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Yanma Hidayah

Thu 16th Jan 2025 18:05

Thank you so much for your kind words, @Flyntland! I'm truly humbled by your appreciation. My poems are indeed a way for me to express the peace and understanding I find within, and if they can offer a glimpse of that, it means the world to me. I believe that sharing what we have, whether it's peace, joy, or love, can bring us closer, even if our paths are different. I'm grateful that you connect with them in your own way.

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Flyntland

Thu 16th Jan 2025 17:15

I love the way your kind and gentle nature shines through in your writing, I do not practice any form of religion, nor want to, but I would love a small share of your inner peace.
Perhaps that is what your poems are all about - sharing what you have.

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John Coopey

Thu 16th Jan 2025 15:08

Thankyou, Stephen.

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Flyntland

Thu 16th Jan 2025 13:38

Thank you so much to Auacle - Holden and Yanma your likes are very encouraging and i am grateful for them.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 13:03

Link to Green grow the rushes-o

https://youtu.be/cjht2xQripM?list=RDcjht2xQripM

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 12:53

Thanks, Rolph.
Humour's a funny thing😐couched as it is, in all sorts of cultural references and life experiences.
I'm a Lancashire lad, and love the Scousers' take on life, but we also share many things in common with the Yorkshiremen across them thar hills!
In my twenties, I had a Geordie work colleague, who was ex-forces; he was as mad as a hatter, but we got on like a house on fire!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 12:41

Play 'em at their own game, Tom.😊

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Rolph David

Thu 16th Jan 2025 12:37

Hi Uilleam,
I really enjoyed your "pseudo"-limerick "Taking the Mic"—it’s such a playful and intriguing piece! As someone who isn’t a native English speaker and doesn’t have that strong familiarity with British culture, I found myself both amused and curious as I tried to uncover all the layers of meaning in your words.
The title, "Taking the Mic," struck me as a clever pun. I realised it might play on "taking the mickey", too. If that’s what you were going for, it’s a wonderfully subtle nod to British humour.
I also loved the line about nothing rhyming with "Beano." While I initially thought of it as a bit of random fun, I learned that "The Beano" is a classic British comic, and I now see how that adds a nostalgic or cultural twist to the humour. Plus, if "Beano" as a slang term for a party was part of your wordplay, it adds even more depth.
Finally, the ending with "Green grow the rushes-o" was such a surprising yet delightful touch. Though I’m not familiar with this folk song, I can sense its communal and traditional vibe, which feels like a contrast to the modern Yeti microphone. It’s a charming blend of the old and the new, which I really appreciate now that I’ve thought about it more.
I’ll admit, some of these layers didn’t fully click at first because of my cultural background, but that made your piece even more fascinating to unpack. Thank you for the humour and creativity—it’s a fun ride, even for someone like me who’s still learning about British quirks and idioms!
Best,
Rolph

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 11:52

....or, for the sake of the literati who take their poetry seriously:

".....the rushes grow green-o"😐?

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Naomi

Thu 16th Jan 2025 11:51

Thank you Auracle. I appreciate it.

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Naomi

Thu 16th Jan 2025 11:49

Thanks Uilleam!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 11:19

Thanks for your likes and comments:
Rolph
Stephen Gospage
Naomi

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Auracle

Thu 16th Jan 2025 10:40

This is meaningful poetry with value.

It's hard for YouTube to get me there.

Thanks.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 09:16

Does this post count as satyr; or is it someone acting the goat?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 09:10

I'm recording with my Yeti,
nothing rhymes with Beano,
but sing along with me and Betty,
'Green grow the rushes-o'.
😁😁😁

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 08:56

Rolph, your picture of Trump portrays him as puppet-master.

I fear that image may be far from accurate, and that there are actually many, out-of-sight, out-of-mind puppeteers who are controlling the strings.
I also fear that the much-vaunted so-called "ceasefire" may merely be a cynical and short-lived ploy in his and others' battle for power for its own sake.......I hope I'm wrong.

