Rolph David

Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:38

Thank you Hugh for your "like"!

Have a nice Sunday,
regards,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:37

Thank you Steve W., RBK, Naomi and Hugh for your "like"!

Take care,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:36

Thank you Nigel, Yanma and Naomi for your "like"!

Cheerio,
Rolph

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Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:35

Thank you Stephen, Aisha and Naomi for your like!

Cheerio
Rolph

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Rolph David

Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:33

Thank you John C., Yanma, Manish, Naomi and RBK for your "like".

Regards😀

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Rolph David

Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:30

Thank you Naomi and RBK!
Have a nice Sunday,
Regards,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:29

Naomi,
thank you for your "like".
Regards,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:28

Hello Uilleam,
Yes, how billions of our contemporaries do not even begin to realise the seriousness of the situation, of various processes. Or they are masters at repressing and or don't realise it. Long live the weak-minded, for they live their mindless lives without a care in the world!
And the Brexit trauma reverberates... I can see it in many of your lines.
Nevertheless - despite all the chaos that will unfold over the world tomorrow, have a great Sunday!
Best wishes,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:24

Hello Flyntland,
your statement that the poem is a very "uncomfortable read" does not speak in my favour. But these uncomfortable truths need to be put on the table, in the minds of the world who don't want to understand what tomorrow will bring. However, I can already guess what you meant by this statement - as the content is indeed nothing pleasant to read.
Nevertheless, thank you for your comment.
Have a nice Sunday.
Regards,
Rolph

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Russell Jacklin

Sun 19th Jan 2025 13:06

Thank you for your kind comments, much appreciated, I wrote this as a reminder to myself of the way relationships should be rather than the way I do them, my good lady would most of the time want the poet living with her rather than me. She lives in hope of an epiphany.

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HélÚne

Sun 19th Jan 2025 12:51

A buoyant, beautiful poem, Yanma. Wow.

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HélÚne

Sun 19th Jan 2025 12:47

Your granddaughter's drawing of the Earth is spectacular! I really liked the drawing when I first saw it. Now that I know the little artist was drawing the Earth, I like it even more. Blue and green colors of the turning orb, warmed by the yellow light of the far away sun.

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HélÚne

Sun 19th Jan 2025 12:37

A gorgeous, powerful poem, Naomi.
"Let my heart be a fortress
Yet gentle enough to cradle the world." A heart closed off enough so as not to lose oneself in another, but a heart open enough to remain loving and caring. Perhaps many of us learn this lesson after suffering heartache and then healing. Love the title too, Alchemy!

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Naomi

Sun 19th Jan 2025 12:16

Thank you Uilleam. May we both find the strength to cultivate kindness and humility in our hearts.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 19th Jan 2025 11:55

Thank you so much, John, for the comment and wonderful wish.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 19th Jan 2025 11:45

Thanks for the likes:
Red Brick Keshner
Tom Doolan
HélÚne
Naomi
Whilst I was slaving away at this, my latest oeuvre, some patronising git at Co-Pilot who fancies themselves as a poet, told me to re-write it to make it more "concise" or something, for my readers.
My answer to that is a vague: 'something-off!'.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 19th Jan 2025 11:29

Indeed, Rolph.
Trouble is, when those criminals and con-men say: 'jump',
the UK's sycophantic boot-lickers ask:
'how high?'

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 19th Jan 2025 11:22

My prayer too, Naomi.
Give me a kinder heart
Lest I fall to greed
💗

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 19th Jan 2025 11:18

Cobblers to em, Rob.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 19th Jan 2025 11:15

Post traumatic stress disordered.
Shell-shocked.
Exhausted.
💖

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 19th Jan 2025 11:09

Thanks, Yanma.
Hope, Hope, and Hope again.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 19th Jan 2025 11:01

Thanks, branwell.
Life in perspective.

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Flyntland

Sun 19th Jan 2025 10:59

This poem is a bit of a jolt - a timely reminder of how things should be - but in our house at least - are sometimes not.
'Message' aside the poem flows smoothly and easily without any awkward changes in rhythm. Thank you

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Flyntland

Sun 19th Jan 2025 10:49

I am shocked by this progression from morality to immorality, stability to instability, love to hate, honesty to dishonesty—and not just in the U.S.
This poem is very uncomfortable reading.

"For courage, lies in the hearts of the unbowed" has always been true and maybe in time sensibility will take over and worldwide unity will be achieved

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Flyntland

Sun 19th Jan 2025 10:38

My grateful thanks to RBK, Holden, Manish, Yanma, and Naomi
for reading and liking my poem, I value your support.

Rolph I find your comments immensely encouraging - when I get a confidence wobble I go back over them and feel better. Thank you.

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Rolph David

Sun 19th Jan 2025 09:14

Good morning Manish,

Thank you very much for your words of praise. I am pleased when the overall package of one of my poems does not fail to make an impact, i.e. subject matter, metre, rhyme...
Best regards,
Rolph

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branwell kent

Sun 19th Jan 2025 00:43

There are more people like this around now than in 2016.

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Auracle

Sat 18th Jan 2025 18:58

đŸ’ȘIt's Time For The Sledgehammer! đŸ’Ș

I can only dual-wield that in fantasy!

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Auracle

Sat 18th Jan 2025 18:54

That Enlightenment of yours I didn't recognize.

That was my mistake.

Just a small difference between flaw and flow.

My apologies.

