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M.C. Newberry

Sat 5th Oct 2013 17:03

JC - I hope your commitment rewards you in due
course - and that you "coin it" with any sale
of your collection in the future.
I used to collect stamps in the distant days of
Empire - with those brightly coloured scenes
to fill the pages from SO many different lands.
When he was with the Army in Germany, my brother brought back an immaculate loose-leaf
collection - between red leather covers - of
stamps depicting the Nazi days (many of Hitler
himself). I swopped it at school for something or other (as kids often do), but I sometimes
wonder about their value today. Or perhaps
they were like the Russian stamps...produced
in millions and of no real value to a proper collector? I'll never know.

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 16:58

Like this poem, and its truthfulness, very much.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 5th Oct 2013 16:53

The commitment in this evocation of brave days
is surely to be seen in the extraordinary
re-build of a Harrier jump jet by a Brit. in his
"back garden"...just reported online. It's another indication of a never-say-die state of mind that has no equal anywhere in the world.

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 16:44

"Quake South Island" is stunning and a privilege to read.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 5th Oct 2013 16:29

An interesting but inaccurate comment.
IRONY: Words used with inner meaning/in which
meaning is the opposite of that expressed.
(Collins Dictionary)
Pardon me - but I fail to see how the content
of this short "to the point" post can be placed in either category.
For myself, I have never resorted to insulting
language towards others, or deleted any
alternative point of view. To do so, IMHO, limits any serious attempt to address issues thought
important enough to express through the great
medium of poetry.

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 16:18

"When Thatcher Died" is brilliant work; thank you.

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 15:05

" Camellia" is a deeply beautiful work.

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 15:00

Love "curled like an idol moon".

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 14:51

" 3 D Printer" is wonderful.

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Mark Mr T Thompson

Sat 5th Oct 2013 14:38

Hahaha the irony

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 14:19

Love this vibrant poem, so humane.

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 00:58

Love this work.

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 00:32

Love this poem.

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Sat 5th Oct 2013 00:27

"Saltfish English" is marvelous. I loved this poem.

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Starfish

Fri 4th Oct 2013 21:22

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful read!! I too loved the reference to "their cardigans".

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Steve Smith

Fri 4th Oct 2013 19:04

Excellent comment in poetry!Well done!

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Simon Austin

Fri 4th Oct 2013 17:23

Quite right, thanks for the spot (and all the comments) :)

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Fri 4th Oct 2013 16:42

a beautiful nightmare:)

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David Blake

Fri 4th Oct 2013 15:47

Very much enjoyed this Ian, especially 'Rustling in their cardigans/of orange and amber'.

Agree with Harry about how 'screaming' it seems. If only trees could actually talk, eh?

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David Blake

Fri 4th Oct 2013 15:38

Thanks for your comment on 'Weather Crossword' Andy. I appreciate it. Cheers - David.

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 4th Oct 2013 15:33


I like the way this midway between poem and short gangster story like thing is so completely in charge of itself. And the way it makes you read it again to look for any clues as to whether it`s suicide or not.

The doubt about what the knock is for makes that last line dramatic.

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 4th Oct 2013 14:57


Ian,
I can`t remember ever reading of nature`s
decay being `humanised` in this particular way.

I like the `dry skin` and the `crimpoline`
and the `deadfall wood`.

(maybe `and crack` after that dislodge)

It`s screaming decrepitude somehow `jolts` the
normally passive autumn

Poetry-wise it makes you think.

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 4th Oct 2013 14:32

This reminds me of when, in the eighties, I once marched behind one of those magnificently rebellious young militants chanting `Maggie, Maggie, Maggie…Out! Out! Out!......and,as we marched by, an equally magnificent old ex- military guy dressed in a fawn blazer and straw boater stood saluting rigidly to attention and singing `God Save The queen`. I felt at the time that I would have willingly served with the one and under the other in any future conflict to defend my country.

Not withstanding the lung-opening relief to be got from such occasions, I feel I must record that I myself (and four members of my family – three married) were– under the Thatcher regime–able to attend university and get decent jobs. I am, therefore in agreement that benefit recipients should go to school. (provided that the education they get is meaningful)

It was the `business friendly` labour government that allowed the banks to indulge themselves in the reckless gambling that resulted in the present dangerous situation. I think that a far greater danger than the old left-right arguments is the presentation of still more opportunities for reckless gambling afforded by the vote-catching government help to buy scheme. I know they say they`re `watching it` but presumably someone was `watching` the last housing bubble.(and worried more about their own `money-catching than looking after the shop responsibly).

I can`t help worrying about all the talk about `protecting the interests of the city of London` (weren`t they the main guys who started all this)

All this class-war stuff is just fighting the last war but one).

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Laura Taylor

Fri 4th Oct 2013 09:26

I liked this, nice use of rhyme throughout, and an interesting idea. Good build up of tension, and leaving the reader to wonder...who? Has the writer planned his own death? A strange form of suicide? Or maybe that's just me. I like that it's open to that interpretation, anyway.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 4th Oct 2013 09:22

Hi Andy and G

Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Will it do anything? Probably not, in all honesty, in terms of affecting Tory policies. However, the very important aspect of it is the strength of numbers, of the solidarity. A very public show of opposition. I myself took great strength from it. When you are spending your days veering between fury and frustration, to spend a day in the vast company of people who feel the same is very empowering.

