So glad to read this poem from you. Your style is very heartwarming and real.
Comment is about Love Cascading (blog)
Original item by HÊlène
Enjoyed. I love poems about poetry and poets. Lots of action here with the clicks. Nicely done.
Comment is about Click! (blog)
Original item by John Gilbert Ellis
Thanks Graham and Uilleam.
A few of my friends have gone through divorces recently. Sad as it is, I think there's a certain romance to the idea of starting again in simple surroundings. A fresh start and a chance to do things on your own terms.
Thanks also to Marla, Nigel, Manish, Kim, Red Brick and Holden for the likes and for reading this one.
Comment is about The Apartment (blog)
Original item by Tom
Thu 5th Jun 2025 10:09
This resonates with me too. Been told from an early age not to rock the boat. Life taught me otherwise, sometime
you have to.
Comment is about No More Crumbs! (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
The imagery in this poem is vivid and movingâeach direction holds a dream, and each journey feels like a quiet rebellion against stillness. I wish the world gentle enough to lead you back home.
Comment is about THE LAST LONGING (blog)
Original item by lune walker
Thank you Uilleam and Graham. My own favourites, Graham, are the aclitteration and astiteration of âcloying and closeâ and âstayed stubbornly stillâ.
Comment is about RELIVING THE RAJ (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
You should get an award for these two lines alone JC
â And so quite replete from imperial nutrition
We surrendered at last and assumed the positionâ
Classic Coopey!
Comment is about RELIVING THE RAJ (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
I've been wondering why we use the words like "cobblers" in situations like this - is it a poetic device?
Comment is about No More Crumbs! (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Thanks, HÊlène.
A sorely needed commodity.
Comment is about Love Cascading (blog)
Original item by HÊlène
Thanks Yanma.
You paint a lovely picture.
Comment is about Two Luminaries (blog)
Original item by Yanma Hidayah
Click! - there's a like.
Click! - there's a villanelle slice - delicious!
Comment is about Click! (blog)
Original item by John Gilbert Ellis
Thanks Tom.
"gurgling in gutters" is very evocative of current conditions.
Comment is about The Apartment (blog)
Original item by Tom
Apparently European Civilisation would be saved from the savage hordes, if only we started believing in that man on a cloud, whose son was nailed to a cross.đ
Comment is about Itâs Not What You Believe. (blog)
Original item by JD Russell
Ah, those were the days.
Tea â a drink with jam and bread (jam butty, reawnd âere)
Dough â the stuff we buy it with.
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Comment is about RELIVING THE RAJ (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
I love a renewal poem. A start again story. You describe this âgarretâ well I can hear the rain and city sounds!
This is a very nice piece Tom, well done! G
Comment is about The Apartment (blog)
Original item by Tom
The sight that always offends me is when political leaders don the forces uniforms/battle dresses etc to pose for the press in a polished up tank or something similar (Maggie in her desert storm type gear for example).
David you always write about war stuff with the venom that you have rightly earned the right to use. To me this Labour lot are like feathers in the wind. God knows where weâre going.
Well done!
Comment is about Pivot to War (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Hi, David,
Again, that's just about every reason I keep my hearing protection close at hand in public spaces...
I worked with a female a few years ago who started running her mouth about how she couldn't wait until doomsday. All I could think was, "yeah. You're afraid of bees so you should probably stfu."
.. not a pleasant but a necessary topic to discuss now and again.
btw, I don't think you could have found a more fitting song than "Rooster", though I suspect that some wouldn't get it even if you knocked 'em upside the head with it. I would really love to see the other song you chose, too...
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Comment is about Pivot to War (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thanks for that stirring call to action, Aisha...I now have permission to act like I'm 21 again.
I have no choice about growing old,
But Iâll be darned if Iâm going to grow up!
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Comment is about One Wild Life (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
Thanks for your likes:
Aisha Suleman
Holden Moncrieff
David RL Moore
Yanma Hidayah
I speak as a former practising Christian, when I say that Britain is no longer, (was it ever?) in any meaningful sense of the word, a "Christian" country.
