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Mon 15th Aug 2011 18:58

The hairs stood up on the back of my neck when I read this Ray.
Well captured. Tom Mc.

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Anthony Emmerson

Mon 15th Aug 2011 18:49

"Shameless" literary exploitation of the non-working classes Ray. Wait until they suss out where you live! Made me come over all nostalgic for my northern roots. There, but for a brace of clogs . . . Enjoyed the read,

Regards,

A.E.

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Francine

Mon 15th Aug 2011 18:40

And I echo those sentiments as well, Kealan...
Lately you have delved to a deeper level of consciousness without so much anger, and it is powerful. I knew children like this too, and I have always had an affinity for them - to help in any way I could.

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Shirley Smothers

Mon 15th Aug 2011 18:39

Thank you for commenting on my haiku "Anger".
The scary part is that it describes me too well.

Thanks
Shirley

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Anthony Emmerson

Mon 15th Aug 2011 18:35

Hi Mark,

I liked the sentiments you express in this - especially:

"It’s about poet expressing a part of who they are."
"Thereby allowing you and me, an opportunity to see, Something that reveals to us a little more about... we."

Well put!

Regards,

A.E.

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Lisa Milligan

Mon 15th Aug 2011 18:34

Hi Isobel - I was reading what you wrote in your Biography and it struck me that poets wanting others to read their work may need to think about their target audience (the people on each poetry site) and tailor which pieces they post accordingly. Or just realize that some sites have like-minded people that just "don't get" what one has written. I've found that to be true since I've posted on more than one site. Where one group will celebrate you, another will almost ignore you. Ironic, yes?

"Just my thoughts for the day...."

Hope all is well,
Lisa

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Aug 2011 18:34

Hey Debs, Izzie, I'd be up for that!!

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Aug 2011 18:32

I found this very moving Kealan. I too think your recent work has been interesting and good!

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Neil Fawcett

Mon 15th Aug 2011 18:17

Thanks Ann.

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shoeless

Mon 15th Aug 2011 17:53

hello Scott, hope you are keeping well ,I really like this poem.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 15th Aug 2011 17:23

I am greatly concerned about those who were tipped out of their 'sensible heads' by the stimulus of 'mob mentality'- a once-off, terrible mistake, genuinely out-of-character. It happens.

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Lisa Milligan

Mon 15th Aug 2011 16:41

Thanks, Andy, for taking the time to read and comment on "Pink Tulips". If I had to guess, you probably don't think I need a stanza on "heart" AND "soul"....?

In any case, I appreciate what you had to say and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Lisa

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kealan coady

Mon 15th Aug 2011 16:28

there are reasons ray, the lower cases are not accidental

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Frances Spurrier

Mon 15th Aug 2011 16:26

Thanks for your contribution David and congratulations on your win. I'm certainly sending off for my copy right now.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 15th Aug 2011 16:21


Think I`ve `rumbled`it!

It`s a `sonorously vehicular`

Should Slvie Rose be read as `Sylvie Rosey`
(or did she touch the brakes?)

What a great `performer`!

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Ray Miller

Mon 15th Aug 2011 16:14

Call me old - fashioned but why capitalise the beginning of each line then fail to capitalise coady, lustral, ritalin?

"so he leapt" would rhyme with step.

It's "receded". I think to finish on "instead." would be neater.
Enjoyed the poem.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Aug 2011 16:02

More excellence from you Ray.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Aug 2011 15:57

Well it's gonna have to be Tuesdays or Fridays or Sundays. Tuesdays sound boring to me. Fridays sound more exciting! (Except to Harry of course!)

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 15th Aug 2011 15:54

Fridays tend not to be good nights for the pub/mechanics institutes and difficult to ge tpeople out for poetry because there are other distractions available; but, prove us wrong!
there is on other thing that is vitally important to the success of a night. Damned if I can remember what it is.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Aug 2011 15:24

You didn't use to be in the Boomtown Rats did you Harry? (Oh sorry - that was MONDAYS!);)

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 15th Aug 2011 15:21




just don`t like fridays...pay no noticeto me
....Julian`s told you all the essential stuff

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jan oskar hansen

Mon 15th Aug 2011 14:26

comment to Philip Fletcher.

I'm slightly older than you,
gave up selling my poetry years ago.
I have written about 23 collections over the years. yet, i have many readers on different sites on the net.

