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Moira Eribenne

Updated: Fri, 18 Mar 2011 07:10 pm

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I get an incredible buzz from writing poetry, prose, monologues, sketches and short stories. I have just recently begun posting musings on Helium. I'm based at the centre of the cosmos..Bolton of course! I just love the written word, how it unlocks who we are, who we might appear to be and of course who we would love to be!


U This is not a bed, this is an alter The place where my alter ego was born Wrapped and rapt in your love These are not walls They are silent witnesses at this chapel of love Where a heart ached with joy And peace was forever discovered and held tight These are not sheets They are the robes of a goddess Discarded in the throes of love Drenched with passion Writhing in a red heap on the floor This was not an encounter It is the very stuff we are born for The wellspring of passion An offering of pure love Pore into me When I entered the room The light was off And you were on The bulb was dead You just shone Radiant Within the filament The firmament Flickering flame Of your heart Surrounded by words Of pure art You fold me Onto the bed Lying there Laying in wait I enfold you Not knowing What to do Simply hold you Adore you Absorb you Bore into you Enter every pore Of you Become you The core you Just to pour you Into me

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Laura Taylor

Mon 13th Jan 2014 09:38

Hello Moira

Many thanks for your comment on 'Before You'. I see you are no stranger to love poems yourself :)

I also note that I last commented on one of your pieces back in 2011! The Library one. Was excellent.



<Deleted User> (7075)

Fri 18th Mar 2011 19:11

Hi Moira, Thanks for sending in the photo for your profile pic. Winston

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Wed 22nd Dec 2010 00:33

I love the Iris poem you wrote, it reads like both a painting and a poem at the same time.

Would you be interested in sharing it at one of my OpenMind events?

A poem like that would really make my birthday event special in January.

I've read a few of your pieces and would definitely like to offer you a longer guest slot at one of the later events of the year (we're getting pretty full up in terms of headliners/guest artists).

Email me on and I can give you more details about the different dates and see when suits you best.

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Sun 16th Nov 2008 00:22

thankyou kindly for taking the time to think and then comment on my poem ,

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Gus Jonsson

Tue 28th Oct 2008 13:21

Thanks Once Again Moira... Can't wait for Christmas now!!

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Andy N

Sat 18th Oct 2008 12:57

Like certainly U and Pore into me.. you have a good way with words certainly! I really enjoy reading your stuff!

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Gus Jonsson

Sun 12th Oct 2008 18:26

Gus Jonsson

Sun 12th Oct 2008 16:47

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Good Afternoon Moira

Thank you for your kind remarks,

Do you perform...? Might I see you soon ...Ido hope so

Once again many thanks


<Deleted User> (4235)

Sat 27th Sep 2008 01:19

Hi, Moira. Thank you so very much for your comment on my poem, Tether.

Take care. :)


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Clare Kirwan

Fri 12th Sep 2008 17:27

Thanks for your kind comment... hey you're hot stuff yourself!

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Wed 10th Sep 2008 13:27

The I Think Your Sexy poem would make good lyrics to a rap song...

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 9th Sep 2008 17:40

Hi Moira

I aim to please! Love your comments, and glad you like my sanctuary poem. I've been on here 4 months and love it! If you wanna look back at other blogs of mine, feel free, music stuff and all sorts!!

And yes, love a bit of rhthym like yourself, and it's hotting up in here! Don't need the fire on! Oh and the month has been extended for you, its an indefinite offer!

Bye for now Jeffarama! X

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 8th Sep 2008 20:14

Hi Moira, no probs, you can amend it. Just click on edit whe you're logged in and amend, when you save it, it will post it again with same comments etc, just in case you didn't know, good to see you on the site, good init! Jeff x

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Sun 7th Sep 2008 21:00

Dear Moira,

Thank you for your comment on my poem, A Light Ahead.

It is indeed a gift to dream and within the dream, a gift to write, and no matter what, we need to keep that dream alight.

I hope that you will do the same. :)

Take care. :)


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Fri 5th Sep 2008 23:44

Zuzanna I Can 'hear' the accent in your voice. Where in europe are you descended from? To sound your origins as a fingerprint is the magic of our identity. Think the site is great and the community very enlivening and supportive.

There is a strong spiritual attunedness in your writing which I find transporting, lifting.

Delighted to chat with you,


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Fri 5th Sep 2008 22:19

Hello Moira

Welcome to WOL - beautiful Poetry site. Thank you for the nice comment you wrote for me. I am of European descent but live in Canada for half of my life. Knowledge of few foreign languages makes me speak with an accent that I will perhaps carry on for the rest of my life. Had no opportunity to take an intonation courses in English Literature therefore my accent still falls on different syllables.

It is great to have you with us. Keep penning on; I like the style in your writing.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna Musial

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