Comment is about His Majesty's Crime Minister (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ă Ceallaigh
Thanks for your likes, Aisha and your comment, Rolph.
My haiku is a reference to the proverb: âIgnorance is bliss, where âtis folly to be wiseâ.
The future of social cohesion, and of fact â based journalism in the UK is looking grim. A man who, itâs said, owns 42 percent of Numpty News, and who is worth ÂŁ630 million, is apparently intent on buying vast swathes of the Tory press.
The same individual has liked numerous tweets such as âThe native European population is losing patience with the fake refugee invadersâ. Itâs clear from his âlikesâ that heâs a rabid homphobe and an Islamophobe.
Hope not Hate are rightly concerned about his activities.
Comment is about Haiku for 2025 [No.19. Bigots] (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ă Ceallaigh
Thanks for that, David..yes, Frost did occur to me at some point.
I was prompted to write this after watching a video on creativity â on not being subservient to the preferrences of others, but to express MYSELF.
The title refers to lifelong feelings of inadequacy, of not coming âup to scratchâ, of not living up to my family's expectations.
Comment is about Call Yourself a Poet? (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ă Ceallaigh
Thanks for the like Red Brick Keshner.
Comment is about I Love ye Scowsers! (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ă Ceallaigh
Thanks for your likes:
Stephen Gospage
Holden Moncrieff
K. Lynn
Yanma Hidayah
Maureen
Comment is about Haiku for 2025 [No.18. Wibbit!] (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ă Ceallaigh
Thank you, Eduardo.
Imagine awakening from a nightmare, only to find that it's reality.
Comment is about The Awakening of Uncle Sam (blog)
Original item by Eduardo
Our maxim at work was: âwhen in doubt, make a brewâ.
The establishmentâs maxim is: âwhen morally / economically bankrupt, manufacture consent for warâ.
Military Keynsianismâs the thing - nothing unites a nation like a lovely war - and just think how all that Union Jack bunting in our streets will gladden the hearts of the homeless as they cheer at the victory parades.
You know it makes sense!
Comment is about Pivot to War (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thank you Eduardo for this thoughtful, powerful, hopeful poem.
Comment is about The Awakening of Uncle Sam (blog)
Original item by Eduardo
Love this Aisha! Once again, your poetry energizes. Really well written.
Comment is about Your Own Way (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
Many thanks for all the likes - much appreciated.
Rob
Comment is about Echoes of Childhood (blog)
Original item by Rob J Mann
Lots of good imagery here and the longing is well portrayed.!
Comment is about Our story (blog)
Original item by Princesselle
Your poem is very relatable, Nicely done.
Comment is about Maybe (blog)
Original item by Princesselle
We all sometimes see people for what we want them to be more than who they are. This poem says a lot in just a few lines.
Comment is about Rose (blog)
Original item by Princesselle
Honest poem from the heart. You ask good questions in this poem. I like poetry that seeks truth. Nicely done.
Comment is about Sinner (blog)
Original item by Princesselle
Your point is a salient one Stephen. It is especially hard to witness that big question when you know the family very well . The attendant shock affected their lives so much. Thanks for coming on.
Many thanks for all your likes folks.
Ray
Comment is about TAKING STEPS (blog)
Original item by ray pool
You're brave.
The visitors of this website know that, don't we?
'Waking up between the lines,
rising up, the morning shines'
Comment is about I Get Up In The Morning Before The Dawn ... (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
I wrote pts. 1&2 arse-about - pt.2 came first, then pt.1 - but as i read them i realised that their combined message - of hope, persevering in the face of failure, knowing the rightness and resolution of self belief against the odds - was meant to be set down like this, if only for my own peace of mind. It's not natural for me to believe in myself to such a degree but, for once i thought, hey, why the hell not?
Comment is about Perseverance, Pt.2: At The End Of The Day (blog)
Original item by Martin Peacock
Hello Larisa,
That's not a problem at all. Anyone can write what he/she wants and how he/she wants. I just wanted to see some sense in that very line and that word didn't make sense to me at all. That's why I asked you. What did you mean instead at this point?
