Wonderful reflective poem. You paint a good picture of youth with its fearlessness and desperation.
Comment is about Highway 99 Revisited (blog)
Original item by Mike McPeek
Double D for Diddly Dee?
Comment is about A Day That Changed All Days (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Thanks Stephen,
As you say there is no shortage of things to be angry about.
Also thanks to those who have sent recent likes.
David.
Comment is about Pivot to War (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thanks, Eduardo.
I wonder, is all that Hollywood-esque gun-pointing some kind of compensation for phallic inadequacy?
Comment is about The Shadow of Destiny (blog)
Original item by Eduardo
Thanks for your likes:
Red Brick Keshner
K. Lynn
The sheer physical courage, moral clarity and integrity of Greta Thunberg and her crew-mates shows up the British government and their fellow cheerleaders of genocide for what they are: morally bankrupt, abject cowards and hypocrites.
Comment is about Haiku for 2025 [No.21. Madleen] (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh
Brian sadly passed away on the 7th June 2018 just weeks before he was due to walk his daughter on her Wedding day.
A bottle of whiskey was set up on the day to remember him but I am sure in each and every heart would have wanted him there.
Instead we all toasted a well loved respected man.💗
Comment is about Sharing The Good Times (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Thank you so much 🌷 @Leonard Morse 🌷the oil lamp in the dark image is subtle but quite powerful in its light. Most appreciated 🕊️🙏🏻RBK
Comment is about sleep on it (blog)
Original item by Red Brick Keshner
Thank you Stephen, it is frustrating but I got off lightly compared to so many. 😏
Comment is about Diplopia (blog)
Original item by Freda Davis
Hélène,
That is just the way love is. Nice style.
Marla
Comment is about Just Be (blog)
Original item by Hélène
<Deleted User> (61243)
Sat 7th Jun 2025 19:52
Thank you for sharing your poems it is very powerful. I hope writing poems gives you healing.
Comment is about prayer for sanity (blog)
Original item by Zodinpuii
Thank YOU Yanma Hidayah for taking the trouble to write with such intelligence and perspicacity about 'Regret'. Plath beat us both to it!
“Always with the queer regret, blurring all the other summers into a fine nostalgic brew - distilling all the tart sweetnesses into this one, with the sea of music skipping over the time, and the feeling in you very warm and it is our town, we all together, very sweet, all summer light, sometimes almost tearful because it is so moving all the time. The fluid color, the fluid sound, towards its ending... And now I am sitting here crying almost because suddenly I am knowing in my head and feeling in my guts what those words mean when I did not know the full impact of them in the beginning, but merely their mystic beauty.”
― Sylvia Plath, The Unabridged Journals of Sylvia Plath
Comment is about REGRET (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Although I’m sure he thinks he can, Stephen.
And thanks for the Likes, Erasmus, Tim, Aisha and Maddie.
Comment is about RELIVING THE RAJ (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Oh my Lord, Rolph - just when you think things couldn't get worse! I've just seen this. My heart goes out to the American people.💗
https://youtu.be/myrN5liU0Vs
Comment is about The Sandbox Brawl: The End of Bromance (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
A fence is more than a barrier. It's the boundaries we need until we're strong enough.
To open the door. And, I know it's not easy.
Mais c'est Francais, vrai. C'est Francais.
Comment is about The Fence (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
He claims that the Orange Horror knew Epstein, yet still saw fit to expose his son to him at the Whitehouse.
And his concern for the victims......? a truly crass scale of priorities in which point-scoring takes precedence.
You accurately describe a society in freefall, Rolph...a degenerate scene which some in the UK appear only too eager to imitate.
Comment is about The Sandbox Brawl: The End of Bromance (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
Thank you, Stephen.
My enemy is “an illegal”,
who lives for free in a luxury hotel,
I know that to be a fact,
because a posh boy,
who wears posh clothes,
who speaks with an Oxbridge acccent,
who appeals to my ignorance and prejudice
says so.
Comment is about The Fence (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
I liked an angry poem, David. And there's plenty to be angry about.
Comment is about Pivot to War (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
A rich, inspiring poem, Martin. Thank you.
Comment is about Love of the cursed (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Thank you for your kind and interesting comment, Rolph. It is much appreciated. I am pleased that the poem made such an impression on you. Life must be hell during war. Love may remain strong, but, as you say, intimacy and the hope of expressing love slowly fade.
Comment is about Lines of Love (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
This is really good, Rolph. 'No rockets, roads, or subsidy' catches perfectly Trump's rhythm of speech. And the poem mirrors the juvenile tone of their slanging match. For me, the worst thing about this government by hyperbole is that I want to say 'who cares?' but know deep down that I can't.
Keep on speaking truth to them.
Comment is about The Sandbox Brawl: The End of Bromance (blog)
Original item by Rolph David
@John E Marks, this is beautifully written. The way you captured that silent, internal struggle, especially the weight of things left unsaid is deeply moving. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment is about REGRET (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
I like how you deliver the lines of your poems, it feels romantic, melancholic, yet gentle. Well done, Lune Walker.
Comment is about THE STRANGE LIE (blog)
Original item by lune walker
Proof that Donald Trump can't spoil everything! Nice one, Joihn.
Comment is about RELIVING THE RAJ (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
It is remarkable that you have been able to distill this unpleasant condition into such a fine poem, Freda, and with such subtle, understated humour as well. I really admire it. Best wishes to you.
Comment is about Diplopia (blog)
Original item by Freda Davis
@LITTLE MISCHIEVIOUS SOUL, Thank you so much! (I’m not sure how to address you, by the way—but “Little Mischievous Soul” is such a cool username). You’re absolutely right. This poem was born from a quiet confession: that I shine with the light of hopes glowing around me, because of the light of my mother.
Comment is about Two Luminaries (blog)
Original item by Yanma Hidayah
A smashing poem which comes at you from all directions. Really liked it, Erasmus.
Comment is about Canal Walk (blog)
Original item by Tim Daly
Thank to Uilleam and Maria for the kind comments.
Always difficult to know where to show this sort of poem. ‘Write Out Loud’ seems the perfect forum.
Thanks also for the likes from Aisha, Holden and Manish..
Comment is about Click! (blog)
Original item by John Gilbert Ellis
I hope this post helped you with it.
Comment is about A TINY LIFE'S SCARRED END (blog)
Original item by Naomi
I've just attended the funeral of Karenza Storey, who once taught creative writing at Harbottle first school, and as I understand it, inspired Felicity to enter this national competition. I knew Karenza because she was a fellow member of our local U3A poetry group in Rothbury. She took poetry very seriously. Her family printed four of her own poems in the order of service, and they were all read out in the church today.
Comment is about Poetry in the landscape: Felicity's lament for ruined castle (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Since you mention it Graham, what makes you think they’re Labour?; they ditched Socialism years ago.
We’re off to hell in a handcart; in a race to the bottom, to outdo Reform.
Comment is about Pivot to War (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thanks for that Uilleam,
you are absolutely right, that for requires an e.
many thanks,
David
Comment is about Pivot to War (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
"go ahead, be messy
leave crumbs on the counter
a spoon in the sink
the bed unmade
shoes kicked off by the door"
But I'm trying my very best, honest, Maureen!
I even got the lads in Birmingham to stop emptying the bins😀
Comment is about No to-dos today (blog)
Original item by Maureen
I consider the use of a profanity in this context to be entirely appropriate, and effective, David.
It's the profanities against innocent human beings being carried out in the name of UK citizens to which I object.
I'm ill - qualified to advise anyone on their writing, David; but might I suggest your profanity would be even more effective with a final 'e';
IE...................................."be-fuckin-fore"!...........................................
😏
Comment is about Pivot to War (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thanks for the likes:
Nigel Astell
ErasmusBlack
Yanma Hidayah
Naomi
I don’t know how wong I can cawwy on the Wibbit / Wabbit theme…I’m suffewing fwom wyter’s bwock!😕
Comment is about Haiku for 2025 [No.20. Wabbit!] (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh
Health and Safety warning, Aisha.
Vile Kyle? Yuk!
