Kevin T.S. Tan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 20:09

perhaps that moment is not so far away

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Nicholas

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 19:55

I have to be honest and admit I was adopting a particular persona, but there is also an element within me that empathises with the sentiments of that persona. I should also add that I can't wait for warm days sitting outside a country pub, enjoying a pint or tw

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 19:54

LOL it's cracking me up!

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Wed 3rd Mar 2021 19:46

I do sound like a pet and the vaccine made me poorly , only now I feel a bit better . Whose pet am I I wonder . ? Xx

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julie callaghan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 19:37

Thanks for the likes, Stephen A, Nazia, scattered sun and A Girl, Good evening.

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julie callaghan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 19:29

I’m struggling to find time this week, I think it is because the rain stopped long enough to get outside in the garden. Great title and poem, made me smile out loud! ?

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A Girl

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 19:20

???

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John F Keane

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 18:37

That is just fantastic, what an incredible resource in these troubled times.

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Abdul Ahmad

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 16:30

Anmolpreet
Thank you for your warm welcome back greeting and appreciate your comments and the like.

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Mike Bartram

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 15:16

Thanks for reading, I have used a couple of real examples here of where the terms White rabbit and Pinch Punch come from, from different times and cultures.

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Mike Bartram

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 15:14

Thank you for reading and the nice comments, it's a lovely park and that sort of poem just kind of writes itself, it's just what I see!

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 13:54

'Nature is the source, not the resource'

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keith jeffries

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 13:45

True words and well expressed.
Thanks
Keith

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 13:33

'Love is a bird, she needs to fly'

Calvinism is indeed the Iron Cage Max Weber described. Laws, rules and regulations strangling obedient citizens.

Do you have the key to let us all out?

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d.knape

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 11:29

T shirt = Viva Aviva!
?

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 11:29

Honestly my friend, I'm sorry to hear that, because it’s pretty bleak, and obviously I can relate, I wrote it. I don't feel like this so much today, but then we either fight on, or give up don't we? I choose to fight on and say, "Balls to creeping paralysis, it can go f**k itself." In the words of the song, "It's a new dawn, it's a new day, it's new life for me, and I'm feeling good." 1❤❤

J. x

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 11:12

you're welcome. true. I hope writing it off helped just a little bit

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A Girl

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 09:52

Good morning Julie ?

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julie callaghan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 09:12

The pheasant disappeared before I could catch a photo ?

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Your Royal Poetess

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 09:05

Artwork by: Zone Patcher ?

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julie callaghan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 06:56

Thanking Aviva and Nigel for taking the time to read my revised version and for the likes.

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d.knape

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 03:20

when window's open
for all to see
what is inside
rises to comedy!
?

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d.knape

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 03:17

Even if
the blinds are drawn
what good the reaction
if only a yawn!
?

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<Deleted User> (30059)

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 02:28

This resonates with my soul in a way I cannot even begin to describe.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 02:06

When restrictions start to get lifted
added verse makes this poem even better.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 22:36

Thank you for commenting Rudyard, Though there are many sources of light the universe between those lights is a dark place, and this poem certainly touches on some dark concepts. However sometimes by accepting the darkness we can relax in it. I'm sorry that you found it difficult but I am very happy that you shared your opinion. I'm glad that you survived the poem as I wouldn't want to be responsible for ending your life and preventing all the poems you haven't written yet from reaching the world. ?

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Tue 2nd Mar 2021 21:57

Nice at the beginning but towards the end i tend to kill myself. It does something to me and i hate it. Maybe its okay. Maybe more.

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John Coopey

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 21:19

Thanks for the Likes, Stephen A, Stephen G, Kristian and Julie. Branwell and Holden.

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 21:18

Only three sentences but containing so much...

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 20:40

Thank you for your comment Stephen. I've no idea how life as we know it and life forms as we know them came to be and function, nor do I know how death as we think of it or even as anybody thinks of it could be and function - it is all far beyond my ken. But, I do think there's a very good chance that it might not be exactly what anyone expects and so I suppose I should just hope that it will be 'as good or better than expected' for everyone, whatever they believe in.

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 19:58

I felt the original from this morning was missing a verse. ?

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 19:37

Thank you Keith, A Girl and Stephen G for the likes and kind comments. Thanks to everyone else for the likes. I wasn't sure about this one, I wrote it quickly this morning and thought it should have another verse. Perhaps I will leave it as it is.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 18:35

Thanks for the like & comment ' a girl'. Much appreciated. ( & If you're out for a nice walk, just sample some from the path side. You'll either be full, absolutely ill, or try to fly home! - or possibly all three?)

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 18:26

Thank you very much for your kind comment about my poems. Glad you like them! ?
And welcome to WOL & I look forward to reading more of your stuff! ?

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 18:16

What does it truly mean to be free, and when are we really ready...

Love this masterpiece!

AG

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 18:04

Long time no see Abdul. It was good hearing from you. Wonderful work?

Ak

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:35

A very interesting poem. All the same, I want to cling to the hope that something remains. Perhaps I expect too much.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:26

This poem has weight, Brian. One can feel the cares of a bad day getting heavier. Good one.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:19

A beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:08

Yes, I like the optimism

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:05

Sofa so good

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 16:16

Thank you Nigel for your comment ?

Thanks also to all those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 16:09

So, you just need that printed on a t-shirt
problem solved.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 16:03

something must have cushioned the fall. ?

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 15:57

Phew! Now, that’s a poem.

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 15:54

Stephen where did you find those mushrooms?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 14:10

A timely alternative to the views usually found on WOL.
There is comfort in doing one's own thing.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 14:01

Reminds me of the time some years ago now, when I returned home
to discover that my trouser fly/zip had slid down throughout a
ride and back on the underground rail line. Mortification was the
feeling and I hoped the fit of my pants had managed to keep "the
blind drawn" on my travels. ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 13:20

It's the final curtain call ?

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Nigel Astell

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 12:12

Fear without despair
smile with laughter
as both in disarray.

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