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Dream lover

If I stop drinking completely I find

The noisy neighbours deprive me of sleep

I become super-sensitive; they wind

Me up as I lie listening; they creep

Around, bang things and each other; they keep

Me from the point of drifting down the stream

Away from this dull, marshy plain to steep

And heady slopes where success is no dream

Gold nuggets just for me reflect the gleam

Of the still-rising sun, caressing wind

Undressing beauties, clothing in a heap

I lie at the top, position supreme

Then a bang in the night and I unwind

Unreeling, rolling through the real snow

◄ Downing Street pillow talk

Up with the lark ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Sat 27th Sep 2008 04:51

Hello, Antonio

The poem is good. I found your imagination quite amazing and also amusing! The creative site of you shows well in this imaginary write.
It sounds at the last lines as you had some fan at night that put you at ease...Lol:)
Correct me if I am wrong...OK?

I like the style in your Sonnets!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

<Deleted User> (5646)

Tue 9th Sep 2008 18:43

Hello Antonionioni,
I quite like this poem but have to admit to having to read it three times before picking up the rhythm.
Some great lines though.

Love Janet.xx

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