Ray "Backwards glancing" nods in your direction. Tommy
Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)
Original item by ray pool
I totally understand your self doubt . I am riddled with it. But this is a great poem with a good pace to it. worthy of live performance not least because of its gritty honesty.
very good
Comment is about five minutes of my head typing (blog)
Original item by Cesca
Another fabulous poem Rachel.This has a great rhythm to it that puts me in mind of a song
Love it
Comment is about fade (blog)
Original item by nunya
Martin,
this is a an intriguing character sketch, from keen observation of the human condition. One of the best poems I have read in a long time. Thank you indeed.
Keith
Comment is about Hard lines (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
This is a great poem Keith. I love its pace and rhythm. love that last line
as they pass their time in a white painted corridor
marvellous
Comment is about The Passage (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Superb poem Joe I really have an image of a trusty old piano. We used have one in our house that one of our children was supposed to learn to play but it never happened and it was used for a dumping ground for anything and everything.
Nice one
Comment is about ‘Killing the Piano’ by Joe Williams is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Brian & Colin,
thank you for your comments. Keith
Comment is about The Passage (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
great stuff. words escape me. great stuff indeed (:
Comment is about Not Drowning (blog)
Original item by Hazel ettridge
short and sharp Nigel (not sure whether sharp should be here however - lol). Good piece thou, buddy. Enjoyed ?
Comment is about Only Scratching the Surface (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
We both like this Nigel, almost Hugo Williams ish ?
Comment is about When Two Smiles Meet Up (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
like apex of my soul as a last line in particular but a strong poem. enjoyed (:
Comment is about The Far Off Stare (blog)
Original item by Miranda Fegan
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sun 6th May 2018 10:13
a drug-induced contentment perhaps? Interesting poem Keith.
Comment is about The Passage (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
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Sun 6th May 2018 08:34
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Comment is about Spoken word vs poetry on the page: Podcasts (article)
Original item by Mike Took
Thank you for your words. elPintor ?
Comment is about 1-800-273-8255 (Suicide Hotline.) (blog)
Original item by Damon Blackery
elPintor
Sun 6th May 2018 03:19
The knife, like the ultimate uncomfortable compromise made to forego the unknown...
Comment is about 1-800-273-8255 (Suicide Hotline.) (blog)
Original item by Damon Blackery
elPintor
Sun 6th May 2018 02:49
Thank you, Damon. We've all tasted our own. That line, for me, defines the act of adding insult to injury.
..appreciate you speaking up.
Rachel
Comment is about fade (blog)
Original item by nunya
Big Sal
Sun 6th May 2018 02:34
kind of wonder what a cup of Tears would taste like? and this was a great read like always.
Comment is about fade (blog)
Original item by nunya
I really have no words for what I just read, it's beautiful as it is tragic.
Comment is about five minutes of my head typing (blog)
Original item by Cesca
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Sun 6th May 2018 00:42
I don't even know where to begin to sort through all of this except to say that you are there and I am here and between us nothing is tangled or ugly or negative or deceiving..
keep writing I am someone who appreciates all you do...and I am the one who celebrates you..
Comment is about five minutes of my head typing (blog)
Original item by Cesca
Thank you both so much.?
Comment is about Damon Blackery (poet profile)
Original item by Damon Blackery
Hi Jara,
I don't know whether you are a singer/song writer but this would work well as a song lyric.
Nice one!
Suki
Comment is about Heart Shaped & Reflective (blog)
Original item by Jara Giner
Interesting, Sofia.
Cheers,
Suki
Comment is about In Times of Doubt (edited) (blog)
Original item by AbSo2021
<Deleted User> (16513)
Sat 5th May 2018 22:36
Your comment is v much appreciated.. Keep coming with your bitter-sweet verses, they're gut-wrenching to read.
Comment is about Damon Blackery (poet profile)
Original item by Damon Blackery
Sat 5th May 2018 21:19
As I am now a father of 2 I can only imagine the grief you must be feeling. I am hoping through your writing you can express your feelings and deal with what must be still quite raw emotion. My thoughts are with you.
Comment is about Calm (blog)
Original item by Liam
Hello Kishore,
thank you for your comment. It is much appreciated.
Keith
Comment is about A Suburban Jungle (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
fine
It gave me a sense of pride, not embarrassment
I suppose because of its reilience and natrual beauty
Comment is about A Suburban Jungle (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Sofia,
thank you for this gem which comes from the heart. Well done.
Keith
Comment is about In Times of Doubt (edited) (blog)
Original item by AbSo2021
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Comment is about Marion (poet profile)
Original item by Marion
Thank you Suki, glad to be here!
Comment is about To be...To become... (blog)
Original item by Xoanxo
Duly noted Col! I hadn't really considered the eau de poem, but you make an excellent point. Modern life seems to be bereft of the wonderful variety of smells I was brought up with eg; gasholders, old hardware shops, tobacconists, railway carriages. The list goes on. Vive la variety I say ( oh and I forgot garage work areas).
FIN AUSSI.
Comment is about FILM NOIR (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Hazel,
thank you for your favourable and interesting comment which is food for thought.
Keith
Comment is about A Summerhouse (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
No, thank you ?for noticing the obvious mistake I'd done?
Comment is about In Times of Doubt (edited) (blog)
Original item by AbSo2021
Hi Hazel..no it wasn't the last line..I had saved it by mistake. Its complete now ?
Comment is about In Times of Doubt (edited) (blog)
Original item by AbSo2021
Thanks Big Sal. It is and it's a great life if you don't weaken
Comment is about 2018 Once more Trev's on his annual Texas Tour Pt2 The journey out (blog)
Original item by Trev the Road Poet
This would be a great start to a short story. Do you write prose?
Love the last line.
Comment is about A Summerhouse (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Is the last line really the last line? This poem has a flow that seems to end too abruptly. Or perhaps it doesn't need the last 5 words?
Comment is about In Times of Doubt (edited) (blog)
Original item by AbSo2021
Kevin,
thanks for your comment. Keith
Comment is about A Summerhouse (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Thanks for all the likes and comments. I enjoyed writing this one.
Comment is about Not Drowning (blog)
Original item by Hazel ettridge
The music for this inspired - an undercut of wistful humour.
I'm really enjoying your submissions, so keep them coming. You add something unique to WoL, so welcome on board. You have a fan here..
Suki
Comment is about To be...To become... (blog)
Original item by Xoanxo
Hi Ray,
This is a wonderful composition. Love the reading too.
Have a lovely weekend.
Suki
Comment is about CLINGING TO CONVENTION (blog)
Original item by ray pool
tommyfazz@yahoo.com
Sun 6th May 2018 20:28
JD - cheers sir. Tommy
Comment is about My loose checked tie (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll