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John Marks

Sat 30th Jul 2022 15:25

A call to arms, for sure. Well constructed. Sometimes it is a balance of harms.

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John Coopey

Sat 30th Jul 2022 15:20

You’re so right, Kevin. And unless you can trace your genealogy back to when Britain lost its land bridge to Europe in Stone Age times, we’re ALL from immigrant stock.

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John Botterill

Sat 30th Jul 2022 14:18

Thanks so much for your generous comments Holden and Stephen. Your appreciation means a great deal to me. The poem uses some material from first hand accounts displayed at RAF Oulton Museum in Norfolk. True heroism!
Thanks too for the likes Julie, Frederick, KJ and Greg. 😀

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kJ Walker

Sat 30th Jul 2022 11:38

Good point well made John.
Non of us have EARNED the right to live in this country... We live here by coincidence of birth.
To then deny that right to others who have made great sacrifices to get here is totally wrong.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 30th Jul 2022 11:31

A rewrite for the Lionesses 🌈

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Ghazala lari

Sat 30th Jul 2022 10:36

Where was it? I think I can make a wild guess. Poor Fred.

Hilarious write.

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Sunshine

Sat 30th Jul 2022 09:12

Yes Nigel, Basking in God's glory and mercy. Always.

Thnx Nigel. Your words complete my poetry.💕

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Greg Freeman

Sat 30th Jul 2022 09:10

I'm sure this is not the first occasion I've posted this poem here, but thought I would again because of the parallels between this summer and 1976 - not least because I and my then-girlfriend are contemplating moving north again! It was first published by Stairwell Press in an anthology titled simply York many moons ago, an anthology that was co-curated by John Coopey, I believe. It can also be found in my full collection Marples Must Go!, published last year and now available - at last - online from Waterstone's https://www.waterstones.com/book/marples-must-go/tony-earnshaw//9781913329501

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John Coopey

Sat 30th Jul 2022 09:02

I’m sure Uganda’s Asians would have been thankful that you weren’t counting heads at the drawbridge in the 1960’s, MC. Likewise, Europe’s Jews in the 30’s and 40’s. Should we send back today’s Ukrainians because “we’ve got enough”?
To paraphrase JFK, did we ask what they could do for us or did we offer what we could do for them?
Yes, we were a kinder nation once.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 30th Jul 2022 08:53

A wonderfully constructed, moving poem, John. We still owe such people so much.

Comment is about A Postcard From R.A.F. Oulton (blog)

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Andy N

Sat 30th Jul 2022 08:49

Great to see it back Isobel. Always had a good time on the ones I've being to. Not sure yet if we can make it, Amanda (my wife)s younger sister is due to give birth i think the week before so it's a bit up in the air. I'll let you know nearer the time if we can make it.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 30th Jul 2022 08:43

I enjoyed this very much. I spent the best part of a year in Portsmouth in the 1970s and remember one crossroads in the dock area where you could almost touch four pubs - one on each corner - from the middle of the road.

Comment is about Ahoy there! BBC radio programme looks at the dialect poetry of 'island city' Portsmouth (article)

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 30th Jul 2022 08:36

As someone who often writes poems on trains, I found Jeremy Corbyn's approach to arts funding to be admirable.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 30th Jul 2022 08:32

Thank you for the nice comments, Carol, Russell and Ruth. Sadly for us all, it seems that this one will run and run.

And thanks to Nigel, Frederick, Holden, Brenda, Reggie's Ghost and K Lynn for liking this one.

Comment is about Blockbuster (blog)

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Greg Freeman

Sat 30th Jul 2022 08:01

Well done, Graham! A good example of 'on a whim' that is a lesson to us all. Hope the readings go well. I'm sure they will.

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 30th Jul 2022 03:31

A truly powerful poem, John, made all the more so by your skilful use of the first person! I found the penultimate stanza brilliantly poignant and profound! 🌷

Comment is about A Postcard From R.A.F. Oulton (blog)

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Tom

Fri 29th Jul 2022 23:19

Brilliantly pure and so intoxicating - this poem and love. Great writing.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 29th Jul 2022 23:00

Truth of the light
don't wait too long
before darkness takes hold.

thanks Ruth


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M.C. Newberry

Fri 29th Jul 2022 22:08

Share or relinquish? You do not address the basic vital questions
of supply and demand across the spectrum of social and environmental well-being. How much is enough? Answer that!

Comment is about WHEN WE WERE A KINDER NATION (blog)

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 29th Jul 2022 21:47

Such a poetic description of the Ukraine situation. Wonderfully written Stephen!👌

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 29th Jul 2022 21:45

Love how medieval meets modern in this timeless treasure 👌

Comment is about The Chalice (blog)

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 29th Jul 2022 21:42

Love the positivity in this Nigel 👌

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John Coopey

Fri 29th Jul 2022 20:12

The fundamental division between us, MC, which underpins your questions is whether we’re prepared to share our wealth or hoard it.
Thanks for the Like, Brenda.

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keith jeffries

Fri 29th Jul 2022 19:22

Having lived for many years in warm climates there is nothing I enjoy more than to kick off the shoes and socks and put on a pair of flip flops. Sandals are second best. I like to allow my feet to breathe and loathe them being permanently wrapped up in cumbersome footwear.
Thank you for this
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 29th Jul 2022 17:58

Well meant and well said. Perhaps it's a combination of things
that have resulted in today's situation concerning attitudes.
Our size - a third of that of France, our nearest neighbour from
which we see so many leave for these shores; the truly mind-
boggling rise in the population in recent decades - equal to
the population of Greater London (look it up!), with its knock-
on effect on the environment and vital public services under
catch-up pressures that are not diminshing - rather the reverse;
These - and the distinct feeling that the resident peoples of
these islands are under some sort of global siege from the
dissatisfied."deserters" from lands that need THEIR people to
work for them - not depart for places whose own peoples have
sacrificed so much - may indicate just why the old hospitality
factor is wearing thin right now. Not forgetting the security
aspect of undocumented aliens that adds to justified concerns
for the future. What fidelity do these people owe to the UK?
and its age-old Christianity-based way of life? Just asking for
the purpose of sensible clear headed debate. ..