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jan oskar hansen

Mon 15th Aug 2011 14:21

there is much poetry about,
plenty of it is terrible.
Often a would be poet uses
an artificial language
and write constantly and without
humour about their suffering.
I only wish poets would write using the language they speak daily

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David J Costello

Mon 15th Aug 2011 13:45

I was fortunate to win this years competition and have already received my copy of the anthology. It's excelent. The production values are great and the range of poetry is astonishing. But I'm not posting this comment for any sort of self-publicity - I'm posting it because the future success of this prize rests, in part, on the sales of the anthology. There is NO external funding for this prize, it is funded purely from entry fees for the competition and sales of the anthology. No one is making a profit, in fact certain individuals frequently lose money. So why not be two things at once, a poet AND a philanthropist and, if you can afford it, buy a copy to support this prize? I'm sure Picador and Faber will be selling lots of books this week, but why not support genuinely good - but unpublicised - poets, and purchase a copy. After all it's keeping a quality prize going for the benefit of everyone who shares our passion for poetry!

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jane wilcock

Mon 15th Aug 2011 13:31

Hi kealan, I love this poem.

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Gus Jonsson

Mon 15th Aug 2011 12:04

luv it Scott... great!



....was offered a dozen ex riot Argos Catalogues in the pub last nght, very popular, people were fighting over them...


Hope to C U soon

Gus

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Gus Jonsson

Mon 15th Aug 2011 11:56

Hi Isobel

I HAVE a Jag....and I Have NOT got a problem with my pleasently cheeky rotundity.....

Chill... give us fat Kats a break!

Missya

Gus x

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Frances Spurrier

Mon 15th Aug 2011 11:46

Hi Anthony

Many thanks for your response. I entirely agree with what you say about freeing poetry from the page and the need to create a more general demand from the public. The money will only follow when that happens.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Aug 2011 10:51

Well that's something I suppose! ;)

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C Byrne

Mon 15th Aug 2011 09:50

i like the first and last lines!

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C Byrne

Mon 15th Aug 2011 09:32

Thanks for your comment Ann. Enjoyed your samples. Will check out the blogs too.

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Andy N

Mon 15th Aug 2011 08:10

great idea, kealan for a piece.. you really are cooking brilliantly with your pieces nowadays.. you just keep getting better! A

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Andy N

Mon 15th Aug 2011 08:09

excellent stuff, rach.. very skillfully done.. particularly like the last two stanzas but there is a slightness throughout the full piece that i really enjoy.. hope to see you end of the month x

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Aug 2011 06:47

I really enjoyed listening to this - thank you - a good start to my morning! Be nice to see your words.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 15th Aug 2011 06:42

What a romantic poem - and totally true of course! Mind you, I wouldn't want to be married to Alan Titmarsh!

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kath hewitt

Mon 15th Aug 2011 05:13

i like the idea of being a nightshade brunette, decorated in tempting red!! great poem :-)

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Indigo

Mon 15th Aug 2011 02:50

Just saw this on Facebook, looking forward to it.

It'll be my first poetry thing since I come back from America so I'm looking forward to it.

I'd be happy to get Ben to film if you like n_n

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Sun 14th Aug 2011 22:01

Ah! like the poem she will always be a beautiful memory.

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Lynn Dye

Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:57

Hi Larisa, thanks for missing me. I am fine, thanks, but been away from this site too long! I have missed you and some other lovely friends on here as well. Love, Lynn xx

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Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:54

This is a Cracking poem John. Did you know that
Ann Foxglove gave me credit for writing it. No such luck. but I told her it must have been some other trucker.
What-a Mistake-a to Make-a.
Blogs away. Tom Mc.

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Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:30


no thats fine by me Lynn
you pose a fair and sensible question.

ta chuck.

Stef.xx

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Lynn Dye

Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:27

Thanks for comments, Stef, you are so right about the real victims. I do not mean to excuse the rioters at all. Ta, Lynn xx

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Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:23


guess who again!

just to say
on the other hand
many of the rioters
would not change places with
a third world person who has to walk
thirty miles or more for water
and in most cases carrying a child as well

we should never forget those-real-victims.

thanks again Lynn-take care-Stef.xx

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Lynn Dye

Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:16

Hi John, thanks for your comment on Summer Seasons - I answered it on my page. x

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:15


ohhh too right Lynn.

the fat cats,
white collar criminals

those hardfaced B*****d,s
have a lot to answer for.

why dont they bring
them before the courts.
and not just one scapegoat either!

why because they close ranks too well!

grrrrr!

thanks girlie.

Stef.xx

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Sun 14th Aug 2011 21:09


love it Chris.

I bet you could have penned
the Lyrics to 'Aladdin sane.

but not sang them as good as Bowie-lol!

thanks mate.

Stef.

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C Byrne

Sun 14th Aug 2011 20:44

"With the joy-shimmer light in her eye and cropped flame for her hair" - lovely.

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Sun 14th Aug 2011 19:50


many thanks Lynn
for comments on
'f**k the blinkered.

am loving your change of writing style.

cool!

cheers love.

Stef.xx

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 14th Aug 2011 18:50



Sorry for the repeat...I thought I was editing the original and my mentor wasn`t here

my apologies

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 14th Aug 2011 17:33

Great tips guys! Why avoid Fridays? Too much else on?

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