Omg!!! I love your sample! You are so talented. I can’t tell you how much this speaks to me ?
Xoxo- Lilly love
Comment is about Colette Hutley (poet profile)
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i can see that you love your mom so much , its a beautiful thing , im certain she will come back and be there for you ,
Comment is about Anger (blog)
Original item by K
its very beautiful and im happy you found someone you feel that way arround him ?
Comment is about Walls (blog)
Original item by Jara Giner
no its okey , i should hav explained , i was in a cafee with my friends and we started talking about horrible things that happened to people we know , and reallly some stories i couldnt get them out of my mind , its horrible when you can't do anything
Comment is about tragedies (blog)
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<Deleted User> (16099)
Wed 28th Mar 2018 21:50
sorry I read this wrong..but still thanks for sharing
Comment is about tragedies (blog)
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no this time im not sharing my pain , im sharing stories ive heard about other girls , the stories were devestating but anyway thank you for readin
Comment is about tragedies (blog)
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lovely to see you back! and nice poetry as ever
Comment is about human anatomy (blog)
Original item by nunya
very nice tom, i especially like the lines;
who's heart I do not know,
but who I spend more time with
than anyone I've ever loved,
Comment is about Spring Office Poem (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
Thank you...just been to Doddy's service at The Cathederal
Comment is about Tatty Bye! (blog)
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<Deleted User> (16099)
Wed 28th Mar 2018 15:04
how I wish I could write like him so well and deliciously..
Comment is about Page turner (blog)
Original item by Lilly Love
<Deleted User> (18980)
Wed 28th Mar 2018 15:01
Thanks Brian, duly noted. It's always worth stretching one's boundaries (ooh missus!!).
Anya, I'll take that as a compliment. You're welcome to frame it and have it mounted; show it to friends. Thanks so much!
David, Funny I have my suspicions: the Hog's Back has some wonderful views. I do keep the C word (crap) or -unt
if your prefer for special occasions, which this poem wasn't.
Appreciated ratings Alex! I suspect that poem of Larkin's was a sort of tear up the rulebook moment. It worked so well!!
Additionally thank you both for likes Col and Sobski!
Ray
Comment is about WE WILL A-DOGGING GO (blog)
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IMO, totally fabulous. It's the 'take' on the subject, 'off the cuff' so to speak, with tons of thought behind it.
Comment is about ‘A Memory of Rhinoceroses’ by Ian Whiteley is our Poem of the Week (article)
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its amazinglly wrriten marianne very beautiful
Comment is about Befriending Fear (blog)
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Thank you for liking my entry, "A Game". ?
Comment is about racha (poet profile)
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its amazingly written , well described very sad i don't know what to say i like it
Comment is about untitled (blog)
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Big Sal
Tue 27th Mar 2018 20:03
Nice title, very unique poem, and easy flowing so it was a good read.
Comment is about My Best Friend Has Demons (blog)
Original item by Sobski
thank you Margaret for your beautiful comment on my profil , i love your work btw i love how your honest and straight forward
you're like the sun bold and beautiful full of passion i can feel your energy from here
Comment is about Lilly Love (poet profile)
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Love what you’re doing girl!
Xoxo -Lilly love
Comment is about racha (poet profile)
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Ask me anything! I’m an open book.
-Lilly love ?
Comment is about Also for J (blog)
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Big Sal
Tue 27th Mar 2018 01:18
Damn. That flowed really nicely. Well done on the perfect encapsulation of a very complicated series of emotions ending on a note that leaves the reader wanting more instead of simply being content with the content.
Comment is about choices (blog)
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Big Sal
Tue 27th Mar 2018 01:11
Loved the rhythm of this piece, it resonated soundly and hit like a bass.
Comment is about Future wifey (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 22:58
I'm thinking this is about the passing on of knowledge, and that knowledge is nothing unless it is shared.
Comment is about Lonely Rock (blog)
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its very beautiful thank you for sharing
Comment is about Lonely Rock (blog)
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No, I'm happy with where it ended, even if it is abrupt.
Comment is about Walls (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 22:06
Surprised you managed to get this past the censor Ray. Love it!
Comment is about WE WILL A-DOGGING GO (blog)
Original item by ray pool
boom boom Brian. He is a bit long in the tooth.
Ray
Comment is about TEETH (blog)
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<Deleted User> (16099)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 18:22
<Deleted User> (16099)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 18:16
of course it was impossible for this person to say 'no' right?
Comment is about Viking (blog)
Original item by Lilly Love
Thank you for reading it David. Yeah it's awful . I'm better thank you
Comment is about my depression (blog)
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<Deleted User> (16099)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 17:08
Ouch run far from this place never go back again
Comment is about J. (blog)
Original item by Lilly Love
<Deleted User> (16099)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 17:07
This is a very different side of you and I have so many questions as to why
Comment is about Also for J (blog)
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<Deleted User> (16099)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 16:54
You deserve a series of poems your open your honest you taste of passion and the fact that you love dick so much is inspiring LOL I really should write you
Comment is about What I want (blog)
Original item by Lilly Love
Thanks so.much Col.
This was actually a little bit of a creative writing exercise. A few years back I wrote a poem called Ephydriad Descending - Thames Ganges which was a full-octane magical realist comedy number about life around a small area of the river at night. Here, the poem looks at the same place during weekend sunrise.
You got it in one!
Cheers!
Suki
Comment is about Memory Embryo (blog)
Original item by Suki Spangles
Thank you for writing. I appreciate your art.
Comment is about ESCAPE (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 15:29
<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 15:08
Well done Ian. I'm pleased about this as it was one I liked a lot.
Comment is about ‘A Memory of Rhinoceroses’ by Ian Whiteley is our Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Thanks Hugh for finding this one of mine. I actually gave a copy to my dentist! I'm pleased to say he didn't get the needle.
Ray
Comment is about TEETH (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Great poem,lets get to the root of the problem and solve dental decay and bring the bite back into our lives.
Comment is about TEETH (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Thanks for reading Pat !
You don't scare easily Col. That doll persona has been overdone really; I wanted to bring out the softer side - Hollywood hijacking . My grandson was always scared of clowns though (apart from me of course). Thanks mate.
Spot on Suki. We all need our comforters - my first was a cloth rabbit from Bognor, I called him Boggy. Good thing about dolls, they never die...
Thanks for the likes, and Patricio, it's been a while!
Ray.
Comment is about JEMIMA (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 26th Mar 2018 12:14
Takes me back...my youngest daughter was always bringing them home. Nit comb and hair conditioner were our weapons.
Hugh - well done for covering a topical subject, and for not basing it around a jokey ending.
Comment is about The nits are back (blog)
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Big Sal
Mon 26th Mar 2018 02:02
Thanks so much for your lovely comments.
Comment is about Fargate (blog)
Original item by Chris Bainbridge
Thanks very much Brian, I did not know that! I shall spread the postings out a bit more in future. Thanks again.
Comment is about Above The Town (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 25th Mar 2018 09:14
Chris, I like this but by posting it now did you realise that your excellent Fargate is now not on show to readers, which is a shame.
Comment is about Above The Town (blog)
Original item by Chris Bainbridge
elPintor
Wed 28th Mar 2018 23:24
Some are loners and some aren't--it seems to me that it may be a trait that is inextricable from the self.
The last two lines really do create both an atmosphere and anima that seem quite innate to the piece as a whole, as solemn and sparse as it is.
Rachel
Comment is about LONERS (blog)
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