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Brenda Wells

Fri 29th Jul 2022 17:52

A powerful, heartfelt piece that conveys some very strong images.
Thank you for sharing

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John Marks

Fri 29th Jul 2022 17:44

The phases of the moon, the movement of the tides, the menstrual cycle. A concurrence or a coincidence? Lunacy used to be associated with the moon, menstruation and hysteria. Certainly, such concepts seem to coalesce around the goddess Sati, Hindu goddess of sex, also known as the “menstruating goddess.” In Greek mythology Selene is the goddess and the personification of the Moon. She is also known as Mene! (Also unfinished!)

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John Marks

Fri 29th Jul 2022 17:26

“In the midway of this our mortal life, I found me in a gloomy wood, astray.”

Dante Alighieri, The Divine Comedy

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John Marks

Fri 29th Jul 2022 17:15

Hits me like a punch.

You made me
A petal
Newly birthed
Bashful and shy
In the fresh morning dew
Don't we all want that
one way or the other?

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John Marks

Fri 29th Jul 2022 16:04

Thank you Stephen, Carol, Nigel, Tom, Frederick and dear Holden.. This year I've carried three coffins, and spoken three eulogies, but suicide is by far the most difficult to accept.

"The fountains are dry and the roses over.
Incense of death. Your day approaches.
The pears fatten like little buddhas.
A blue mist is dragging the lake."

Sylvia Plath, "The Manor Garden."

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John Botterill

Fri 29th Jul 2022 15:41

Thanks Greg. You are quite right. We are all in the same mess! Thanks for the like, Nigel 👍

Comment is about Levelling Up (blog)

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Nigel Astell

Fri 29th Jul 2022 14:35

Dating game fun to play
Lovers turn on instant match
Hot Stuff needs to kiss off
He who has second thoughts.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 29th Jul 2022 14:33

Sorry, my error. Perhaps foregiveable after reading a variety of
contributions over the years, not all of which can be described
as "poetry" (including some of your posts). In that light, I have seen WOL as a "writer's website" that gets people thinking beyond their
comfort zone.

Comment is about WOKE IS NO JOKE (blog)

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julie callaghan

Fri 29th Jul 2022 09:01

Thanks for the likes.

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 29th Jul 2022 09:01

beautiful

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 29th Jul 2022 08:59

Film of 2022, don't like the baddy, but I've the good guy done a few previous films
Nice one

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Fri 29th Jul 2022 01:00

Wow! Poignant and descriptive in the detail.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 28th Jul 2022 23:49

Thanks for your comment, Steve. I don't believe I ever saw that Fawlty episode. One other thought: Perks would have been on strike yesterday. And quite right, too! Thanks for the Likes, Frederick, JC, Stephen, Holden and Russell

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Greg Freeman

Thu 28th Jul 2022 23:47

This government doesn't care about any of us, John, north or south. In that respect we have already well and truly levelled up. Up a certain creek, in fact.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 28th Jul 2022 23:45

This is a poetry website, and the above is surely no poem, MC. So no, I won't discuss it. And frankly, there are far more important things to worry about right now.

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Jul 2022 23:05

Thankyou, Stephen. We were better people then.
And thanks for the Like, Stephen A.

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John Botterill

Thu 28th Jul 2022 22:50

Thanks Stephen. I did think of my friends in the south, including my son, but I knew you wouldn't mind 😂
Thanks Julie, Frederick and Stephen A for the likes.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 28th Jul 2022 21:50

A fine tribute, Greg. Interesting snippet about Noel Coward. I can never forget Bernard Cribbins as Mr Hutchinson in Fawlty Towers. ('I'm not a violent man, Mr Fawlty'. 'Yes, you are'.).

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 28th Jul 2022 21:42

Good one, John. It even made this soft Southener smile!

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 28th Jul 2022 21:37

A splendid poem, John, and a plea for common sense, which seems to be in short supply at the moment.

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JOHN F B TUCKER

Thu 28th Jul 2022 21:23

Holden, your poetry is amazing. Discovering you on this site has brightened my life. There is much more stylistic unity in you than in my own work (which spans several decades and phases). Your poetry reads like a book of mysticism, replete with Classical allusion, witty word-play, sound-sexual connectivity, and underlying wisdom. I wish i could sit up in bed and read and reread a book of it!

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John Botterill

Thu 28th Jul 2022 18:44

😀👍

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Isobel

Thu 28th Jul 2022 16:44

Dave - I'm so glad you're coming - I know you'll pull a crowd in all on your own and it would be great to have that kind of atmosphere - and familiar faces who are rooting for you. A pint at 10.45 am? Now there's a nice thought 😁

Dorinda - you're on the list - look forward to seeing you - my exclamation mark doesn't work on this laptop so you'll have to imagine it.

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Jul 2022 16:02

Indeed, Greg. It’s a good job it wasn’t our generation considering whether to let Europe’s Jews in during the 1930’s/40’s.And thanks for the Likes, Frederick, Tom, Holden and Russell.

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 28th Jul 2022 15:03

Thank you so much, John, I really appreciate your kind comment! 😎
It was an attempt to consider the 'Ship of Theseus' thought puzzle in terms of a human being suffering and healing, and whether one is fundamentally changed by those cycles.

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