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Mon 7th Jun 2021 19:26
Suggests a foster home?
Comment is about A Passing Thought (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Thanks for the likes and for the comments Stephen G and Stephen A. I would definitely recommend a visit.... perhaps pick a rainy day this summer!!?
Comment is about Costa Del Kirkby (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thank you for the Like & comment Martin, much appreciated ?
And for the Likes, Aviva, Tom & Holden, always grateful ?
Comment is about Equilibrium (blog)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
Are you Phillipos in disguise? You write very much like him? Anyway, good stuff !
Comment is about flow of corruption (blog)
Original item by Igneus
My head hurts ? Brilliantly presented food for thought, John. As always ?
Comment is about Two legs good? (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Sounds delightful, Julie, book me in for a few days ??
Comment is about Costa Del Kirkby (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Both moving, and beautiful ?
Comment is about A Passing Thought (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Brings back memories, Julie. I was there many moons ago.
Comment is about Costa Del Kirkby (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
A nice observation, Martin. 'Dance the dance of blokes.' I must have done that.
Comment is about Blokes (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
A natural encounter which is defined by it masculinity and casual approach. The ability to relate to another human being without being judgemental. A gesture of friendship at no cost. Now this is poetry as it speaks of harmony
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about Blokes (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
wonderfully put. I agree fully that a heart should be one not stolen.
Comment is about Love-no room for lust (blog)
Original item by Jadia4708au
This almost has a rap quality about it which I like. Wonderfully constructed.
Nice one
Comment is about flow of corruption (blog)
Original item by Igneus
There are so many great lines here that I cannot pick one out above the rest. Your words are definitely Dali like in their interpretation
can't beat surrealism
Love it
Comment is about Two legs good? (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
I like the regularity of Tap Tap in the verses which almost give a sense of urgency.
Nicely done
Comment is about Tap. Tap. (blog)
Original item by Gary Cuming
This has a beautiful flow to it which takes the reader on the journey that you describe.
Nice one
Comment is about Equilibrium (blog)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
Thanks for the Likes, Aviva, Holden and Stephen.
Comment is about MOTHER-TRUMPERS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Mon 7th Jun 2021 03:08
it seems this time of learning who you had become and the mental battle that you were in helped you so much.
Comment is about Naomi And I (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Thank you kJ. I am not sure I take the photos from Dr Amir Khan Twitter account. He gave me permission to screenshot them and use them on here. If you have Twitter he is worth following as posts some lovely videos and photos.
Comment is about Yorkshire Today (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Lovely words.
Where is the photo of? It looks familiar
Comment is about Yorkshire Today (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
The fear that these sirens bring
you can hear inside your poem Andy.
Comment is about Peace from the Sirens (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Those feelings stare and won't go away
inside this poem there is no hideaway.
Comment is about ^SoCiEtY^ (blog)
Original item by Blackrose
Thanks for all your likes
Aviva
Holden
Stephen G
blackrose
and
Moon .girl.
Comment is about Pimp My Ride (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Burning heat the race is on
thanks Aviva.
Comment is about Pimp My Ride (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Thank you for commenting Ghazala
Thanks for your good wishes too
Let us both have strength (or find it) for all that we face.
Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem
Comment is about Incommunicado (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Nice picture of past times, Kevin. A favourite of mine was (still is) Nutrocker by Bee Bumble and the Stingers.
Comment is about The Old Rugged Cross (A sequel to Flo's Domain) (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
Thank you Nigel for your poetic response.
Being believed in
Helps us believe in ourselves,
But even if the whole world
Acts with doubts and disbelief
And mistaken mistrust
We should doubt the rest of the world
Because we are closest to our own truth
And even we don't know everything that we can do.
Comment is about Genesis (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Thank you for commenting, John ?
(sorry for the late response, too)
Jumping the gun almost always leads to the unexpected ?
Comment is about Jumping The Gun (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Believing in yourself
gives you that chance
that built up in every line.
Comment is about Genesis (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
This would make a great heavy metal or even death metal song, I can hear it performed in that sort of style.
Comment is about wrath (blog)
Original item by Igneus
I’m pretty sure I’ve heard you do this at Well Spoken, Kevin. Tin tin, indeed,
Comment is about Silvie (a re-post) (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
Dear Nigel, thanks for your poem! I was just speaking with a patient the other day who had a mysterious shadow turn up on his lung scan in which he is waiting for the biopsy for the results. the waiting game sure is hard. Thank you for articulating this so nicely in your words. Best wishes, Rasa
Comment is about Dentist, Doctor and getting to The Hospital (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Thanks Greg
I'd love a jukebox too, but not only can't I afford one, but I don't have room for one either. Maybe one day if I win the lottery.
Keith I'm glad you explained yourself before the image of you in drag fully formed. I can remember being obsessed with Tocatta by Sky and playing it ad-nauseam on the jukebox . I don't even like that tune now.
I assume that some pubs do still have jukeboxes, but the one I mostly use prides itself on not having one.
Thanks also for those who pressed like.
Cheers Kevin
Comment is about The Old Rugged Cross (A sequel to Flo's Domain) (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
I got into difficulty playing I-Spy trying to give clues about something that wasn’t there.
Comment is about hOl-Es!,,,, (blog)
Original item by Edbreathe
The feeling is intense where you wish to communicate but silence is better due to some good and unavoidable reasons. May God gives strength at such times.
Beautifully expressed piece indeed! I like your choice of words?
Comment is about Incommunicado (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Sat 5th Jun 2021 01:14
Thank you, Moon.girl, for the beautiful comment ?.
Comment is about Off-key (blog)
Original item by Holden Moncrieff
Thanks to Ghazala, Holden and Pete for taking the time to like this simple allegory.
Regards,
Chris Hubbard
Comment is about Lifeboat (blog)
Original item by Chris Hubbard
Thank you kindly Ghazala. I am trying to do the heart's work when I write. This poem had its origin in talking to a man who was one of the British soldiers who liberated Buchenwold one of the earliest Nazi death camps, ironically situated near to Weimar,
the epicentre of German culture. It wasn't just Germans who treated Jewish people appallingly. Christianity and Islam have long histories of anti-Jewish hatred. We need to make recompense. John
Comment is about The unsolved (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
An interesting and moving poem, Keith.
Comment is about Identity (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Hang on, I can think of something else about him that's "entirely anti-meritocratic". Quite a few, actually.
Comment is about Former editor Boris Johnson wins Spectator's £1,000 limerick competition (May 2016) (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
And my thanks to everyone for the likes.?
Comment is about The Little Book of Love (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Aviva, I wonder which one would sell better, in these dark times? Thanks for the comment, Julie. Yes, airports, perhaps we should tag along with a G7 delegation. Thank you for the kind message, Ghazala. Best wishes in your endeavours too - you seem to be doing rather well.
John - you are quite right, of course, although I plead not guilty to the head banging. I must be careful not to appear too grumpy, or world-weary, especially as I avoided by seconds getting caught in a thunderstorm today. Result.
Comment is about The Little Book of Love (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Nigel Astell
Mon 7th Jun 2021 19:45
a space once filled is still
now it holds a memory.
Comment is about A Passing Thought (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari