I can still hear music

Sun-blinding vision

of a surfing state,

songs with their feet down

hard on the accelerator.

 

But the little deuce coupes

have long gone to the scrapyard.

The wild west is back,

if it ever went away.

 

Beady-eyed outlaws

who don’t like strangers

have taken over the town,

heroes replaced by villains.

 

Smile, the album

he never quite finished.

Sweet harmonies

fade away and disappear.

 

 

🌷(7)

Brian Wilson

◄ The Esk Valley line

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Greg Freeman

Fri 13th Jun 2025 10:54

Cheers, Ray! It was written quickly. The poetic equivalent of a three-minute single?

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Ray Miller

Fri 13th Jun 2025 09:02

Very good, Greg, I like the 3rd stanza a lot.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 12th Jun 2025 23:14

Thanks for your comments, Uilleam, Graham, Steve, Isobel, and Stephen, and for the Likes, Auracle, Naomi, Holden and K Lynn. My first LP, bought with paper round earnings, was Best of the Beach Boys vol 2. Included on it were I Get Around and California Girls. I have no idea what was on vol 1 ... My favourite lyric may be simple but it's perfect: 'We've been having fun all summer long ...'

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 12th Jun 2025 23:02

Nicely done, Greg. 👏

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Isobel

Thu 12th Jun 2025 17:24

How poignant Greg - I love how you tie in nostalgia for yester year with the hideous realities of the here and now. If only America wasn't such a big player in world events.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th Jun 2025 14:41

It's sad when glowing memories and deserved tributes run into the ugly present. For me, 'Holland' was a great, and mysterious, album. And Pet Sounds, of course. One of their later songs, if I remember, included the line : 'we don't understand why they sent in the National Guard'. Plus ca change..

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 12th Jun 2025 09:40

I wasn’t really a Beachboys fan but those tunes burrowed their way into your psyche somehow. Wilson was a real innovator who quite literally ‘showed the way’ for other notable writers.
This is a colourful tribute Greg, gently done. Bravo!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Jun 2025 09:22

Conspicuous consumerism and plastic surgery can paper over the cracks for a while, but will never cure any country's deep-seated ills.

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