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John Coopey

Thu 16th Jan 2025 08:42

Some of the best poetry I’ve read on this site. More please.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 08:35

Thanks, Naomi.
Your last two stanzas are beautiful.
💐

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 08:27

“Squirming a bit” is spot on Stephen.
I’ve often said that the best comedy / satire is that which, however far-fetched it appears, holds a grain of truth, which mirrors real life; in which I can recognise myself, and say ‘yep, that’s me, that grumpy old git, that selfish sod! ‘One foot in the grave’, and ‘Fawlty Towers’ being great examples.
And, in the context of politics, we should remember that many totalitarians and those of a fascist turn of mind, have professed a liking for poetry and the arts, but only that which serves their agendas!

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 16th Jan 2025 07:56

I admire this poem, Rolph, and I like its optimistic ending, although I remain worried. Something savage and brutal seems to have captured the Republican Party, with horrible prospect of J D Vance in 2028.
But we have to stay positive, I agree.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 16th Jan 2025 07:51

I still squirm a bit when I see that Fawlty Towers episode, Uilleam, but of course that's the reaction which was intended. We must be allowed to satirise bigotry, otherwise......

Thanks for this.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 16th Jan 2025 07:44

Thanks, John. Good satire is funny and a bit uncomfortable, and this qualifies on both counts.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 16th Jan 2025 07:01

Thank you for your kind comments and suggestions, Graham, Flyntland, Uilleam and Rolph, and to everyone who liked this poem.
We now see a subtle (and sometimes not so subtle) pushback against climate change measures, but of course the problems remain and get worse every year. It is depressing to see denial of reality, particularly since the technology which exists to solve many of our problems (electric vehicles, wind turbines) has become hi-jacked by culture wars.

Thanks once again.

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John Coopey

Wed 15th Jan 2025 23:53

Oooo no, Reg. We should never let gullibility be forgotten.
And thanks for the Likes, Red Brick, Naomi and Aisha.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 15th Jan 2025 22:26

Thanks, Rolph.
"In God we trust, and our God is money."

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 15th Jan 2025 21:11

Thanks Rolph.
My original inspiration was an episode of Fawlty Towers, titled "The Germans", (who were guests) in which Basil Fawlty goes off on an hysterically funny rant about Hitler.
He'd warned one of the staff to not mention the war; but due to his (guilt inspired?) paranoia it all went downhill from there!
I ended up making a segue to the Tom and Jerry cartoon characters.

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Flyntland

Wed 15th Jan 2025 20:51

I am not sure if 'like' is the right word but I agree with everything that you are clearly saying.
I do like your optimism at the end of your poem, but it hasn't dispelled this sense of dread that haunts my thoughts. I can't forget the ruthless way that Trump insisted that prisoners on death row should be killed with no mercy shown, and he was proud of it.

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Rolph David

Wed 15th Jan 2025 20:33

Dear Uilleam,

I’ve been reflecting on your limerick, and I think it’s more than just a lighthearted jab/jibe at the Germans. The "Jerry" reference cleverly ties to the Germans, making the limerick a subtle allusion to World War II.
The image of Jerry "farting in Tom’s face" trivialises the origins of the war, as if to say it all began with something small and silly but escalated into catastrophe. The line about Sauerkraut not being floral further emphasises the harshness and bitterness of the war—no beauty, just a sharp, pungent reality.
It’s a playful yet poignant way of reflecting on history, poking fun at the irony of conflict while still confronting its serious consequences. What’s your take on this?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 15th Jan 2025 19:36

Might I venture that it was bitterness that got us in the current pit of mire, Reggies.

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Reggie's Ghost

Wed 15th Jan 2025 18:24

Move on John before you get eaten up with bitterness.

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John Coopey

Wed 15th Jan 2025 16:28

“Lumps everyone together” - that’s the point, Rolph. “It’s knowing they’re foreign which makes them so mad”. (F&S).

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Sakshi Jain

Wed 15th Jan 2025 16:15

Thank you so much Marla Joy

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Flyntland

Wed 15th Jan 2025 13:49

AH! Now I get it, Perhaps your "Senior figure" and my well-bred 'lady' are close acquaintances.