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Richard

Fri 4th Oct 2013 09:04

Thanks to Poetry24 for publishing this on Wednesday 2 October I was away on holiday and missed it but it was a nice surprise none the less.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 22:50

I know what you're talking about. Keep bouncing back.

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Nick Coleman

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 18:40

Thanks for bringing Little Machine to me. Somehow I had never heard them until now. Superb interpretations of poems that had become almost too familiar, brings new life to them.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 17:16

A marvellous asset to UK creative life - and how
amazing that folk should actually prize poetry
so much that they could consider stealing it!
I write as one lucky enough to have had a
published collection accepted (see the "cover"
accompanying this post) - and if anyone
should try to steal my book then I would feel
privileged for the unsought compliment implied!!

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Thu 3rd Oct 2013 17:08

Thank you for your service. My late father was stationed in London throughout the Second World War with the OSS, and the city's bombing. He said his handprints were on every sidewalk of London. He asked me once if I understood how Britain survived the war, and when I was silent, said, "because the whole People are valiant."

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 16:59

Food for thought: the ongoing personal puzzle of
the passing and the perennial - and their elusive
presence in our lives.
Welcome back.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 16:58

Go away MCN

Removed your comment - stop trying to show off

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 16:03

Interesting. I would have thought the poem's
"question" would've been aimed at ITV etc. rather
than the BBC whose alleged bias chimes with the
job ads. placed in "The Guardian".
So - where was the missing coverage complained
of - and why was it absent?

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 13:50

the truth to put it simply.

i love honest poetry like this.

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 13:49

need to refer this to our Cathy, Laura. It's defo her cup of tea also.

For me - I loved it to put it simply.

It's a great piece and i hope the demo does do something. We have to hope it does i guess.

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Gray Nicholls

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 13:46

excellent, excellent Laura. Raises some serious points here... kinda annoyed me that the BBC and some of the other news didn't cover as much as they should have.

does raise the point will the demo do anything however? i hope it does, but am worried it won't.

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Cathy Crabb

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 12:22

Thanks Steve. That's true and the only fact. X

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Cathy Crabb

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 12:17

Yes. On Saturday, when I wasn't allowed to go, the other team awarded him their man of the match. I am usually quiet but not when it comes to harm. It's a good lesson to learn I guess in not being able to solve everything.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 09:27

Haha - loving the new profile pic :D

And exactly, re chips/JCC. Bloody hell, it's not like he's advertising arms or owt is it?!

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Laura Taylor

Thu 3rd Oct 2013 09:24

Cheers Greg and Dave. Yep Greg, it was :) I'm really glad this poem moved you so much.


MC - Jog on, you tiresome right wing troll. You make a bigger show of yourself each time you post anything. Sad thing is, you don't see it yourself.

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 2nd Oct 2013 19:22

thanks, once again, for your kind and supportive comments on the JCC thing Laura - totally agree with you about the 'chips' thing, he deserves it - we'd all give our right arms to make that sort of money out of poetry - it's only the snobs who think you should forever suffer for your 'art' lol :-)
Ta
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 2nd Oct 2013 19:19

thanks for the kind comment on 'dust' starfish - much appreciated as always
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 2nd Oct 2013 19:18

thanks for the kind comments on 'dust' Isobel - yes, I was pleased with that ending which just dropped upon me, unplanned, from the....dust :-)
Cheers
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 2nd Oct 2013 19:17

thanks for the kind comments on 'dust' marksy - much appreciated mate
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 2nd Oct 2013 19:15

thanks for your kind comments on 'dust' Dave - it's a real pity when you write something that you think is profound only to find that someone else had the idea a long while ago :-( still - great minds think alike I suppose - and they do say that no idea is ever really unique

also - a big thanks for your kind comments on the JCC poem Dave - much appreciated as always

Ian

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Vik

Wed 2nd Oct 2013 18:06

Hi Cynthia - the poem's original language is English.

I've just added a scan of a handwritten translation into Bengali, done by Saleh Uddin Talukdar and Afia Begum during a workshop - but unfortunately not sure if it's legible - I thought we'd be able to click on the image to open it bigger in a new window, but I don't think that happens.

During the workshop there was lots of discussion about the layers of images in Carol's poem; the connotations of the "chaste, virgin, untouched" imagery and the way it's connected with snow and whiteness; and the idea of the bricks, and how to translate the idea of something that is at once structured, and also muddled.

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Mark Mr T Thompson

Wed 2nd Oct 2013 18:04

It is that time again tomorrow!

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Oct 2013 17:53

By all means, let us rejoice and celebrate the
freedom to protest against perceived injustice.
I'm not sure about who are "the many" and who
are "the few" when considering current national
sensibilities about the wider benefits of contributing through work whenever possible.
I'm considering the representation of lawyers
challenging a Β£500 per week cap on benefits at
the High Court. It is hardly likely to elicit
heartwarming sympathy from those working hard
for nothing like that gratis sum.

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