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Winter Morning

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Now the golden leaves are gone.
Winter, barefoot, stalks alone,
Through the naked trees.

Gone the warmth from sun and sky.
Gone the dancing butterfly.
Gone the summer bees.

Winter stirs the withered grass.
Trees draw back to let her pass
Fearing her cold breath.

Leaden snow clouds crowd the air.
Lonely sea birds wail up there
Crying tales of death.

All the sounds of earth and sky
Sing a mournful lullaby
In the winter dawn.

While the sun, with feeble light
Melts the shadows of the night
And flickers on the lawn.

◄ Love Song

haiku 'Fauteiulle' ►

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 24th Jan 2021 18:03

As soon as I began reading this I just knew I had to use my actual voice and not the inner voice to read this with. Not because the words aren't precise and meaningful in themselves but because they have been chosen to sound magical too.
So I'm not commenting for you, Freda, I'm commenting to bring this poem back to the list and give a few people the chance to notice it again, especially as this area where I am got its first proper snow today too.

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Freda Davis

Mon 29th Sep 2008 00:31

You're right Janet, I was a bit previous here. Thanks for the reaction. Freda

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Sat 27th Sep 2008 11:10

Brrrrr.... flippin 'eck Freda. Let's get Autumn out the way first.
Just joking of course. Lovely poem.

Love Janet.x

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