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Tue 28th Apr 2020 14:35

Very powerful writing on an important issue.
The plight of the very vulnerable in this crisis is often overlooked.
Your poem paints a disturbing but true picture.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 28th Apr 2020 14:31

Strong writing.

Hannah

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 28th Apr 2020 14:29

Thanks for your comment, Hannah. Love, in all its variety, can only
help to make us feel better about ourselves. At least, I like to think so
in my old-fashioned way.

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 28th Apr 2020 14:21

Love like this is a gift.
Beautiful poem.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 28th Apr 2020 14:17

How true this is Don.
Celebrities almost cashing in on the misery of Corona, to get in on the act, while vulnerable people really suffer.
Very well expressed.

Hannah

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John Coopey

Tue 28th Apr 2020 14:01

Far out and outta sight, dadd-I-o.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 28th Apr 2020 13:37

Square as in "out-dated" - US? Rock on!! ?

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Lorraine Settanni

Tue 28th Apr 2020 13:22

well said, and so true, but it seems a very difficult concept to convey Thank you for writing it down

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Greg Freeman

Tue 28th Apr 2020 12:58

It is a kind of lockdown poem, isn't it, Cynthia? Full of detail, that's kind of poem I love.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 28th Apr 2020 12:56

An excellent, unusual poem that conjures up a particular time and place, and with room for conjecture.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 28th Apr 2020 12:25

dk - partiality to alliteration stems from the richness of the English language and my fondness for rhythm. It's interesting that composer Stephen Sondheim (West Side Story etc.) held it in low regard whilst
Jerry Herman (Hello Dolly etc.) had no such qualms. I guess it's a
question of trying for the best effect in a given context. ?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 28th Apr 2020 12:07

I greatly admire your words, and therefore, obviously, your thoughts

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 28th Apr 2020 11:58

I'd never share these 'flashbacks' if I thought they were 'just me'. I honestly feel we all have such silly, wonderful moments in our lives.
And sharing might raise a sympathetic smile. A 'people closeness'.

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Don Matthews

Tue 28th Apr 2020 08:29

Thankyou all for your interest in this.

You media, you are all the same
Twisting what I say
I'll fix you lot I'll ban you
No Media Briefs today

And he did....

I've got twitter. Twitter is true

Always.....

?

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John Coopey

Tue 28th Apr 2020 07:58

Thanks, Kev.
And “Square”, meaning out-dated and old-fashioned is what we two are, MC,

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Sophie Morley

Tue 28th Apr 2020 02:01

FUN, should be a song

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Nigel Astell

Tue 28th Apr 2020 00:50

I enjoyed reading Cornfields thanks for your like on Bloodbath Ends.

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Don Matthews

Tue 28th Apr 2020 00:31

I like this....

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 27th Apr 2020 23:28

If it wasn't so serious, it would be comic relief. November can't come fast enough! ❤

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Philipos

Mon 27th Apr 2020 22:35

Ruth - The Blarney Stone - now I know how Bats feel, hanging on to cave walls. How do they do it without a pilot's licence nearly bumping into everything. ? Blessings. P

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Philipos

Mon 27th Apr 2020 22:11

Good stuff Lucas - enjoyed. P

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 27th Apr 2020 21:22

An informative "eye-opener" - thanks.
In naval terminology - the seaman's uniform of cap, jumper and bell-bottoms was "square-rigged" whilst the peaked cap, jacket and trousers worn by petty officers and above was termed "fore and aft rig.". As "fore and aft" covered the whole length of a sailing vessel,
it seems possible that this indicated authority over the whole length
length of a ship.
"Square" also seems to have some connotation with the those who
get together with rolled-up trouser legs - Masonic: "On the square".
Shakespeare used the word in his description of men preparing to fight - "Are you such fools as to square for this?" (as in "squaring up") - written in "Titus Andronicus". But I'm not inclined to offer to
square any account in pursuit of my observations! ?.

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d.knape

Mon 27th Apr 2020 21:05

a lot of alliteration going on
were you an English teacher?

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Mon 27th Apr 2020 18:26

This lockdown could backfire because some people are saying they don't want to go back to work, they would rather spend time with their kids.
If the government gets to hear of it, whoosh, lockdown would be over.
But then, do they ever listen ?

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Mon 27th Apr 2020 18:22

Bleach kills 99% of all germs but it's that 1% we have to worry about.

Trump did recommend disinfectant but later said he was teasing the Media. Trying to get a reaction because he feels they are always against him. It's good you have immortalized this into poetry.

