Call Yourself a Poet?

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“Normality is a paved road:

it’s comfortable to walk,

but no flowers grow on it.”

Vincent Van Gogh.

The path that I choose is oft times, a rough one,

but better by far than the sterile paved desert:

yes, oft times I’ll stumble and sometimes I’ll fall,

but what use is certainty, knowing it all?

A better path’s found, as an old way is lost,

beside me, these flowers where I fell in the dust,

above me, the moon and the stars and the sun,

I’m poet and peasant, therein’s my true wealth.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh, written 1st June 2025

 

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 4th Jun 2025 12:09

Thanks for that, David..yes, Frost did occur to me at some point.

I was prompted to write this after watching a video on creativity – on not being subservient to the preferrences of others, but to express MYSELF.
The title refers to lifelong feelings of inadequacy, of not coming “up to scratch”, of not living up to my family's expectations.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 2nd Jun 2025 19:02

Thanks all for likes and comments.
Explanation of this poem to follow.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 2nd Jun 2025 18:55

Och awa’ wi ye Graham - aw’ve nae cause tae be frit o’ the Flower o’ Scoatland! We boath gang back an awfu’ lang way!
Though I thank ye for y'r kind comment.

https://youtu.be/dMzQiu2mUlE?list=PL9n8fNFZ2frRzSh7UEEij1hIaNWyeFCF1

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 2nd Jun 2025 08:25

Very well written, Uilleam.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 1st Jun 2025 08:31

I like this Uilleam. Just remember that among the flowers thistles may grow! Tread with careful steps.

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David RL Moore

Sun 1st Jun 2025 08:00

Hi Uilleam,

Maybe a nod to Robert Frost there.

I think this is a great summation of a more satisfying way of living. It certainly makes for a more interesting and colourful journey, even if that journey is sometimes arduous.

Nice one.

David RL Moore

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