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kJ Walker

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 08:24

Loved this.
A couple of years ago we were getting up to four hedgehogs at a time coming into the garden.
Now we have new neighbours with tidy gardens, and we only get the odd one.
Still a joy to see.

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kJ Walker

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 08:16

It's childhood experiences... And your upbringing that mold you and make you the person you become.
I was brought up in a household where drink was always present.
I wouldn't say it did me no harm, but I wouldn't be who I am today if not for it.
I try to make a positive out of a negative.

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John Botterill

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 07:43

And it could have been dyed, Dean... πŸ˜‚

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K. Lynn

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 05:40

I try, Stephen, but most of the time I'm grumpy when I write. And when I try to be optimistic or write Three Good Things, I sound unbalanced. Maybe I'll try to write some lighthearted satire to see how that goes.

Thanks everyone, for reading.

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Sat 23rd Jul 2022 03:41

Wow! There's a gentle rocking within your words. I particularly like:
'A song in a minor key, a longing to be whole and free,
And to roll away the stone from me.'
Beautifully composed.

Comment is about The solitary rose of your breath (blog)

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John Botterill

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 03:41

Thanks so much for your lovely comments Nigel and Holden. 😊 It means a great deal to me. πŸ‘

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 02:47

A really heart-warming poem, John, and every line rings true! 😊

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 23rd Jul 2022 02:35

A truly beautiful poem, John, with an atmospheric, almost mystical quality to it! 🌷

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Nigel Astell

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 20:50

I always find time to read your poetry John.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 20:45

The older the lover
the harder to prove
better to stop now
before shame catches up.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 20:09

JC - I assume you refer to the "campaign" by family and friends of
eponymous East End blagger in the "George Davis is innocent,
OK" escapades - digging up and spreading oil on sacrosanct
test cricket pitches. He was released (but not pardoned) in 1976
and in 1978 was caught in the act by the Flying Squad when
another taking part in another "across the pavement" job near the BBC here in central London. There was a memorable press photo
of him being pinned face down on the pavement by his captors.
I don't recall the caption but it didn't include the words "innocent,
OK" πŸ˜ƒ

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 18:36

Aahh mankind! See if you can even it out with the good that we do... Not an easy task! 🌈

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 18:32

Food for thought. Brilliantly presented.

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 18:29

πŸ‘Š A powerful truth, Stephen. Absolutely sums it up. Brilliant stuff as usual

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John Coopey

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 18:08

I seem to think the previous year was a scorcher too; Vicar David at Lords, β€œFree George Harrison” at Headingley and all that.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 17:13

Thank you, Ray. Yes, it's true there is a chillier side to this. So many are in 'precarious' jobs which offer low wages and few prospects.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 17:13

Thanks for your comment, John!

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John Coopey

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 16:48

β€œJoey” by Bob Dylan charts the life and death of mobster Joey Gallo, MC, who also met his end in a restaurant.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 15:09

To those who took the trouble to "like" this contribution...I am
content to know that the taste in grim humour is shared. So,
welcome to the club! 😈

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 12:59

Thank you very much for the flattering comments John, John & Stephen! As encouraging as always! 🌈
And for those who read and liked 🌷🌷

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 10:54

Thanks for the comment, Ray. You had me check my yellowed
curling bit of newsprint dating from July 1978 and allowed me
to correct a slight misquote by me. See the amended last line.
Much obliged!. If the humour I experienced in the Met. back in
the day was a common feature of policing everywhere, those Brooklyn officers carrying the
stretcher would have enjoyed the connection. The cutting added
that it was said Galante had a hand in 50 murders! Cheers.

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Sunshine

Fri 22nd Jul 2022 05:09

Truly Nigel. Let love be the heart.

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John Marks

Thu 21st Jul 2022 23:26

Thanks Ray. As a musician and as a poet you will understand, better than I, the majesty of the lyricist who captures a moment in music and words.

And gentle winds and waters near, make music to the lonely ear.

Lord Byron

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ZTK Space

Thu 21st Jul 2022 22:44



I know every nuance of your beautiful face as you prempt every phrase upon piano.

I know your warbling understanding.

I know you're far, and very close.

I know that, I cry for every genius you are, every wit of keys you write.

and I cry, because I miss you.

worlds, transportatiojn pods, reversals and all manner of jelousy, will one day seek a magnitude upon those whom have delighted such use.

still, across so many spans, I cry, because I still love you.

xxx



x

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raypool

Thu 21st Jul 2022 21:43

Highly imaginative and ghastly in the imagery Nigel. I kept seeing Ray Winstone in You Sexy Beast.