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Rolph David

Wed 15th Jan 2025 13:37

Your poem is also very reminiscent of Adolf Hoffmann's ‘Jeder Schuss ein Russ’, jeder Stoß ein Franzos‘, jeder Tritt ein Britt’, jeder Klaps ein Japs’, which were once sold as propaganda postcards. It is very derogatory towards individual nations and although I am an advocate of black, even pitch-black humour, I have to say that I find this form of humour very borderline, as it lumps everyone together, as if one bad person or only a few people make up the entire character of a nation.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 15th Jan 2025 13:30

There are two lines in this poem that have given me an idea for a new piece of work and for that I thank you. Good work!

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Red Brick Keshner

Wed 15th Jan 2025 12:48

Yeah, and there are times that it turns out hilarious like in this case- @Uilleam 🌷😁😄

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 15th Jan 2025 12:04

Whatever bloats your float😊

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 15th Jan 2025 12:02

Flyntland, your description of “a well-bred 'lady' rider” says it all: arrogance and entitlement hiding behind a façade of respectability: round our way, anyone else indulging in such behaviour would earn their correct titles: “low-life thugs”.

My previous comment referred to a senior figure, recently accused of bias in favour of hunting, who himself commissioned, a so-called “Review”, which surprise, surprise, found that there was 'no evidence' of collusion with hunt groups….well, there wouldn’t be, would there!

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Flyntland

Wed 15th Jan 2025 11:59

This is such a beautiful, calm, gentle poem.

I have picked my favourite phrases but the reality is I love every single word of it.

"Where solitude becomes company
and silence is profound"

"Expecting no more than the silence
that returns us to ourselves"

It is beautifully written both hypnotic and ethereal, thank you for it.

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Flyntland

Wed 15th Jan 2025 11:46

RBK - Holden - Auracle Thankyou for reading, I am very grateful for my flowers.

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Flyntland

Wed 15th Jan 2025 11:41

Thank you Rolph for your detailed comment,
You use the word "Primal" which sums up what I 'saw' when I was writing the poem but I would also like to add 'sinister'.
In my minds eye the hunt ended with the hunter slipping away into the night,
However, again, in my mind's eye, the victim need not be an animal; it could just as easily be a nameless haunting fear. " Primal" and "sinister" suit both versions.
This poem is one that arrived unbidden and was put down on paper with little effort.
Thank you for your encouragement I appreciate it.

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Flyntland

Wed 15th Jan 2025 10:51

Marla Thank you so much for your comment - feedback is so important.

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Flyntland

Wed 15th Jan 2025 10:47

Uilleam Thank you for your like and comment.
I follow the Hunt Sabs on Facebook, so I can tell you that the tide is beginning to turn. The Sabs are now equipped with vehicles, video cameras and drones with cameras. The evidence that they can gather is now indisputable and is handed over to the police who have been very helpful but do not have time themselves to follow the hunt for hours.
One video was particularly offensive when a well-bred 'lady' rider was heard shouting for the Huntsman to "use your whip - these people are so ignorant" I think that says it all.

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Yanma Hidayah

Wed 15th Jan 2025 06:30

Thank you so much @Sourajit for your kind and insightful feedback! I'm truly moved that the imagery and themes of the poem resonated with you. The metaphor of the train holds a special place in my heart, symbolizing the bonds that shape us and the inevitable journey of change. Knowing that the exploration of fear, loss, and connection feels relatable makes the act of writing even more fulfilling. Your words inspire me, thank you for that!

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Yanma Hidayah

Wed 15th Jan 2025 06:21

Thank you so much for your thoughtful and encouraging words! I'm deeply touched that the poem resonated with you in such a meaningful way. Aging is often seen as a challenge, but I wanted to highlight it as a source of strength and wisdom, and I'm glad that message came through. Your interpretation of the themes of memory, identity, and connection truly honors the intention behind the poem. I deeply appreciate your support, Thank you @Sourajit Nandi

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Naomi

Wed 15th Jan 2025 04:45

Thank you Marla.

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Naomi

Wed 15th Jan 2025 04:44

I agree Graham. Obsessions are consuming and often leads to irrational thinking.It’s unfortunate when they become overwhelming, and often it’s only after a difficult experience that we realize how they’ve affected us.

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john short

Tue 14th Jan 2025 23:26

Hi Sourajit,

Thanks for your feedback. I'm pleased you liked the poem.

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Marla Joy

Tue 14th Jan 2025 22:24

I feel encouraged and inspired.

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