Hannah

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Mon 27th Apr 2020 18:11

This is fascinating writing. Very relevant to what is happening with governments and science and the Virus.
It calls into play the ideas of forcing things onto people 'for their own good' among other things.
Enjoyed reading this.

Hannah

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 27th Apr 2020 17:36

It was finding that 'folder', like a Pandora's Box! These are just 'musings' as I am browsing through some old, battered books. And loving it!

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Philipos

Mon 27th Apr 2020 16:48

MC one could write a wonderful poem just by reciting about some of London's better known streets - where the Guardsmen fell down due to tension and heat. Thanks for commenting. Appreciated. P.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 27th Apr 2020 16:31

Well done! Yes, they do look a little on the small side, but very classy.

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kJ Walker

Mon 27th Apr 2020 15:56

Very interesting John.
The maritime museum in Hartlepool is one of my favourite museums. I like to get up there every year or two

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Greg Freeman

Mon 27th Apr 2020 15:40

Yes, John, I knew it at the time. That's a great story about your first gig!

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John Coopey

Mon 27th Apr 2020 15:11

Chuck Berry v Pink Floyd.
You made the right choice.
It still gives me great pleasure to relate to anyone who’ll listen that my first gig was was concert of a duo who were over 140 years old between them. They had 2 eyes and 3 legs.
Sonny Terry and Brownie McGee.

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John Coopey

Mon 27th Apr 2020 14:43

Deep respect, Greg. I take it you are a one-hit-wonder? I hold you in the same reverence as The Archies and Esther and Abi Ofarim?
I gauge he wasn’t a particularly nice person, MC. But he was a cornerstone of rock ‘n’ roll’s hall of fame.
And thanks for the “Like”, Katy G.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 27th Apr 2020 13:29

A fitting tribute that should encourage us to regard these arboreal
allies with the admiration and affection that they deserve.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 27th Apr 2020 13:10

It seemed appropriate to upload something positive at this time.
Thanks Nia and JC for the comments - and more thanks to those who "liked" this blog..

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d.knape

Mon 27th Apr 2020 13:08

I continue to be facinated by those clay figures.
I wonder who they are? and who made them?
Were they found in an ancient tomb?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 27th Apr 2020 13:05

Another clever entertaining musical pastiche from an expert!
"Give me some of that Rock and Roll music...
Anyway you choose it..." (more Chuck Berry that makes me smile).

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Don Matthews

Mon 27th Apr 2020 11:12

His top medical advisors are saying the media misinterpreted his remarks.

Daily media briefing did not occur yesterday.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 27th Apr 2020 09:44

I think this is the first time I've posted this on Write Out Loud ... it was originally published in a music magazine called Heatwave at the time of the rock and roll legend and jailbird's death in 2017

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Greg Freeman

Mon 27th Apr 2020 09:39

I have milked my tenuous Chuck Berry connection over the years. I will post my poem shortly. But first here's this. (Imagine my disappointment to discover years later that Noddy Holder is also bellowing on this recording. After all, he's had enough no 1 records).

https://www.theguardian.com/music/musicblog/2012/may/04/chuck-berry-my-ding-a-ling

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John Coopey

Mon 27th Apr 2020 08:51

He must be laughing in his grave, Greg, at upsetting the establishment with such a load of tosh. I empathise completely.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 27th Apr 2020 08:33

Don't get me started on that, John ... I was there, I'm on that record.

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John Coopey

Mon 27th Apr 2020 08:11

An homage to one of the great poets, Don. Chuck Berry. “ I want you to play with my ding-a-ling”.

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Mocosy

Mon 27th Apr 2020 02:37

Hi poemagraphic,
Thank you, looking forward to be inspired by all the amazing talent showcased on this platform ?

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Nigel Astell

Mon 27th Apr 2020 01:43

That's right Don so far they have counted twenty two victims there may be more - - -

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Don Matthews

Mon 27th Apr 2020 00:15

Wot?.....it rhymes?....I do believe it's a poem....

?

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Greg Freeman

Sun 26th Apr 2020 21:32

Yes, John, how the other half have to live and work. Our garden isn't looking too shabby this year, for a change. This poem was one of six or seven that I wrote in quick succession. I've stopped now, because I fear, for me at least, all this has become the 'new normal'. Take care and keep writing, if you can.

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Liam Osaneo

Sun 26th Apr 2020 20:52

I really enjoyed reading this one. Something´s special about it.

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 26th Apr 2020 19:10

Thank you both, Jeanot and moon.girl,
Wolves and sheep,
Books and covers,
Fools often mistake,
One for the other.
?❤

J. x

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 26th Apr 2020 19:07

Yep, quite right Don karma's a bitch, and we're all about to get a taste of it I think.?

J. x

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