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Beyond The Green Gate

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Curious heart filters any visible truth.
Unconditionally defies tradition.
 
I heard a masculine ring within your voice 
Radical beats circulate in swirling motions.
 
A jolt of  longing  unhooks the latch …
Reaches out beyond the gates of mere whim.
 
kept veiled behind a smile, a look.
Seeking courage to reveal this hidden need.
 
Wishing for a place I can know you
Skin glows with dewy blush tones,
 
Where glass bulbs are green
And all the lights turn on…
 

love

◄ No room for prisoners

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Philipos

Wed 17th Aug 2011 17:30

Great images in this promoting a gateway to a thousand thoughts.

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Andy N

Mon 15th Aug 2011 08:09

excellent stuff, rach.. very skillfully done.. particularly like the last two stanzas but there is a slightness throughout the full piece that i really enjoy.. hope to see you end of the month x

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