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Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:56

Jesus Gene? shit hottest,of the hottest!
now comes the follow up-ooer!
only kidding,big guy.xx

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:27

thanks so much for your comments on 'the jesus gene' Francine - glad you liked it :-)

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:26

thanks for the comments on 'the jesus gene' Isobel - glad you liked it. It's an older piece and I'd fallen out of love with it a bit - but it's getting some good feedback, so I'm starting to see its merits a bit more :-)

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:22

yeh Rich,(re latest on our page)they do thin out,but dont worry,the gems shine through-keep chilled.xx

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:21

thanks Richard - really enjoyed it - the Tudor is A.O.K.

Looking forward to the Cadence Cameo spot on the 18th - you will be getting a mention when I read 'that which autumn leaves' :-) will you be open mic-ing?

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:14

ps-howsyer ferrits n pijjinz Higginsy?

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Fri 5th Jul 2013 22:06

as we say in Rossendale-this is reet nice!xx

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Ste J Bee

Fri 5th Jul 2013 21:46

Thanks for reading The Seagulls are watching Steve, them seagulls get everywhere. Just read 'Sounds like Richard Burton' ....like other comments, there's nowt wrong wi' bein' northern.

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Fri 5th Jul 2013 21:34

friends should be the kinda people that,
-will die for you!
not the kind you mention int' last two lines.xx

nor a bunch of plastic american clowns
living on a cardboard studio set!

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 5th Jul 2013 21:27

back on form girly girl!xx

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John F Keane

Fri 5th Jul 2013 21:20

Aren't other variables involved, such as age, class and gender? How many middle class, female pensioners are searched?

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Steve Higgins

Fri 5th Jul 2013 20:40

Time just keeps getting faster as you get older. Good one. Thanks Roy,
best wishes, Steve

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Steve Higgins

Fri 5th Jul 2013 18:30

Plenty of those winged robbers in St Annes. Nice work.
Best wishes, Steve H

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Ste J Bee

Fri 5th Jul 2013 17:58

Cheers Marksy, I think I've got the 'grass is always greener syndrome'

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 5th Jul 2013 16:39

I have spent a pleasant morning listening to a few of your audios. Wow! You are talented and I am jealous! Your song "You Smiled" has a 60's retro sound, which I really like. Keep writing and making music. I love your voice.

Shirley

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Nigel Astell

Fri 5th Jul 2013 16:03

Shirley Sunshine

Each smile
slots into
every word.

Your page
fills up
with sunshine

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 5th Jul 2013 14:50

Hi Shirley - thanks for your interest in my song "You Smiled". You can easily find it under "audio sample" near the top of my home profile page. Just click on it and you should hear it play - no problem!

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Greg Freeman

Fri 5th Jul 2013 12:33

This is a different project, Cynthia. Winston's excellent wheeze involved posting poems on lock gates along the Rochdale canal last year

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 5th Jul 2013 12:27

Thank you for your appreciation Graham. I hope you are well.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 5th Jul 2013 10:56

Is this idea in conjunction with Winston Plowes' recent effort, or entirely different?

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Richard

Fri 5th Jul 2013 10:54

Hi I like this poem very much, I would love you to read my poem called Padlock and see if it strikes you in anyway when compared to your poem its on my blog )

Regards

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Simon Marks

Fri 5th Jul 2013 01:36

Many thanks for the kind comments, Steve but I think you do your work a mild disservice. If it's simple words, then they are effective words. Far better than flannel, of which I can be very guilty. Keep up the great work.

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winston plowes

Thu 4th Jul 2013 23:50

Darwin + Rhyme = Magic :-)

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Ste J Bee

Thu 4th Jul 2013 21:29

Hi Marksy, thanks for reading the seagulls are watching, I can see your building up your blog entries, Just had a read of The template of my being, Just another load of shite and Dostoyevski's chicken. You are extremely good with words, when I look at my simple stuff, alongside your wordy attitudey stuff, well? what can I say? very inventive... I must try to write something a little more ballsy. Keep up the good verse.

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Simon Marks

Thu 4th Jul 2013 18:42

Surely the first piece of poetry inspired by those bloody adverts crowbarred into the start of YouTube videos.
No - I don't want to see a film starring Owen Wilson and Vince Vaughn - ever!

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Simon Marks

Thu 4th Jul 2013 18:19

Every single sentiment in this poem sums up exactly how I feel. Have a pint for me...

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Simon Marks

Thu 4th Jul 2013 18:12

The population of Sunderland and many a seaside town will serenade this loudly.

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Cathy

Thu 4th Jul 2013 16:21

Thanks John. I used the rhythm method x Anyway, I do. I always write poems for him- one way or another.

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Isobel

Thu 4th Jul 2013 16:06

Could people please email me with their votes at farmoorgirl@yahoo.co.uk - I've just heard of one vote that's gone missing in the internal mail - but if your name is Steve or Starfish, don't worry, I've got yours. xx

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Greg Freeman

Thu 4th Jul 2013 15:03

I have a perfectly law-abiding black friend and former colleague whose experience of the police as a driver is exactly that of Lemn Sissay's. He doesn't make a big thing about it; he just shrugs his shoulders about it most of the time. That doesn't make it right. It makes it institutionally racist.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:57

new frequency
old airwaves
crazy - - yes
to think
buzzing will
go away.

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Isobel

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:55

Thanks for your comments on my wondering - when isn't there anxiety in the house ? Great to see you on the site. x

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John Darwin

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:48

Thanks for your comments. The title comes from a recent trip to New York. My partner wanted to do be active and touristy and I .... You know the rest

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Isobel

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:48

Thank you Stefan and Patricia :) smiley frog face...

Ally - take a look at my last blog (Time to Vote) - it explains in detail what you need to do.

Thanks Francine - I've got your vote :) x

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:47

Oh come on. If a white officer does it, it's"racism". If a black officer does it, he's an "Uncle Tom". The same moans were heard three or more decades ago...so what does this say about a community that seems apart from countless other ethnic origins in its anti-behaviour towards virtually all forms of authority?
IF an area is crime ridden and its population predominantly a particular ethnic origin, it's obvious that the police will be stopping and checking mostly that sort of individual. It is called "reality". In south London, I once challenged two black youths who were kicking the hell out of a road sign - to which was chained a rather expensive/new looking mountain bike. But looking around, all I could see were other blacks who were busy doing nothing. I was suddenly the odd one out. Match that attitude to irresponsible multi-parenthood out of wedlock and you have a community intent on having its cake and eating it too...preferably immune from any criticism and unwanted attention from "Old Bill". Operation Trident was set up to deal specifically with "black" crime. What does that say to the REST of London's many ethnic communities scrubbing along as best they can - and successfully too within society and the law?
"Take as you find" isn't a bad maxim for getting along - and it works both ways.

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John Darwin

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:33

dead catchy, a bit 'saucy'. Very good Cathy :-)

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Jul 2013 14:14

This contributor's posts are of a content/quality deserving of attention and respect. The point about the "underclass" can be seen via countless posts on various online sites,frequently crass & vile in their observations,and limited by their basic lack of knowledge, wit and imagination.

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Gemma Lees

Thu 4th Jul 2013 13:03

We had 10 readers and audience tonight for our 5th birthday ('what does the S stand for?') and a superb guest slot from our very own Katie Haigh.

Good Bits: Great poets and atmosphere, Gemma, everything was amazing, great entertainment, really good night, really good night especially Katie, good poetry, good banter, funny, good night, great as usual, great showcase, simply fab, groooooveeee.

Areas For Improvement: Pity there wasn't more there, could do with bigger audience, more bums on seats (you know who you are), too much delicious cake.

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Cathy

Thu 4th Jul 2013 11:57

Thanks Steve, takes one to know one x

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Greg Freeman

Thu 4th Jul 2013 10:53

Nice work, John. I admire Wendy Cope's skills, and believe she would admire this poem, too. You should have entered it for the Bridport!

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<Deleted User> (11197)

Thu 4th Jul 2013 09:40

Thank you for your beautiful comment on 'My gracious moon'.

Best wishes
Ankita

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Thu 4th Jul 2013 08:49

we are more than happy to out-vote ourselves,if that is allowed(even though we probs would have won-yeh rite!)

and vote for(as afore jokingly mentioned)
a defo photo finish,twixt Harry and Rachel.

and who said you had a sad frogs face Iz?
just let us know-we'll swing for them!
(as old Muvver Reilly used to say.)

yeah,defo Harry'n'Rachel.xx

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Thu 4th Jul 2013 08:36

we felt more than compelled to make another visit to this masterpiece.Without doubt,the best poem we have read,in all the time we have been on WOL.xx

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Wed 3rd Jul 2013 22:39

yowser!yowser!x

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jane wilcock

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:47

anxiety in the household eh? Just seen this and its fab!

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jane wilcock

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:42

Just seen this: its great:)

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Francine

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:41

I've been reading through ALL of them and trying to decide...
So many good ones! You'll hear from me soon :-D

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Francine

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:38

WOW is right. This is FABULOUS !!!

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Isobel

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:24

Oh what a brilliant poem Ian. I love it. I love all the religious symbolism and the irony (you're very good at that) and the very many messages.

What an original piece of work. It makes me think, it makes me feel - and I'm left feeling nailed to a cross. Wow!

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:17

mucho excellentio Signor Whiteley!

Ciao for now!xx

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