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Calm

The calm that I seek,

Still blue sea,

Anxious waves that crash over me,

Making me hardy to future attack,

The peace that I seek is setting me back

 

Maybe it doesn't exist?

Maybe that is where my peace lies? 

In accepting that it can't be sought?

Is it already here?

 

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Comments

Liam

Sat 5th May 2018 21:19

As I am now a father of 2 I can only imagine the grief you must be feeling. I am hoping through your writing you can express your feelings and deal with what must be still quite raw emotion. My thoughts are with you.

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Amanda Daughtry

Sun 19th Jun 2016 15:26

I'm learning to ride the waves and hoping the breaks in between get longer. There is a sort of peace knowing that it's never ending. At least that way we become experts on how to ride the waves.

Nice poem. I can relate to it in my grief.

Liam

Thu 2nd Jun 2016 06:05

Thank you elPintor. Yes I guess the only certainty is that there will be more waves & accepting that is a small step in the right direction.

elPintor

Thu 2nd Jun 2016 00:04

Well..it's hard to find peace while preparing for another wave..maybe the only peace is knowing that there will be another.

That's probably more of a statement of where I am than where you are, but, the idea is pretty universal and well put together.

Thanks, Liam,

elPintor

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