Thank you, John. I think your last sentence rounds off the poem perfectly. I really appreciate your comment.
Comment is about Ceremony (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Beautifully written and immensly moving, Tommy.
Comment is about I saw you standing there (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
I really like lines 2-5 Stephen. I especially liked the drooling and pressing ones face against the glass. Life always seems to be happening somewhere else, doesn't it?
Comment is about Ceremony (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Fascinating poem, Holden. Thought provoking... and then some 😎
Comment is about Ship of Theseus (blog)
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Thu 28th Jul 2022 02:53
So sad John. Beautiful song...
Comment is about Loss has no end (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Thanks Nigel, Frederick, John C, John B, Holden, Stephen, Pete and K Lynn.
A little obtuse for me, I suppose. I added lines 2-5 after writing the poem. Not sure if it improves things, reading it again.
Thanks to everyone for reading and liking.
Comment is about Ceremony (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Quite often repetitive work doesn’t work but this is excellent writing Tommy. We’ll done!
Comment is about I saw you standing there (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Thank you kindly: Carol Congalton, John Botterill, and Stephen Gospage. Your encouraging words are much appreciated.
Comment is about be-lightedly (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Thanks Stephen. I get the feeling that I am not alone in buying cards for myself. Self love is the only genuine emotion. 😂
Thanks for the likes Julie and Tom 👍
Comment is about Happy Birthday... To Me! (blog)
Original item by John Botterill
Wed 27th Jul 2022 02:09
A beautiful, evocative poem, Pete! I loved the line "Castle walls calm and gnarled from the fight." 🌷
Comment is about Nimue (blog)
Original item by Edbreathe
I would have an advantage over other entrants, Stephen, what with me being practised in doggerel.
And thanks for the Like, Stephen and Julie and Holden.
Comment is about MAN! I FEEL LIKE A WOMAN. (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
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Tue 26th Jul 2022 23:26
Knock knock a four nil win,
Into the finals England are in.
Comment is about Knock, knock.who's there ? (blog)
Original item by hugh
Thank you Stephen and Ghazala for you comments they are appreciated. Yes Ghazala unfortunately it is normally women who go through control.
Comment is about Love Hate Relationship (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
Cheers, John. Don't give up on Crufts yet. I've heard they might be a bit short this year.
Comment is about MAN! I FEEL LIKE A WOMAN. (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Delicate and beautifully concise, Frederick.
Comment is about be-lightedly (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Thankyou, Stephen. There's nothing wrong with my kids self-identifying that they are 80 years old; but common sense debars them from getting a pension. There's nothing wrong with me self-identifying as a doberman pinscher; but common sense debars me from entering Crufts.
Comment is about MAN! I FEEL LIKE A WOMAN. (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
A perfect poem, Rick. Quite Larkinesque, at least in spirit!
Comment is about Love Hate Relationship (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
Very funny poem, John. The subject can be very traumatic on an individual level but a line has to be drawn somewhere.
Comment is about MAN! I FEEL LIKE A WOMAN. (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Very amusing poem, John. I know this feeling well!
Comment is about Happy Birthday... To Me! (blog)
Original item by John Botterill
Many of us can relate to this. Well penned.
Comment is about Love Hate Relationship (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
No bell......this is innovative.
An awesomely hilarious write. 👍
Comment is about Knock, knock.who's there ? (blog)
Original item by hugh
You’re far from the first person to laugh at my singing, MC.
And thanks for the Like, Frederick and Ghazala.
Comment is about MAN! I FEEL LIKE A WOMAN. (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Hi Isabel, I would like to read at Marsden on October, so please add me to contributors. My husband will be coming along too, just as a spectator/driver/encourager!!! (all vital roles!!!)
Thanks
Dorinda (MacDowell)
Comment is about 'Don’t go down to the Railway Inn with anyone else but us!': Write Out Loud's poetry jam returns to Marsden jazz festival venue (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Today I gaze into a restful night
one that brings another
moonlight dream of life
a new dawn takes me far far away
from the darkness of death.
Comment is about Tonight (blog)
Original item by Sunshine
Thanks for your likes
Frederick
Holden
Stephen A
Carol
K. Lynn
John B
Ghazala
Stephen G
Ruth
Tom
and
Your Royal Poetess.
Comment is about Lighten Up (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
One more chance - - - could make the difference
thanks Carol
Comment is about Lighten Up (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
How interesting. And to add to the fun, the name suggests a
modern pop group!!
Comment is about Sneezeweed (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
If I miss any Amazon deliveries it's now likely due to not hearing
the bell because I'm laughing so much. So...
I blame you JC
Whatever you choose to be
When it comes to identity
Described in your latest ditty!
Comment is about MAN! I FEEL LIKE A WOMAN. (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Fascinating how mothers always seem to see their sons of any age as little boys. is it any wonder the divorce rate is so high? 😏
Comment is about Happy Birthday... To Me! (blog)
Original item by John Botterill
Hi John, thanks for your perceptive comment ! A point at a time here goes. The piece was intended as a swipe at some of the laws we are taught that I could never come to terms with. So in that respect we have a common ground perhaps. The last stanza tried to do that, and the confusion was more or less built in .
The repetition of that line was a trick to reinforce the idea again of the obscure nature of some teaching and how useful life skills are really not covered , at least not when I went to school in the dark ages. The spelling of ladys was well spotted, slipped through the net, thanks. I wasn't quite clear on your point about accidents.
There is a whole other world within drawers and cupboards that could be expressed as you say. The stability of surfaces is a salient one, and reminds me of working on cruise ships in bad weather!
Ray
Comment is about THE LAW OF DISAPPEARING SURFACES (blog)
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Thanks Carol and Greg for your kind comments. It was easy to write. I just described what happened haha.
Thanks for the likes Stephen A, Frederick, Tom, K. Lynn and Holden.
Comment is about Happy Birthday... To Me! (blog)
Original item by John Botterill
That's a great poem, John! Comic take on a very poignant moment in life which many of us go through.
Comment is about Happy Birthday... To Me! (blog)
Original item by John Botterill
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Tue 26th Jul 2022 04:35
'Don't you think
Looking up deserves
One more chance - - -' ~ yes indeed!!!
Comment is about Lighten Up (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
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Tue 26th Jul 2022 04:33
Very good! Your words contain a lot of wisdom.
Comment is about be-lightedly (blog)
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Tue 26th Jul 2022 04:28
An interesting poem Stephen!
Comment is about The Chalice (blog)
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Tue 26th Jul 2022 00:57
Thank you so much, Stephen and Candice, for your wonderful comments, I truly appreciate them! 😊
Comment is about Keeping Time (blog)
Original item by Holden Moncrieff
The best words in the best order. For a moment
I saw a hint
Of conviviality
I just re-read your majesterial Cezanne poem. It gets better with every reading. Your visual imagination, and your ability to translate the subtle impressions of the three dimensions into words, are just superb.
Comment is about Silly Me. (blog)
Original item by Clare
He sure does. Quite a journey you see. Thanks for lighting the torch for me Nigel.
Comment is about Page 3. NLD (blog)
Original item by Sunshine
Definitely Nigel. By the grace of almighty alone. Thank you.
Comment is about Page 4. NLD (blog)
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Nigel Astell
Thu 28th Jul 2022 08:57
Thanks for your likes
Frederick
Holden
Stephen G
Stephen A
Ruth
John B
and
Your Royal Poetess.
Comment is about England You Have Done Us Proud (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell