Zzzz!!
I don't mind stuff that is serious...
Mysterious or even deleterious,
But spare me the gripe
From the self-righteous type
Who seems to set out to weary us.
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Comments
Thanks for the comments, one and all.
Ray - I was tempted to use "determined" in the last line but the alliteration of 'seem' & 'set'
appealed more and I was content to double up on
"to".
If you "sing" the first two lines - the word
'even' keeps the rhythm - IMHO.
Fabulous -straight to the point!
Best wishes, Steve
<Deleted User> (11485)
Tue 1st Oct 2013 17:32
;)))
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John Coopey
Thu 3rd Oct 2013 22:50
I know what you're talking about. Keep bouncing back.