Best regards,
Rolph
Comment is about I Get Up In The Morning Before The Dawn ... (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
When the lilac tree spread its petals in May
All the people around become nicer and kind
And I feel that brighter days come each day.
And only clever thoughts are on my mind.
When acacia blossoms, I lose my mind,
The whole world becomes warmer,
A smell like this you will never find.
The swallows are the May informer.
When the wind plays with the trees
And tickles the young leaves,
I am so happy to see the bees
Which pollination gives.
When a thunderstorm plays its game,
When roses open their petals
It looks as if magic morning came,
They have to stop all the battles.
When you perform the spring plays
In my favorite city, Odessa,
And May turns all into light rays.
And blossoms my Principessa-Odessa.
When the stars shine in the dark sky,
When the spring cuddles my shoulders,
To draw a picture of a sunset, I try,
The pictures of May are my holders.
I remember when birds still sang,
When life was pleased with its novel.
And now I only hear the rockets bang.
Though I am not going to grovel.
When streets are full of pigeons,
When people do not fight,
When all the city regions
Sleep peacefully at night.
Comment is about I Am So Happy To See The Bees (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
Thank you Aisha and Holden for your đˇ, too. I really appreciate it.
Take care,
cheerio,
Rolph
Comment is about No More Crumbs! (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Good morning, Uilleam,
Thank you for your kind words! I found it fascinating how the term âHochstaplerâ (someone who pretends to be something he/she is not) carries a very different meaning in German than what âimpostor syndromeâ means in English. At first, I misunderstood your use of the term â until I looked it up and realised you meant something quite the opposite, viz âI am something, but I donât believe I have the right to be.â
Your final line â âWELL COBBLERS TO 'EM!â â also initially threw me off. I mistakenly connected it to the German saying âSchuster, bleib bei deinen Leistenâ (âShoemaker, stick to your lastâ), but of course, you meant something entirely different here, too: more like âThatâs enough â Iâm claiming my space now!â
So in just a few lines, you taught me something new about cultural and linguistic differences. Thank you for that, and for your comment and đˇ!
Kind regards,
Rolph
Comment is about No More Crumbs! (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Dear Rolph!
I am so sorry for writing this foolish thing. Of course, I didn't mean an old lady. It was my mistake.
Regards, Larisa
Comment is about I Get Up In The Morning Before The Dawn ... (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
This is inspirational. It would lend well to audio. Nicely done.
Comment is about Your Own Way (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
I am always surprised to note how contentment colours the poetâs words. There is a glow in this.
Comment is about Choosing Light (blog)
Original item by Alexandra K. Parapadakis
Thanks all for likes and comments.
Explanation of this poem to follow.
Comment is about Call Yourself a Poet? (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ă Ceallaigh
Och awaâ wi ye Graham - awâve nae cause tae be frit oâ the Flower oâ Scoatland! We boath gang back an awfuâ lang way!
Though I thank ye for y'r kind comment.
https://youtu.be/dMzQiu2mUlE?list=PL9n8fNFZ2frRzSh7UEEij1hIaNWyeFCF1
Comment is about Call Yourself a Poet? (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ă Ceallaigh
Many thanks to both Stephens for commenting on this piece, which is both a sad reflection on my formative years and cathartic at the same time. It was one of my entries for the Echoes competition, but not worthy of a mention. đŽ
Comment is about Echoes of Childhood (blog)
Original item by Rob J Mann
Too often in life, and from an early age, I've suffered from a kind of "impostor syndrome", a voice in my head telling me to quieten down, to go away, to not make a fuss.
WELL COBBLERS TO 'EM!
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Comment is about No More Crumbs! (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
How true, Aisha.
It's so easy to play "follow the leader", instead of thinking for oneself, especially if doing so makes one appear popular or needed.
Comment is about Your Own Way (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
Mon 2nd Jun 2025 12:23
Hope u like , love for ur reviews in commentsđ
Comment is about Memories (blog)
Original item by LITTLE MISCHIEVIOUS SOUL
Russell Jacklin
Thu 5th Jun 2025 14:30
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Comment is about Itâs Not What You Believe. (blog)
Original item by JD Russell