SAME OLD SONG

Ensnared in the lyrics of romantic songs

dressed to kill with a story to tell

no one wants to hear.

 

Lend me your ear.

Not today - nor any other day

yet the lyrics weave their spell.

 

Hollow footsteps up my spine

those of only me and mine.

A lonely echo of a silent voice.

Is there a meaning?   who can tell.

◄ HAWK WIND

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raypool

Sun 24th Mar 2019 17:15

Thanks both Jennifer and Vautaw. I aim to please!

Ray

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Vautaw

Sat 23rd Mar 2019 21:13

Knocked another one out of the park Ray! 💖

jennifer Malden

Sat 23rd Mar 2019 19:35


Great writing as usual - agree with Martin about 'hollow footsteps up my spine'. Jennifer

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raypool

Tue 19th Mar 2019 22:47

I'm so gratified to get these likes folks: David, Rachel, Kevin, Damon ,Brian, Anya, Heart of Lead and Dorothy. Not feeling too confident with the writing at the moment, so it really helps!

Martin, so glad you liked that line thanks. Yes, I was in melody territory, and there was a hit for the Four Tops with that title. I hope I avoided plagiarism!


Too kind Stu.!

Ray

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Stu Buck

Mon 18th Mar 2019 16:59

great stuff ray as ever with a cracking send off.

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Martin Elder

Sun 17th Mar 2019 18:21

'Hollow footsteps up my spine' what a great line '
The title of this piece reminds of the line to a song. sorry if I am being a bit obvious here. But a great poem Ray
Nice one

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