Within the wind
How the wind deceives
With its taste of freedoms touch
caressing the dream laden
with distance
No further from this place
Within the wind
a field with a view
seems a world away
Comments
What a lovely little poem this is saying so much in so few lines in such a creative fashion.
Nice one
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DESMOND CHILDS
Mon 23rd Apr 2018 05:52
Thank you Martin, your comments are very much appreciated. Especially the creative fashion bit. Thank you Pat,Binte and Anya for the likes.
All the best Des