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d.knape

Tue 11th Jun 2019 12:23

Dear Afisha
thanks for your comment on
"Wireless World".
now...are you a man or woman
with a name like that
it's hard to tell.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 11th Jun 2019 11:49

I don't understand what you mean Graham - could you explain a little please?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 11th Jun 2019 11:34

Thank you, gentlemen. I am very grateful for your response.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 11th Jun 2019 10:44

Your work is so good! Thanks for your response to 'Pink Dress'.

Do check that tiny typo in your bio 'its currents are cruel'. (just because you're so good!)

Now that I'm better, I'll try to catch up with more of your work. With much pleasure, I'm sure.

Cynthia

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Tue 11th Jun 2019 10:19

beautifully meditative piece Lola.








Rose ?

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Martin Elder

Tue 11th Jun 2019 09:23

I like the way that this almost reads like a newspaper by line.

Nice one mate

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Martin Elder

Tue 11th Jun 2019 09:21

'disbelief ends only when awareness begins'


this for me is the telling line in this magnificent poem Nigel
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Tue 11th Jun 2019 09:18

Thanks again for the poem Nigel.
Much appreciated my friend
see you next week
Martin

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Don Matthews

Tue 11th Jun 2019 08:50

Serves you right Wayne. Hasn't anyone warned you about the Thai chicks. They can be fire....?

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elPintor

Tue 11th Jun 2019 08:40

Thanks for looking in, Ray.

I enjoyed the Benjamin Britten piece--it is like painting with sound. And, it made waking up to what is looking to be a somewhat grey day, a bit more pleasant.

Rachel

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kJ Walker

Tue 11th Jun 2019 06:45

Thanks John, Martin, M.C, Jon and Trevor.
I personally have no fear of spiders, but when I have to pick up a particularly big hairy one I have to think twice about it. As M.C said there's "something of the night about them"

Cheers Kevin

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DESMOND CHILDS

Tue 11th Jun 2019 06:02

Thank you Jane for your comments, much appreciated. Thank you for the like afishamongmany.


All the best des

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Tue 11th Jun 2019 05:01

Thanks for the lovely comment on "A Game of Chess" and the continued support.?

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Tue 11th Jun 2019 04:53

A cleverly crafted piece! Enjoyed it?

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Tue 11th Jun 2019 04:48

A wonderful poem...I especially like the lines "and how the fates do fall as rain, upon our lives to ordain" ?

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Tue 11th Jun 2019 04:28

Hello Marin. Thank you for taking the time to comment on A Click Away & The Road Less Travelled. It's always great to hear from you. I hope life is treating you well!?

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jilliannchadrick@gmail.com

Tue 11th Jun 2019 03:38

@poemagraphic thank you!! love and light ?

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john short

Tue 11th Jun 2019 02:48

Thanks Martin, it more or less wrote itself, a bit surreal but I think I'm starting to understand it a little better now.

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Don Matthews

Tue 11th Jun 2019 00:44

Oh, I do like this fish. So clever.

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Mon 10th Jun 2019 23:14

pml

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 10th Jun 2019 23:12

#MenToo, none taken!

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trevor homer

Mon 10th Jun 2019 20:41

Really enjoyed that mate. Well done. Trevor

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 10th Jun 2019 20:16

Congratulations, KJ

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afishamongmany

Mon 10th Jun 2019 19:14

Leon - Maybe is just timing and the posting dynamics of the site? ?
Whatever, your appreciation and encouragement has warmed the cockles of my heart. Thanks mate!
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raypool

Mon 10th Jun 2019 17:44

Just found this Rachel. It has a flowing empathy to it and plays so well with light which appeals to my photographic interests.a sort of churning of elements reminds me of Peter Grimes music by Britten. I wish you well!

Ray

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Laura Taylor

Mon 10th Jun 2019 16:53

Hahaa - thanks chaps ?

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afishamongmany

Mon 10th Jun 2019 16:34

Ah! and if I ask you will you tell me?
If you tell me then will I know?
And when I know will we then see
Eye to eye under the babel tree?

