Sketches in a minor key

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Her red-gold hair
on a stormy autumn day
along the borderland where
time fades away

Like the leafy-mist
which persists,
drifts along the hedge rows
on this late-summer morn

Emptily, curiously,
revealing a design hidden
in these swirls of hieroglyphics,

hidden in the wood-smoke
burning  our throats on a lost
once-upon-a-time damp autumn eve

I am afflicted by
the time-ridden-shapelessness
of missing-things:

a fleeting glance
passing over
something else that can not last.

visions hidden in a mind
aberrant, obsessed, selfishly kind
where wisps of cogitation coagulate
in the diffuse light
of my July birthdate.

 

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◄ Space-Time

Noli Timere ►

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John Marks

Thu 20th Jul 2023 23:19

Thanks to Hugh, Clare and Tom. Short names for large talents.

“Tell all the truth but tell it slant.”

Emily Dickenson

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John Marks

Tue 18th Jul 2023 22:56

Thanks Tom. As you know, your opinion means so much to me. "I hold this to be the highest task of a bond between two people: that each should stand guard over the solitude of the other."

Rainer Maria Rilke, Letters to a Young Poet

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Tom

Tue 18th Jul 2023 22:24

Fantastic John, I love this one. This part in particular was so pleasing:

"hidden in the wood-smoke
burning our throats on a lost
once-upon-a-time damp autumn eve"

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