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Jeff Dawson

Mon 29th Sep 2008 18:35

Baboooska!! She is Pete, I agree, cheers Jeff

PS like the disturbing stage poem!

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 29th Sep 2008 18:33

Brilliant Pete, and a superb performance of it last night, the items of emotional attachment really made me laugh, the panini stickers - fantastic!

Great to see you, and remember in the event of a nuclear attack, draw your curtains to take out the initial blast!!

Cheers Jeffanucleararmour!!!

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Horace Thespider

Mon 29th Sep 2008 15:30

Thanks for your encouraging response to my poem 'monosodium glutamate'. I enjoyed reading your material

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Freda Davis

Mon 29th Sep 2008 00:31

You're right Janet, I was a bit previous here. Thanks for the reaction. Freda

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Sun 28th Sep 2008 11:47

Aw, this is so sad and almost wistful.
Death by chocolate sounds divine.mmmmmm..

Although i once sent a card to my brother-in-law which had a picture of a waiter asking a man what sweet he'd like. When he asked for death by chocolate please, a huge bar of chocolate dropped from a great height, squashing him flat.
ha ha.
Sorry, couldn't resist that bit of sarcasm.
Love your poem.
Janet.x

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Sun 28th Sep 2008 11:18

Good STUFF.
Loved this poem with a great rhythm.
Would be a great performance poem.
Some really fantastic lines.
Love Janet.x

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Sun 28th Sep 2008 11:10

Oh yes, i like this one too.
There always seems to be something missing.
I know what's missing in my life but i can't put a percentage on it.

Is anything ever 100 % ?
Love Janet.xx

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Sun 28th Sep 2008 11:04

The veneer that holds the steer of the stag.
Love that line Pete.

I know quite a few people who live in the bottom of a bottle. Very sad sight.

Love Janet.xx

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Daniel Hooks

Sun 28th Sep 2008 10:59

Great poem and a bit political or a bit of a parody if those are the right words!

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Sun 28th Sep 2008 10:47

Hi Pete,
and a spoonful of sugar makes the medicine go down....
Nowt wrong with a sweet treat mate.

Loving your poem.
Janet.xx

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shoeless

Sun 28th Sep 2008 10:24

mood swings , like being on a fairground ride .... enjoy it while it lasts

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clarissa mckone

Sun 28th Sep 2008 04:03

Ditto ! or is it bingo? Wow you are a wealth of information. Is there a word search in the guardian? I dont care for crosswords. Thtas cool about the battery and lemons. if I can make it into a bomb shelter thats great, but I bet Ill just fall down and die. If they dont round me up for a fema camp and gas me first. great little rant, I enjoyed it much!

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clarissa mckone

Sun 28th Sep 2008 03:51

wow, well much of the world is a disaster, and many follow it. seems you enjoy watching people, so do I. They are fasinating.You know he may be perfectly happy with his life. consumer greed is a real problem, but they shop to try and get happy, and it does not work very long. I see it everyday.

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clarissa mckone

Sun 28th Sep 2008 03:45

ooohhh I do like this one! Never belive that others are just slap happy all the time. Even the rich get cancer and die. Happy is a state of mind. its accepting the day as it comes, and understanding not every day will be fun, and thus you are not happy everyday. I guess some cats are happy everyday. Mine are. loved the poem and the last lines!

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clarissa mckone

Sun 28th Sep 2008 03:42

Is she still so skinny? I know she is big over there, and I wouldnt dare to say anything. I enjoy Enya very much.

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clarissa mckone

Sun 28th Sep 2008 03:40

Hi Peter,
Well, Marilyn had a make up artist, a person to dress her, even stitch her into dresses. she had a hair dresser 24/7. she had profesional photographers, and she had money. ah she was not happy at all. I enjoyed this poem.

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clarissa mckone

Sun 28th Sep 2008 03:37

ah Pete,
Happy , what is it? where is it? it has to be balanced, it comes from within, its not always around. find the little things. thats what i do. loved the poem

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clarissa mckone

Sun 28th Sep 2008 03:31

Hi Peter,
I enjoyed this poem. you know its not a sin to eat yummy things from time to time. I like the whole poem. I love kaleidoscopes, not full of guilt though, full of memorys and happy.

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clarissa mckone

Sun 28th Sep 2008 03:24

Yes they are elusive, loved the poem peter
its so my work and you had such fun with this one. I had fun reading it! yahoo happy poem

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Pete Crompton

Sat 27th Sep 2008 19:49

superb poetry.
very clever.
neatly crafted
most enjoyable.
My kind of poet.

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Pete Crompton

Sat 27th Sep 2008 17:49

Thanks Louise n Horace
yea I was in there today buying a hoze-lock nozzle for my garden hose. They are elusive.

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Louise Coulson

Sat 27th Sep 2008 17:05

Hi Pete

This really says soooo much. I've been having a bit of a crisis lately over the state of none relationships and thinking that B&Q would be good! Thankfully I have great friends to remind me who I really am and so realise the grass isn't greener. Liberty is pretty much everything for many of us .... thank you all for letting me remember this very lately, you all know who you are.

Great sentiments Pete puts it all in a nutshell x

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Horace Thespider

Sat 27th Sep 2008 16:09

I have lived this life. Your poem touched a nerve.