:) ><>

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Mon 10th Jun 2019 16:18

af'- why isn't this wonderful poem drowning in comments one would respectfully ask?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 10th Jun 2019 16:07

The disparity between physical and mental strengths is well caught
in these entertaining lines. No doubt the fear (respect?) that spiders
instill in us has its roots in the DNA of self-preservation. These
creatures have something of the night about them, emerging with
an unnerving rapidity, often with a venomous weapon in their armoury that can prove fatal to humans - and still does in many
parts of the world. Fortunately, in our temperate UK climate, our
species are more benign - except for the occasional import that
can appear and cause the age-old alarm bells to ring.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 10th Jun 2019 15:56

An appealing evocation of how kids love to be part of something
"secret" and how it often crosses the boundaries of age to be
remembered with huge affection in later years.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 10th Jun 2019 15:42

There is nowt wrong with strong views politely/wittily expressed. The period referred to was disfigured by the
overt offensive personal abuse that probably made some feel uncomfortable and it is a pity if that was a motive for any departure
from this site by others looking on. Even the closest "families" fall
out on occasions but common sense and time invariably prevail and
things resume "as normal".unless the word "reasonable" falls outside
the behaviour pattern employed...beyond recall via the intransigence
of vulgar conceit. The resort to foul language of a personal nature
merely enforces resistance to the content employed by the user !

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afishamongmany

Mon 10th Jun 2019 15:38

I can identify d.k. with what you're saying -but- I have fond memories 50 year back of listening to 'Journey into Space' while gazing into the back of the wireless at all the lit up valves. ?

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Nigel Astell

Mon 10th Jun 2019 15:19

Sestina a french verse form

Caroline did a great poem on our last meet

So I am having a go on our theme for tonight

Going back in time

Oooo lalala Nigel

Thinking of a title

maybe My Big French Stick

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raypool

Mon 10th Jun 2019 14:39

Entertaining, revealing and cathartic Laura. The bane of public transport without a doubt, when you come to sort it out Alfie. (?)

Spreading the news always a good thing.

Ray x

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Don Matthews

Mon 10th Jun 2019 14:34

I did read to poetic end
Shit Laura you've got gall
I will support you in your goal
To squash old Billy Ball ?

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Martin Elder

Mon 10th Jun 2019 14:33

You have really brightened up my day with this poem Laura.
Love it

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Martin Elder

Mon 10th Jun 2019 14:30

It is strange the things we mere mortals are afraid of. I must admit I am not sure that I would be too keen on a Tarantula.
A thoroughly entertaining poem
Congratulations on being POTW K.J.

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Don Matthews

Mon 10th Jun 2019 14:27

very clever dk

But

You've confused me a bit about Ruku
Cos isn't this some kinda pottery?
That you bake in a kiln, (Japanese'y I think)
It's called Raku, a piece that I've gottery

Just noticed you tethered to ground
You poor man so wired all around
Gone mucked up my method of rhyming
I'm all out of kilter lost my timing

Leave me in wireless land watching clouds go by......?

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Don Matthews

Mon 10th Jun 2019 14:15

Brian

I was in personal contact with Anya and Kate during this 'toxic' period. Their reasons given to me for wanting to leave was they couldn't stand the tension.

And has the poison gone away? I haven't seen any flowing round the site of late.....

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John Marks

Mon 10th Jun 2019 13:23

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John Marks

Mon 10th Jun 2019 13:23

Liked this kj. Trips along like a likkle spidery running up your arm. Alarmy me army!! Well-penned. John

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Mae Foreman

Mon 10th Jun 2019 13:22

Hi Martin! Thanks for liking "Meaning Lost" and for the encouragement! I love your samples especially "All our gods have abandoned us"! Colour me intrigued!
I have quite a lot of reading to do but from what I've seen I can tell that you are very good my friend!
Thank you ?
Mae

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raypool

Mon 10th Jun 2019 12:57

Thanks for your discerning observation Kevin! Why didn't I think of that?

Thanks David Graham and Jennifer for your support.

Ray

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d.knape

Mon 10th Jun 2019 12:28

A man lost in Lilliput
tethered to the ground.

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Laura Taylor

Mon 10th Jun 2019 11:42

? ?

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Laura Taylor

Mon 10th Jun 2019 11:23

Love it. Short and sharp.

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Stu Buck

Mon 10th Jun 2019 11:02

reported for the use of the word scrotum

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Laura Taylor

Mon 10th Jun 2019 10:51

If you're a delicate flower, please don't stomp all over the comments complaining that you don't like the 'language', it's boring. Stop reading instead. It's that easy.

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Mae Foreman

Mon 10th Jun 2019 10:49

Thank you so much for the kind words dear Martin! You are correct... I don't think much of this piece but at least I know why! Lately I feel like I'm stuck (if not treading backwards!) so your words bring me comfort! I hope there will be more and better pieces...in good time!
Thank you ?
Mae

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Mon 10th Jun 2019 10:35

I think people just run out of things to say and feel the need to pack up their things and leave. Why don't they just leave their profile open and recommence posting when they're ready? Who knows.

Then there have been others who post dozens of pieces over the course of a few days then buzz off, never to be heard of again.

The fact is Don, Anya and Kate G both went with no reason given so it's not possible to blame it on a toxic period. And has the poison gone away?











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