29th May 2022 10:26

Good will keep evil far away😈

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Nigel Astell

Sun 29th May 2022 10:24

Any thing sour is sweet at the start😍

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th May 2022 10:00

We are all becoming slaves to our phones, John. I recommend one with a dodgy battery and a slow charger, enforcing hours of non-use!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th May 2022 09:35

It is important to say this, Keith, in the name of humanity. Well done.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th May 2022 09:25

I think you sum it up perfectly, Jennifer. Twisted indeed.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th May 2022 09:20

A beautiful poem, Rick.

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John Botterill

Sun 29th May 2022 08:38

Thanks Carol. I'm a miserable old git, I know. 😊 Phones do want to take over your life though!!! Mine gives me unwarranted advice!

Thanks for the likes : Holden, Frederick and K. Lynn

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John Botterill

Sun 29th May 2022 07:49

Thanks Holden. Your comments mean a lot to me 😀

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Sun 29th May 2022 02:46

Life seemed a lot simpler before mobile phones, and yet they are also wonderful to have these days. But to become a slave to them is not good. You have penned an accurate portrayal indeed!

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Sun 29th May 2022 02:42

You've set a lovely scene Julie! Mmmm, we had a mini Magnum ice-cream last evening for dessert. 😋

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 29th May 2022 02:41

A wonderful poem, John, the beautiful relationship you have with your grandson always shines through! 😊

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Sun 29th May 2022 02:39

Interesting! Might have been both[?]

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 29th May 2022 02:06

A remarkably powerful poem, John, very evocative! 🌷

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