Ray

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raypool

Thu 21st Jul 2022 21:40

I wince at the prospect of descending to the hoi polloi when I am one Greg. Well put together with a slip of poison to boot.

Ray

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raypool

Thu 21st Jul 2022 21:38

This left me breathless for more lines as you obviously have the knack Branwell. Very satisfying as a starter.

Ray

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raypool

Thu 21st Jul 2022 21:36

I guessed the ending of this early on as it is the same story I heard twenty years ago, but just as enjoyable, and easier to read than to listen to in a hot sweaty bar as I first heard it John!

Ray

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raypool

Thu 21st Jul 2022 21:28

A cutesy charming little piece Julie, happy families! Next door we have ducks, quails and chickens. Not too happy with the noises, but no such problems with your hedgehogs.

Ray

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raypool

Thu 21st Jul 2022 21:24

It's a bit of irony that other bosses have been bumped off outside restaurants , Paul Castellano for example in 1985. I enjoyed the story , I wonder if the photographer spotted it?

Ray

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raypool

Thu 21st Jul 2022 21:20

Although this is a lightweight piece, it has to me a darker background of insecurity and hopes dashed, and of course the straying of human nature. Good one Stephen.

Ray

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raypool

Thu 21st Jul 2022 21:17

Sensitive and lyrical with true originality John. A compelling poem. Like a soft spun seedhead of ideas.

Ray

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raypool

Thu 21st Jul 2022 21:10

Many thanks to Nigel, Frederick, Julie, Stephen, Holden and K.Lynn for liking the poem.

Thanks Stephen, I do like a bit of drama!

Tom, i'm so glad you picked that verse as I was so pleased it came to me as one phrase. Sometimes you just labour over an idea, but this - the heat of the moment.

Ray

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John Botterill

Thu 21st Jul 2022 19:35

Immensely powerful, Clare. A put down poem with great panache!

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John Botterill

Thu 21st Jul 2022 19:13

Lovely. Evocative of times gone by πŸ˜€

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 21st Jul 2022 17:01

So sad to hear this, JD. But your poem is a wonderful gift to her.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 21st Jul 2022 16:58

Thanks, Julie. Yes, I felt the need to lighten things up.

And thanks to Hugh, Frederick, Holden, Stephen and K Lynn.

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julie callaghan

Thu 21st Jul 2022 16:12

A lovely tribute. Sorry for your loss. Take care.

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keith jeffries

Thu 21st Jul 2022 14:10

The poet has written a lament and a tribute from a heart wreathed in sorrow. The tone of the poem is sincere and honest and the writer asks questions of himself. The last line reminds me of someone losing a partner after many years of marriage, in saying that a part of me has gone, never to be regained. Only memories can now be cherished.
Sorrow so very well described with beauty woven into each line and word.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 21st Jul 2022 13:58

A touching, heartfelt tribute, J.D.! 🌷

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 21st Jul 2022 13:42

I suppose being picked up by the Sunaks could be an even worse fate, John.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 21st Jul 2022 13:40

Oh, Hugh! What has 'Boris' ever done for you?

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Hugh

Thu 21st Jul 2022 10:36

Boris has defied gravity before and he remains the favourite of the British public and might be put on ballot to enter the premiership race.Plans are being made to force the Tory party to keep him in office.Watch this space.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 21st Jul 2022 09:49

So we're most likely to have a multi-millionaire on one side and a knight of the realm on the other!! God help us all!

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Hugh

Thu 21st Jul 2022 09:28

Rishi's increased taxes and his plot to bring down Boris ,voters have enraged.
Liz who is a doer,not obsessed with her image with voters has engaged.

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Red Brick Keshner

Thu 21st Jul 2022 06:14

Thanks John (Botterill) good to hear your thoughts on this. Cheers. πŸ‘

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 21st Jul 2022 01:40

Thank you so much, Stephen and John, for your thoughtful comments, they truly mean a lot to me! 😊

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Greg Freeman

Wed 20th Jul 2022 23:39

Family values?! She had an affair with a former Tory MP. But no, make her Tory leader. Fine with me.

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Martin Elder

Wed 20th Jul 2022 21:20

Thanks to everybody for the likes
Martin

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julie callaghan

Wed 20th Jul 2022 19:07

Thanks Stephen needed a reason to smile after listening to the news. 😁

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