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Heart Shaped & Reflective

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Did you ever think

As you slandered my name

Did you ever feel a thing

While you were slithering

Were you ever authentic

While I wore your scarlet letter


Thank God I found my shades

To block out the sun

Blinding me from the truth


I see you puffing your chest

Showing your bright feathers

Like I have no self control

As if it’s biology calling

Now watch me while I swoon

For my peace and solitude

‘Cause it’s that over you


Now every memory

I get to relive from a new perspective

Heart shaped and reflective

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suki spangles

Sat 5th May 2018 22:43

Hi Jara,

I don't know whether you are a singer/song writer but this would work well as a song lyric.

Nice one!


<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 3rd Apr 2018 20:01

'Heart Shaped and Reflective' is a great title and there are some excellent lines here. 'While you were slithering' I like lots and using words ending in 'ing' helps to keep up the flow nicely. Thanks for posting Jara.

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