😐
Comment is about Whose Son? (Version Two) (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
Thank you so much Little Mischievous Soul. I'm glad you found it beautiful😊
Comment is about A TINY LIFE'S SCARRED END (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Thank you very much Maddie! 😌
Comment is about A TINY LIFE'S SCARRED END (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Good evening all.
Thanks to Uilleam, Landi and to Graham for your reading and comments. It's always appreciated when I get feedback and opinion from others, so thank you.
I have to say I am not entirely satisfied with the final stanza of this piece. All the same I posted it.
There is an element of anger within it which I wanted to get out, in doing so I gratuitously included a profanity merely to sustain some rhythm...even then I'm not sure it works. The fact is it is what came out and I don't really want to fiddle with it now.
It may help to explain some of the text, please excuse me if this is not required.
Porton Down is The Defence Science and Technology Laboratory located in Wiltshire, England. It is a highly secretive Establishment overseen by the UK Government. Questionable experiments have historically been conducted at this site. One of the many was a project investigating the effect of high velocity ammunition and blast impacts upon the human body. In order to study such injuries Live and Dead Pigs where used, a wide range of ammunition was deployed in these experiments.
Additionally medical Dr's used the carcasses to practice emergency surgery on, a pigs anatomy and physiology is very similar to that of a human.
PS, Dr David Kelly who died in suspiscion circumstances had held a senior position at DSTL.
I recall being told of this in the early 80's when I was posted near to the site...I wondered then if our service personnel were regarded in similar regard as our Piggy stand ins.
The second Stanza relates to the battle of Goose Green during the Falklands War. Argentinian conscripts were dispached by members of 2 PARA whilst hiding beneath the duck boards of trenches.
There is a nod to Elvis Costello in stanza 3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D5Cnd1cOg6A
PS, Chet Baker plays trumpet on that track.
Stanza 4 is a bit of a mess...I can make it work when I read it, so good luck.
Thanks all xx
David RL Moore
Comment is about Pivot to War (blog)
Original item by David RL Moore
Thu 5th Jun 2025 21:26
A beautiful creation indeed , the sun as a parent or guardian takes care of moon and helps it to shine like the other stars ,so that moon doesn't feel less than them but having a feeling of being special .
Really liked your poem👍😊
Comment is about Two Luminaries (blog)
Original item by Yanma Hidayah
Thu 5th Jun 2025 21:21
A true beautiful creation😊👍
Comment is about A TINY LIFE'S SCARRED END (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Thu 5th Jun 2025 21:19
A nice poem having an eye catching idea to do what your mind says and to catch the opportunities you see in life until they are gone. The poem tells to enjoy your youth with all bright to the fullest and aligning slight idea towards having no regret in the future.
A beautiful inspirational poem😊
Comment is about One Wild Life (blog)
Original item by Aisha Suleman
Thu 5th Jun 2025 21:08
U could brief outline about it is from last lines . I Know death and other terms can't be called for relaxation but for the person to face ,it is the ultimate end and thus a destined future . Though the terms of death are considered to be negative but it is the ultimate truth one has to face and accept . That thought is what poet want to add into his poem .
The poet knows many of you may not like the vision of poem and thus he had no bold ambition of likes or comments for the poem.
But feel free to review through commenting , he likes to accept what the readers feel about the poems.
Comment is about Transition to light (blog)
Original item by LITTLE MISCHIEVIOUS SOUL
Omg! So good! Love the poem!
Comment is about A TINY LIFE'S SCARRED END (blog)
Original item by Naomi
Yes for sure (57 years and still counting)
Comment is about Love Cascading (blog)
Original item by Hélène
So glad to read this poem from you. Your style is very heartwarming and real.
Comment is about Love Cascading (blog)
Original item by Hélène
Enjoyed. I love poems about poetry and poets. Lots of action here with the clicks. Nicely done.
Comment is about Click! (blog)
Original item by John Gilbert Ellis
Marla Joy
Sun 8th Jun 2025 18:33
You have a warm, comforting style in this vivid picture of a crowded city street. Nicely done.
Comment is about The Beginner (blog)
Original item by Manish