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jennifer Malden

Sun 2nd May 2021 18:19

Nice One. Some things are more appreciated with time, think of wine, antiques, trees, an old saddle is infinitely more comfortable than a new one! An old friend too is usually worth more than a new, just because of the time passed. Like Jason's comment too.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 2nd May 2021 17:56

Unfortunately too true. The hope they had and the hard work they did to achieve it are now scorned. We want it all and we want it now.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 2nd May 2021 17:53

Separation is dramatic, and divorce unimaginable!!! Nice one.

Jennifer

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Philipos

Sun 2nd May 2021 16:41


Funny you should say that. ?

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 2nd May 2021 16:24

Thanks Greg and Brian. A very interesting discussion. Let's continue to enjoy reading him, without minimising the other issues.

Best wishes Steve

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 2nd May 2021 14:58

All the holes, tears, lines, scars and wrinkles are just signs that we've truly lived, just yesterdays kiss on the face of today. ❤❤

J. x

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d.knape

Sun 2nd May 2021 14:05

thanks M.C. for your comment on that poem.
we will not mention it by name
in order not to scare anyone.

what exactly does MC stand for?

besides master of ceremonies?

?

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Stuart Vanner

Sun 2nd May 2021 12:47

Some people may see that this is an updated version of a poem, which I have written before, and which has some alterations.

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julie callaghan

Sun 2nd May 2021 12:11

Thanks for the like Aviva

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julie callaghan

Sun 2nd May 2021 12:10

Thanks for the likes. Nigel, Stephen A, Stephen G and Tom.

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Sanja Atanasovska

Sun 2nd May 2021 07:43

Thanks.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Sun 2nd May 2021 06:05

If poets are to be cancelled for having irregular (evil? depending on what passes for that in whatever generation) views, at times, then I'm afraid very few would survive scrutiny. I read poets whose viewpoints I abhor, but value something in their writing anyway-- yes, separate the poetry from the poet.

And Stephen, good job

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J.D. Bardo

Sun 2nd May 2021 05:34

I love this Aviva, "Dream on" past all the holes and tares that got us all of our memories, I hope we are around long enough to make new shoes old and comfy, and a new teddy bear soft and broken in.
thank-you for sharing this. J.D.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 2nd May 2021 03:33

Thank you Nigel for this, and in fact all of your poetic responses. ?

I am sure people will soon be visiting my poetry blogs just to find your poems, and I'm very happy if they do!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 2nd May 2021 03:29

Thank you Nigel, for your poetic response ?

I don't know if I should but I feel incredibly proud to see that my comment inspired a poem. You captured the essence of it perfectly.


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Nigel Astell

Sun 2nd May 2021 00:41

Well done Andy

2021
Big birthday bash
awaits next year
twelve months to go.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 2nd May 2021 00:19

Gales blow raw emotion
soaking soft cotton wool.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 2nd May 2021 00:06

Thinking and feeling
locked inside poetry
keeps it forever.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 1st May 2021 23:22

Well said, Stephen. And I agree with you about separating the poetry from the man.

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Philipos

Sat 1st May 2021 21:39


Enjoyable read Sanja, welcome aboard WOL.

P. ?

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 1st May 2021 17:59

I feel the same as you do, Greg. I have always struggled to reconcile Larkin's wonderful poetry with the his appalling personal views. One cannot dress them up or attempt to contextualise them; they were blatantly racist and should be condemned as such. I heard about the passing of Anthony Thwaite but I don't think it is a bad thing that the letters and all the subsequent revelations became public.

So how can I write a poem like this? Well, unlike, say Wagner (whose well-known prejudices are vividly on display in his operas), Larkin's racism does not by and large seem to have spilled over into his poetry. I don't subscribe fully to the idea that you can separate the art from the artist but I do think one can enjoy Larkin's verse without having to give consideration to his bigotry. The poetry exists in its own universe, which seems blissfully sealed off from his more uncomfortable views, although of course his poems are not always devoted to pleasant themes. My poem is concerned with the poetry, not the man.

So this poem should really be a tribute to the poetry, not to Larkin himself. I'll change the postscript to this effect.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 1st May 2021 15:55

The sad but true story of life in human terms when progress is
measured in profit's worth. Check author Bill Bryson's comments
about the activities of the US Park Service in his book "A Walk in the Woods". It provides dispiriting reading.
We know times pass and all things change
And, that, it seems, now includes the range!
The sound of the saw that sees an ancient tree fall
Precedes the cement mixer that builds another mall. ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 1st May 2021 15:43

Thank you for the sudden appearance of this poem,
It resonates deeply and will also be like a wandering bird returning,
At the bus stop, the dinner table, on waking.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 1st May 2021 15:37

Thank you Ghazala and Adam for commenting ?