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Naomi

Sat 18th Jan 2025 18:30

Dear Rolph,
Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad the piece resonated with you. Vulnerability, longing, and strength are complex themes, and it's rewarding to know that they connected with you. I appreciate your thoughtful feedback.
Naomi

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Rolph David

Sat 18th Jan 2025 18:12

Dear Naomi,
The way you explore vulnerability, longing, and strength is both powerful and moving. The plea for a heart that is both unyielding and compassionate is deeply resonant. Thank you for sharing such a thoughtful piece.
Cheerio,
Rolph

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Rolph David

Sat 18th Jan 2025 18:08

Dear Stuart,
I just wanted to take a moment to truly commend you on your poem "Whatever Happens...". Your words are a beautiful testament to resilience and hope in the face of adversity. The way you capture the weight of life's hardships—yet still hold on to the belief in hope and strength—is both moving and inspiring. The progression of struggles and disappointments, followed by the uplifting recognition of inner resilience, speaks to a universal truth that many can relate to. It's a reminder that, no matter what challenges we face, we can endure and keep moving forward. And as Uilleam correctly puts it: "Don't let the illegitimate grinding get you down!"
Thank you for sharing such a deeply personal and empowering piece of writing. You've managed to turn personal trials into a message of enduring strength, and that's a gift in itself.
Regards,
Rolph

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Tom Doolan

Sat 18th Jan 2025 16:17

Thanks for likes: Uilleam & Manish 👍

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 18th Jan 2025 15:58

Hello Rolph,
I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem by Cavafy😊 The first verse of the translation is very good, but the second one isn't as close to the original meaning, so I found this one as well:

"Even if you cannot shape your life as you want it,
at least try this
as much as you can; do not debase it
in excessive contact with the world,
in the excessive movements and talk.

Do not debase it by taking it,
dragging it often and exposing it
to the daily folly
of relationships and associations,
until it becomes burdensome as an alien life."
(Lockert Library of Poetry in Translation)

Also, I'm adding a link to Cavafy's probably most known poem, which is worth reading I think:
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/51296/ithaka-56d22eef917ec

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sat 18th Jan 2025 15:14

Excellent stuff, RD! Gripping, with impactful choice of words and rhyming.

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Red Brick Keshner

Sat 18th Jan 2025 12:37

Thanks Rolph David đŸ™đŸ»đŸŒ·you are much appreciated and you interaction always welcomed đŸ‘đŸ»

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 18th Jan 2025 11:16

Thank you, Steve.
Speaking of Weatherspoons and mustard - coloured trousers; the guy who was Farage's best mate has been whingeing about the deleterious effects of Brexit on his business!
"Change" is what they promised,
more of the same's what we've got.
Bring on PR and genuine Socialism.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 18th Jan 2025 11:12

Bravo, Stuart.
It's not the destination, but the journey, from which we learn life's lessons.

Nil illegitimum carborundororum desperandum!😉

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 18th Jan 2025 09:13

Thanks for comments and likes:
HélÚne, John.
That’s true, by the way, about my borrowing the rhyme scheme from Wordsworth; he’s told me to keep it, as he no longer has any need for it.
I took my poem for an inaugural reading at my local pub’s arts club the other day. They were mightily impressed. Little did they know that all these years, whilst thinking that I'd been talking complete cobblers, they’d actually been listening to a man of letters, inspired by the spirits, 'in vino veritas', as it were.

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Rolph David

Sat 18th Jan 2025 08:08

Good morning Holden,
Your extraordinary biographical text in Greek in the form of a poem made me extremely curious, as it is very unusual, unique and special!
Was it translated correctly?
Greetings,
Rolph

"And if you can't make your life the way you want it,
this at least try
as much as you can: don't humiliate her.
"in the many contexts of the world,
in the many movements and speeches.

Don't humiliate her by degrading her,
by turning often and exposing her
of relations and associations.
the daily foolishness of her relations,
till she be as a stranger to a foreign fornicator."

C.P. Cavafy

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Naomi

Sat 18th Jan 2025 06:59

Thank you Marla.

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Eduardo

Sat 18th Jan 2025 04:41

Graham, I’m really happy to know that the poem inspired a new idea for your work! I sincerely appreciate you sharing that with me. It’s always rewarding to know that words can spark something new and creative. Thank you so much, and good luck with your new project!



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Eduardo

Sat 18th Jan 2025 04:39

Flyntland, what a wonderful compliment to receive! I'm truly happy that the poem touched you in such a special way. Thank you so much for your kind words and for choosing your favorite lines. It’s great to know that the poem had such a hypnotic and ethereal effect on you. It's always a pleasure to share something that resonates so deeply. Thank you again!



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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 18th Jan 2025 01:55

Thanks Souajit for these beautiful reflections and feedback, much appreciated, 😃

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 17th Jan 2025 19:54

Apologies!
I forgot to mention that the method for typing accents is for when typing within a WORD document.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 17th Jan 2025 18:04

Dangerous indeed. and by the looks of things there are people in the UK who could be blackmailed by him; but he's not the only desperate nutter out there!
I'm still trying to get my head around the pronunciation 'New Keller' - where the heck does that come from - is it some kind of lager?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 17th Jan 2025 17:48

Perhaps you could rename your post 'Top of the Poops'.

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John Coopey

Fri 17th Jan 2025 17:47

Should go down well in performance.

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Marla Joy

Fri 17th Jan 2025 17:44

Naomi, Another Wow! Marla

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 17th Jan 2025 17:42

Thank you HélÚne.
I borrowed the rhyme scheme from one William Wordsworth.
Free beer tomorrow is the prize for the person who deciphers it.😉
It’s the Earth! Our granddaughter drew it, having suddenly developed an interest in things planetary when her dad got her a telescope
.I think she’s got over that now. She’s concentrating on being top in her class at reading; oh, and at being spoiled rotten!😍

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