I Get Up In The Morning Before The Dawn ...
Dear friends!
Please, read my poem in the comments.
Regards,
Larisa
Oh, my God! I made a mistake. I didn't mean an old lady.
Comments
Tue 3rd Jun 2025 14:34
Hello Larisa,
That's not a problem at all. Anyone can write what he/she wants and how he/she wants. I just wanted to see some sense in that very line and that word didn't make sense to me at all. That's why I asked you. What did you mean instead at this point?
Best regards,
Rolph
Dear Rolph!
I am so sorry for writing this foolish thing. Of course, I didn't mean an old lady. It was my mistake.
Regards, Larisa
Sun 1st Jun 2025 13:19
Hi Larisa,
What do you mean by "gammer" in your third stanza?
For me, a gammar is an old lady, a granny, but it makes no sense here.
Regards,
Rolph
I get up in the morning before dawn,
I watch the spring in a beautiful gown.
I open my door very wide,
To watch the summer like a bride.
The moments of love and peace,
The moments I'd love to increase.
The dear moments of happiness,
The bad moments of sadness.
I walk together with summer,
I watch nature's colorful gamma.
I feel myself to be in a fairy tale,
I have the greatest wish to sail.
In the ocean I sail and dream,
My feelings look like a sunbeam.
I go through the strings of my heart.
The color chart has broken apart.
The reality has left my dreams,
Monsters have come, it seems.
And now I should bitterly weep.
It could only be better to sleep.
©Larisa Rzhepishevska
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Auracle
Tue 3rd Jun 2025 16:25
You're brave.
The visitors of this website know that, don't we?
'Waking up between the lines,
rising up, the morning shines'