tony sheridan
Fri 15th Feb 2013 12:01
Alone in a crowded room. Worse than sitting alone in a room. Great poem. Take care, Tony.
Comment is about The Void (blog)
Original item by Tracey Bucknell
tony sheridan
Fri 15th Feb 2013 11:55
Lovely poem Tracy. Take care, Tony.
Comment is about The Language Of Love (blog)
Original item by Tracey Bucknell
thank you for you lovely comments jeff & M.C, i'm glad you enjoyed it :) x
Comment is about The Language Of Love (blog)
Original item by Tracey Bucknell
Congratulations all and thanks for organising Dave. I haven't quite been able to catch the writing bug myself for a while now, but I have enjoyed reading these.
xx
Comment is about Cat Competition Result (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Beautiful poem Tracey, I like the classic Shakespeare style of language. Lots of romance in your words, love the second stanza Jeff X
Comment is about The Language Of Love (blog)
Original item by Tracey Bucknell
<Deleted User> (10853)
Thu 14th Feb 2013 23:31
Thanks for the warm welcome, Ann. I really like your Fantasia poem and look forward to reading more of your work when I'm not quite so tired! X
Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Thanks for the comments.
Steve - 'unaffected' as always' ;)
Laura- I'm glad it suggests something. ;)
Comment is about Past Midnight (blog)
Original item by Neil Fawcett
Kenneth Eaton-Dykes
Thu 14th Feb 2013 17:05
Thanks M.C.
You made my day
Ken
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Bravo!
Comment is about Front page news: a Valentine's Day poem from the poet laureate (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I take it that you hadn't seen this okd post before, mc? I'd guess it was from around 2010.
Comment is about The Plays of William Shakespeare - (or Where I Get All My Talentfulness From) (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Sudden light
The Queen
Drunk naked
Feelings stirred.
Don't look
Unless your
Heart beats
With mine.
The image fits so well with the first and second lines on the collage poem.
Comment is about February Space (February 2013 Collage Poem) (blog)
Original item by Stockport WoL
JC -
My sister's dog is a poodle...
A big black kit n' kaboodle,
Who gets himself into a muddle
About where to leave his puddle;
And is certainly quite a sight
With his arse up a tree full of shite!
While I'm here - loved your Bill Shakespeare post and commented thereon.
Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)
Original item by John Coopey
Seeing someone across a crowded room?? I like
the up and down aspect of this.
Love comes...love goes
How and why - no one knows.
Comment is about Hole In My Heart (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
What a tribute to Valentine's Day. A stimulating mix of past and present in its tiered terms of expression.
Comment is about The Language Of Love (blog)
Original item by Tracey Bucknell
"O peerleff rhyming northern sage,
Thy linef are writ for any age.
Takeft this if thou will as platitude,
But the Bard in me grins in gratitude"!
Not only wonderfully funny but inspired, not to say
well informed (so I won't).
Comment is about The Plays of William Shakespeare - (or Where I Get All My Talentfulness From) (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thank you Freda for your comment on Rose Maloney.
Hazel
Comment is about Freda Davis (poet profile)
Original item by Freda Davis
Beautiful, clear-as-a-mountain-stream poem. Lovely.
Comment is about Walkabout (blog)
Original item by Deborah Jordan Bailey
Hello John - welcome to WOL. I hope you are enjoying the site and hopefully you'll be adding some more of your poems. It's a nice friendly site if you'd like to get involved. Be nice to see some more of your work :)
Comment is about johnandrews0412@fsmail.net (poet profile)
Original item by johnandrews0412@fsmail.net
Hi Sarah - enjoyed your poem. Hope to see more of your work on here soon. Welcome to WOL :)
Comment is about Sarah L Dixon (poet profile)
Original item by Sarah L Dixon
I'd disagree there. It's easy to get rid of them, particularly if you have someone willing to go through your head with a nit comb for a couple of days. There is absolutely no need to go buying these expensive chemical lotions either.
The difficulty comes in staying without them if you are mixing with people who have them. Hence you have to be vigilant at all times if you are mixing with kids :)
Comment is about The nits are back ! (blog)
Original item by hugh
Travis Brow
Thu 14th Feb 2013 07:18
Thanks very much Ray, i've been trying to finish this poem for years.
Comment is about All Grown Up. (blog)
<Deleted User> (10893)
Wed 13th Feb 2013 23:26
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Comment is about The nits are back ! (blog)
Original item by hugh
A poignant piece, Cathy - thank you. I was very moved when I sought out Sylvia's grave while I was on a writing course at the nearby Arvon centre, Lumb Bank, in 2011.
Comment is about Sorrow and joy: a pilgrimage to the grave of Sylvia Plath (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Thanks Yvonne - added the words now so that might take the edge off the echo and Yorkshire twang on some of the phrasing - glad you liked it - more to follow soon :-)
Comment is about Hostile Street (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
HI I enjoyed this but would appreciate the lyrics up too. The music suits the poem well and I like the echo chamber effect - like the echoes in an empty street at night.
Comment is about Hostile Street (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
I see you know your proper place in the relationship! Well writ. xx
Comment is about Our Gert (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Viva! Anthony viva!
Comment is about Tony Harrison’s 'torrent of filth' poem on Radio 4 (article)
Original item by Julian Jordon
Terrific.These lines in particular
I have lasted beyond the wincing
hour, faced the witch that sinks
her stone into the rippling mirror
Comment is about Thin (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Nice poem.Fine rhythm. the moon's articulate light - lovely.