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Sat 27th Sep 2008 11:10

Brrrrr.... flippin 'eck Freda. Let's get Autumn out the way first.
Just joking of course. Lovely poem.

Love Janet.x

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Sat 27th Sep 2008 04:51

Hello, Antonio

The poem is good. I found your imagination quite amazing and also amusing! The creative site of you shows well in this imaginary write.
It sounds at the last lines as you had some fan at night that put you at ease...Lol:)
Correct me if I am wrong...OK?

I like the style in your Sonnets!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Sat 27th Sep 2008 04:44

Hi, Jeff

Sorry to scare you with my poem. I did not mean that!! This was all fiction my friend.
Thank you for the wonderful comment!

Will not write dark poems anymore...Smile…:))

Have a great weekend!!

Take Care,
Zuzanna

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Philip Golding

Sat 27th Sep 2008 02:47

Thanks for the kind words, It was good to see you at Manky Poets and at Sale Waterside Arts Centre. Yes this is the type of poetry amongst Emotional Rainbows

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Sat 27th Sep 2008 01:22

Very intriguing piece. Your words paint such a vivid image of someone standing before a classroom of kids with ruler in hand and lesson on mind. Very well done. :)

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Sat 27th Sep 2008 01:19

Hi, Moira. Thank you so very much for your comment on my poem, Tether.

Take care. :)

Melissa

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 26th Sep 2008 23:56

Hi Melissa, yet again I can identify with this, I hurt someone once, not intentionally, I wasn't acting responsibly at the time. If i could turn back the clock and show her I've changed..... too late however, but you summed it up perfectly, take care Jeff X

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 26th Sep 2008 23:52

Wonderful lines and description Phil, painted a great picture, could have been there!

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 26th Sep 2008 23:37

hi Phil, good to see you last friday. Great stuff this, I assume its from Emotional rainbows, a good sign of things to come!

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 26th Sep 2008 23:10

Hi Moira, you can conjugate me anytime!

Love this, lines - 'You walk in and talk crap and we shut down. I squash your control with a flick of my ruler - excellent stuff, sounds an interesting classroom situation you got there! Jeff x

Across a geeks head

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 26th Sep 2008 23:04

Awwww, thanx Moira, only saw my name at the end as I read down! I was going to say 'Moira for PM' anyway!!

I like your attitude, hope Pete's read it. I'm okay if you're concerned after reading my poem, it comes and goes!

Keep on writing, good fun and really like what I've seen so far but where's your pic, not seen that! Ha! Jeff X

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 26th Sep 2008 22:54

Hang in there mate, sometimes this is just what you need to give you that serenity to put things into perspective. Takes a lot to share mate, but best to get it off your chest, as you know, i know. Take care and see you soon, cheers Jeff

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Fri 26th Sep 2008 19:46

enjoyed this. I know of a vicar in a punk band.

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Fri 26th Sep 2008 19:42

I felt like I was there. Really enjoyed this.

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Fri 26th Sep 2008 14:04

Hi Melissa,
lovely sentiment in your poem. Shows you care what people think.
Clarissa's right though. Once you've made your peace, it's time to move forward.
Regret is a very negative feeling. Forgive yourself and others find it easier to forgive you.

Love and light,
Janet.xx

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Paul F Blackburn

Wed 24th Sep 2008 21:19

First ten Photographs by Stevie Turner, all the rest by Seamus Kelly - www.shayart.co.uk

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Paul F Blackburn

Wed 24th Sep 2008 21:08

Photographs by Stevie Turner

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Philip Golding

Wed 24th Sep 2008 20:26

Hi Clarissa,
It was a tounge in cheek fun poking poem at my face. The Parkinson's does effect the muscles in my face but I wanted to write about it in a light hearted way.
Thank you for your comment

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Philip Golding

Wed 24th Sep 2008 20:15

Thank you Mark for your kind comment

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 24th Sep 2008 19:00

Hi Mirna some familiar feelings here, take care Jeff

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 24th Sep 2008 18:50

One day closer indeed, live it to the full, a fitting tribute Pete, cheers Jeff

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 24th Sep 2008 18:44

Hi Pete, a wonderful piece of work, stark fear and reality in a modern world that doesn't know, I can feel the depression in there, thats how I see it anyway.

There's so much in there as Darren says, but I wouldn't expect anything else, nice one mate!

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 24th Sep 2008 18:35

Hi Pete, like this, you're a bigger perv than me!!

Well, maybe you're not but made me smile and I like it too, that and seatbelts!!

Cheers Perverama!!

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Mark Niel

Wed 24th Sep 2008 16:42

Lovely, lovely stuff.

Thank you

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Philip Golding

Wed 24th Sep 2008 09:31

Thanks for the kind words Clarissa. I really enjoyed writing this poem. I got a real buzz out of it, creating a vertual painting.

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clarissa mckone

Wed 24th Sep 2008 03:03

HI Phil, I found this funny. I hope it was meant to be. At times Im unsure. I enjoyed this, was amusing! xx clarissa

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clarissa mckone

Wed 24th Sep 2008 02:58

HI Melissa, This poem is very good. I hope your well. Never dwell on the past. I know, easy to say, not so true to live it. take care xx clarissa

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