Thank you also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

I'm really grateful to everyone who takes the time to read, like, or comment my poetry. I know I use the same couple of phrases to offer thanks each time but I really do mean it each time ?

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julie callaghan

Sat 1st May 2021 14:53

Thanks for the likes KJ and JD, it was written for a video, hard to represent with a screenshot

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Adam Whitworth

Sat 1st May 2021 14:51

I really like this lovely poem. Composed as only an artist could.

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kJ Walker

Sat 1st May 2021 10:56

Together interred (in turd)?

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julie callaghan

Sat 1st May 2021 09:56

I’ll take extra care next time I visit.

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julie callaghan

Sat 1st May 2021 09:54

Thanks for the likes, Hugh, Ghazala and Stephen G. Thanks also for the kind comment. Upsetting scenes indeed.

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Ghazala lari

Sat 1st May 2021 04:29

Beautiful ?

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Greg Freeman

Fri 30th Apr 2021 23:35

I am a Larkin fan too, Stephen, but not unashamed, I fear. The racism that he shared in his letters to Monica was awful. The poet who edited his poems and those letters. Anthony Thwaite, recently died. He might have spared Larkin's reputation somewhat had he kept them out. I'm not saying he should have done, but ...

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 30th Apr 2021 21:03

Thank you Nigel for commenting ?


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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 30th Apr 2021 20:54

Thank you Stephen for commenting ?

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

When we put exactly what we're thinking and feeling into a poem, it turns out that it isn't only available for us then to know what we're thinking and feeling, but stays available (if we let it) so we can never forget exactly what we thought and felt. It can be a mixed blessing.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 30th Apr 2021 17:21

Wonderful images, Brian. Has a certain horror theme to it, redeemed in the last verse.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 30th Apr 2021 17:17

My thanks to Aviva for the enthusiastic response and to Ferris for his support. The likes of John, Hugh, Julie, Holden and Leon are also much appreciated.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 30th Apr 2021 17:11

Another lovely, poignant poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 30th Apr 2021 16:58

An impassioned poem, Julie. It really captures the urgency of the situation and its global reach. The pictures that we are seeing are harrowing.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 30th Apr 2021 14:44

I wish I could have read this much earlier in my life ?
I will use the power of your incantation against any future heartache.

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Emma Stradling

Fri 30th Apr 2021 12:47

Thanks. I think i'll leave heart in twice. It is important after all.

I keep meaning to get onto Zoom Greg. It just hasn't happened yet and didn't see this until now.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 30th Apr 2021 10:31

I've now attended another reading, at Bacup, where the poet laureate said specifically that he was aiming to present a different set of poems at each library. It's a great way of appreciating the extent of his work. At one point he disarmingly burst out laughing at a double entendre in one of his poems ... something about pulling his own cracker ...

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Philipos

Fri 30th Apr 2021 10:13



I know what you mean about dreading those 'Big O' occasions. Me too.

Enjoyed.

P ?

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 30th Apr 2021 09:54

Great observational work here Greg. Cities are becoming empty shells as the office work gets devolved into home working, making these significant edifices more like modern sculptures. If MK is anything to go by they are like dead or dying monoliths that nobody wants but even now Santander are building another huge one!!

Mayors eh? No matter what stripe!

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Greg Freeman

Fri 30th Apr 2021 09:46

Thanks for the comments, MC, Phil, Stephen, and Graham, and for the Like, Holden. It was my first visit to London in over a year. I wasn't impressed at what had gone up in my absence. Actually, I'm not against towers per se. But none of these at Vauxhall have any architectural merit - some towers do, imo. These ones are just cheap and very, very nasty.

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julie callaghan

Fri 30th Apr 2021 06:22

Thanks JD and Ferris for the likes. Thanks to everyone blown away with the comments and likes on this attempt. ?

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Nigel Astell

Fri 30th Apr 2021 01:34

Unsure at what to do
the poem says
it is possible
only if you want.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 30th Apr 2021 01:15

2019
Volts of lightning
rubber soled shoes
helped stage fright.

2020
Day off week off
normal working hours
never came back.

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Ferris Ty Taylor

Fri 30th Apr 2021 01:01

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 29th Apr 2021 21:59

Thank you Ghazala and Stephen for commenting ?

Thanks also to everyone who clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

This is one that sometimes makes me wonder 'is it really a poem?'
I can hear myself answer too (two answers): "It is" and "It isn't"

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 29th Apr 2021 20:11

??? Brilliant! Wonderful! Stylish! Clever! Amazing!???

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julie callaghan

Thu 29th Apr 2021 19:39

Thanks for the like Stephen G

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