Comment is about All Grown Up. (blog)
<Deleted User> (10853)
Wed 13th Feb 2013 11:10
Thank you for sharing, Cathy. Amidst all the media circus around her anniversary, it is lovely to read such a heartfelt article.
Comment is about Sorrow and joy: a pilgrimage to the grave of Sylvia Plath (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Kenneth Eaton-Dykes
Wed 13th Feb 2013 11:02
Hi Mike
Thanks for that. Just a little something I threw together, in between my (more serious) job of writing conundrums for crackers.
Do You fancy a part time job? I need a new Keeper.
Comment is about Mike Hilton (poet profile)
Original item by Mike Hilton
Travis Brow
Wed 13th Feb 2013 10:21
Lovely poem. Two wheels good; two feet better.
Comment is about Sarah L Dixon (poet profile)
Original item by Sarah L Dixon
Ndihma e statujave
Dante mban dritaren
Te mos e hapi era..
Bethoveni zevendeson kemben e krevatit
Ku rralle fle Martini
Dhe s'ka me Parajse...
S'ka me sinfoni Heroike
Ka vetem zhurme femijesh...
Me Danten cajne dhe arrat
Arrat qe i hante aq shume Beatricia
Aty tek "Ponte Vechio"
Po te ishte gjalle Bethoveni i madh
Nuk do te thonte:
"Gezim nepermjet Dhembjes"por,
vetem "Dhembje!"
(1992)
Comment is about Leon Qafzezi (poet profile)
Original item by Leon Qafzezi
<Deleted User> (10123)
Wed 13th Feb 2013 08:27
What a lovely 'sad' piece. Billy-no-mates? Brilliant use of 'fess' in verse 2 'the band across a shield' to protect against the hurt. very good stuff, thank you, Nick.
Comment is about I Remember (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
<Deleted User> (10123)
Wed 13th Feb 2013 08:03
What about us 'sewer operatives?' ta muchly, nick
Comment is about The cat, the damselflies, and the deer (blog)
Original item by Greg Freeman
<Deleted User> (10123)
Wed 13th Feb 2013 07:58
At first I wanted me hankie but then no. 2 came along - would you like to borrow me boots?
"(Honestly I didn't really mean it like that !!)"
ta muchly, Nick
Comment is about FEELING FELINE (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Travis Brow
Wed 13th Feb 2013 06:57
Thank you Tony, Dave. The fact you recognise your own experiences in others' work is the only meaningful validation; for me, at least.
Comment is about Toast. (blog)
Thanks Cathy, for this illuminating and touching tribute. I'm sure that she will be remembered - as all poets should be remembered - for her words.
Comment is about Sorrow and joy: a pilgrimage to the grave of Sylvia Plath (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
A lovely Article Cathy. Go up there often as I live down the hill. Looks so different in the changing weather conditions. But in your photo it shines. Nice x
Comment is about Sorrow and joy: a pilgrimage to the grave of Sylvia Plath (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
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Comment is about Thin (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
hi rach, of course ya can, if ya want i can drop them up to you this friday?
Comment is about Rachel Bond (poet profile)
Original item by Rachel Bond
A lovely, fitting piece Cathy.
If anyone else goes up there you might also want to search for the nearby grave of another, far-lesser-known American poet, Asa Benveniste, who lived in Hebden Bridge and whose headstone bears the words: foolish enough to have been a poet.
Comment is about Sorrow and joy: a pilgrimage to the grave of Sylvia Plath (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Maska Presidenciale
Nje maske ke per zyre
Nje maske per familje
Nje maske per eprorin
Nje maske per vartesin
Nje maske per vete...
Sa dhe kur buzeqesh
Ne pasqyre..
Nuk buzeqesh ti..
Buzeqesh maska
Ku e ke fytyren?
Newspaper"Sindikalisti"1991
Comment is about Leon Qafzezi (poet profile)
Original item by Leon Qafzezi
Thank you guys for all of your kind words and encouragement. They really do mean a lot to me.
As writers, we all spend a lot of time in emotional isolation with our words; and when we finally release them, we hope that they will fly in the minds of others.
Thank you again with all of my heart.
Pete
Comment is about Through the Cracks (blog)
Original item by Pete Fisher
I worked around the 1960s East End of London - Limehouse, Poplar and the Isle of Dogs. The docks were fading fast: the unions (like the "print") refusing to admit change was inevitable, with Gravesend taking container traffic and shipping no longer a viable trade. The area has been altered beyond recognition since then and is now a famous landmark as "Canary Wharf". The challenge was taken up there too - and the effort and enterprise succeeded.
Comment is about LABOUR MILLIONAIRES (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Mysty Brett
Mon 11th Feb 2013 23:33
This article is so moving. It's so heartwarming to read. Sylvia and her poetry mean so much to so many people. Thanks for sharing Cathy.
Comment is about Sorrow and joy: a pilgrimage to the grave of Sylvia Plath (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Anthony Emmerson
Fri 15th Feb 2013 12:26
Congratulations Nick - and all the other entrants, for some imaginative reading. And last (but certainly not least) to Dave for all the admin and organisation you put in. Next please!
Comment is about Cat Competition Result (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley