A poem which is born in the age in which we live, put together succinctly almost as a litany which asks for a response. A good poem, well crafted and well thought out.
Thank you for this,
Keith
Comment is about It’s the end of the world as we know it (blog)
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Additional appreciation for your "likes" is owed to Clare, Holden, Stephen, Brian, Keith, Hugh and JC.
Comment is about SPIRIT (blog)
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Fantastic poem! I’ve been thinking a lot lately about ancestors and how we continue to carry them within us - so for me, your poem is perfectly timed. Perfect in every way!
Comment is about We Are Legion (blog)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
Thank you too Bethany.
Comment is about Throwing stones at the stars (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
You did a good thing there, John.
Smug forty-somethings are my pet hate.
Comment is about TOGETHER (blog)
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Poem of the month, at least, Ralph. A blast of honesty and compassion about a shocking situation. The last line stops you in your tracks.
Well done to you.
Comment is about Jumping Trains (blog)
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Gives me an optimistic feeling, Hélène. We must learn to trust, difficult though it is.
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A fine vilanelle, Tim. I agree with your arguments, of course. Politicians have a duty to put these difficult issues to the public. But what if the public (heavily influenced by right-wing media and advertising) don't listen?
Not easy for anyone. We just have to keep trying. This poem is a part of the campaign.
Comment is about Failing the people (blog)
Original item by Tim Ellis
Well done, Stephen. A fantastic poem about the rock you were hewn from.
Comment is about We Are Legion (blog)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
I love the images of excess and of...love, Clare.
Comment is about The Tortured Poet. (blog)
Original item by Clare
Thanks for all the generous and pertinent comments. I would love to have a rosier view of this conflict and even believe that a Ukraine victory will make everything right. But sadly the moral vacuum created by war tends to spread to everyone and it is often not those who have suffered who reap the spoils of peace.
I agree, Keith, that we have abused our beautiful planet and with Hélène that there is still hope in basic human decency. Thanks also to John B, John C, Uilleam and Bethany for their comments and to Clare and Manish for liking.
Comment is about Cold Soup (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Extremely powerful, bitter and as usual, with you Stephen, accurate. Thank you.
Comment is about Cold Soup (blog)
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I’ve read that so many who voted for Brexit are now regretting doing so. I must say I’ve not come across that. It’s not so easy to admit you were so gullible.
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I don’t think you’ve ever bettered this, Stephen.
Comment is about Cold Soup (blog)
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This reminded me of a film I watched last year - “They Flew Together”, starring Walter Pigeon, Mia Sparrow, Steven Seagal and Charlie Drake.
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Thankyou, Helene for your thoughts and Pete for the Like.
Comment is about TOGETHER (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Like every gardener I love my garden😃
Comment is about My wild and wonderful garden (blog)
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Thank you so much for your responses to this, John Botterill and Helene. I want you to know that I am absolutely fine!😁. It’s just sometimes I find I have to dig deep to find the poetry.
I don’t always write from where I am, I write from where I have been. I really do appreciate your support.
Comment is about Bumbling Mess (blog)
Original item by Clare
Thank you, reaffirming message to read 😊
Comment is about False sense of security (blog)
Original item by Nicole Macqueen-Jones
Despair knocks at our door, endlessly.
Powerful: "I want to have faith, believe there’s a God,
But was a decent man nailed to the cross,
To make way for this dung heap of a world,
This foul dominion of the half-brick?"
So much sorrow on this planet...I have given up trying to understand it. But I look to the stars for solace and hope, and to the kindness of people that arises no matter what...thank you Stephen for writing such compassionate poetry about war.
Comment is about Cold Soup (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Your poetry is an inspiration, Clare. Strength from brokenness. Such an important message, and so well-written. Keep writing!
Comment is about Bumbling Mess (blog)
Original item by Clare
Love this, John. Bravo! Kids, dogs, old people...the fun things in life!
Comment is about TOGETHER (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Really powerful poem. Thank you Ralph for sharing these stories of suffering. In the listening and the telling, there is compassion. Much appreciated.
Comment is about Jumping Trains (blog)
Original item by Ralph Dartford
The irony, Bethany, is that I hate kids. And dogs, for that matter. And old people. Etc.
Comment is about TOGETHER (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Now with audio!😁
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Fri 9th Jun 2023 10:12
A CLASS! albeit deeply saddening poem Stephen. All due respect and thanks
Comment is about Cold Soup (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
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Fri 9th Jun 2023 10:02
For me John your postings are ( always ) not only a great read but also an essentiality to write out loud-many thanks!
Comment is about Throwing stones at the stars (blog)
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Fri 9th Jun 2023 09:56
Wise and wonderful words JD!
Comment is about If They Can, Then So Can You (blog)
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Fri 9th Jun 2023 09:54
You are definitely in a class of your own in certain subjects Master Coopey-enjoyed the lesson!
Comment is about TOGETHER (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thank you John.
If ever I do get round to bringing a book out I'll put this one in it.
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It's hard to equate the ebullient poet I read with your description of yourself, Clare. It makes your phenomenal achievements all the more remarkable.
Comment is about Bumbling Mess (blog)
Original item by Clare
The decision to leave the grip of the EU and all its yellow star ability to outvote any UK decision was no "crock of shit".
That definition can, however, be applied to the result of the
approach by the occupants of Parliament who clearly still held
their pre-referendum zealous belief that we were better off
being run by a supra-national entity led by the centuries-old
trouble-makers in Europe.
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Oh wow, Clare. What a fabulous piece of family history. You must be so proud of them. I thought there was reality in there, along with gift you have for imparting greater meaning within the narrative. I hope there iare more stories to come about this great man 😀
Comment is about Cotton Candy Man. (blog)
Original item by Clare
Thank you Stephen A, Stephen G and you Bethany. Donne is my favourite poet. I never tire of reading his poetry. I am entranced, and somewhat terrified, by 'A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning' which inspired my relatively insipid 'Twin Compasses'. Donne has it thus:
A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning
BY JOHN DONNE
As virtuous men pass mildly away,
And whisper to their souls to go,
Whilst some of their sad friends do say
The breath goes now, and some say, No:
So let us melt, and make no noise,
No tear-floods, nor sigh-tempests move;
'Twere profanation of our joys
To tell the laity our love.
Moving of th' earth brings harms and fears,
Men reckon what it did, and meant;
But trepidation of the spheres,
Though greater far, is innocent.
Dull sublunary lovers' love
(Whose soul is sense) cannot admit
Absence, because it doth remove
Those things which elemented it.
But we by a love so much refined,
That our selves know not what it is,
Inter-assured of the mind,
Care less, eyes, lips, and hands to miss.
Our two souls therefore, which are one,
Though I must go, endure not yet
A breach, but an expansion,
Like gold to airy thinness beat.
If they be two, they are two so
As stiff twin compasses are two;
Thy soul, the fixed foot, makes no show
To move, but doth, if the other do.
And though it in the center sit,
Yet when the other far doth roam,
It leans and hearkens after it,
And grows erect, as that comes home.
Such wilt thou be to me, who must,
Like th' other foot, obliquely run;
Thy firmness makes my circle just,
And makes me end where I begun.
Comment is about Twin compasses (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Thank you Stephen.
Your last line sums up how we tend to lose our sense of perspective.
Comment is about Cold Soup (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Thank all for your comments and likes.
I detect a grudging acceptance that Brexit was from the very start a veritable "Crock of Shit", and that "Project Fear" was 100% correct.😒
Comment is about Per Ardua ad Astra (now with audio) (blog)
A poem written with passion and clouded with despair. I sums up well the ghastly state of affairs in the Ukraine and the war which ravages their country. The world is plagued by this evil. I was drawn to the line "I want to have faith, believe there's a God". Many people will feel like this but I think we need to see the world from another perspective. God has given us the most incredible planet on which to live, rich in beauty and diversity. As humans and a part of this creation we have been given freedom. We have abused this freedom through greed, intolerance and violence. Only we can make amends.
Stephen, thank you for another brilliant poem.
Keith
Comment is about Cold Soup (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Thanks for your thoughts, MC.
Comment is about I WENT DOWN TO THAT LONDON (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thanks, John. It’s about my grandfather who was an Irish itinerant. He and his father, and his son were travelling story tellers, chimney sweeps, tin workers and thatchers.
I am trying to grab the essence of their lives but it is difficult.
So many interesting stories! His son (my great uncle) was the first Irish traveller to be recorded in a series for the BBC. He translated the family stories from Gaelic to English - it was the first time they had ever been recorded and spoken in English.
Comment is about Cotton Candy Man. (blog)
Original item by Clare
Having just needed to re-position the car, I thought I'd have another Guinness when passing the pub just before 10pm -
only to be told that they were closing! Ah well...these funny
hours at least saved me a further £7.50. But I took the
opportunity to mention that pubs are obliged to post their hours
of business, upon which the charming young lady imparting the
news put her hand to her heart and smiled apologetically.
It's a hard life making a pub work these days so I also smiled and
instantly forgave her.
SG mentions St Johns Wood. Back in the 70s I was part of the staff of the now closed local nick. The Wood was
always a sought-after place to live and the prices matched the aspirations.
It still enjoys that reputation and the reflected prices, it seems! Local
residents included Beatle Paul MacCartney and wife Linda, and the
likes of famous conductor Sir Georg
Solti; plus, I will add, a number of excellent pubs!!!
Comment is about I WENT DOWN TO THAT LONDON (blog)
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John, you may be concerned if you receive a number of erratic messages from me! 🤣 My internet is playing up and nothing seems to work the way I want it to. 😂😂. Thanks for letting me know about the glitches - hopefully I have been able to rectify them. 🥹
Comment is about Cotton Candy Man. (blog)
Original item by Clare
All fine now Clare. I thought my mind was playing tricks on me!
I find this poem utterly fascinating, almost mythical in its style. Another work of triumph from your pen.
Comment is about Cotton Candy Man. (blog)
Original item by Clare
Bethany, you are so right. Stunningly beautiful, Matilda. You have distilled the essence of life into just one breath. Encore! 😀
Comment is about One Breath (blog)
Original item by Matilda Simakaj
I watched this tonight. I thought his piece about the harmonium was very touching. Not so keen on the music ensemble at the end though.
Comment is about Simon Armitage takes his harmonium to The Repair Shop (article)
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Wed 7th Jun 2023 21:03
Russell Jacklin
Sat 10th Jun 2023 20:08
Thanj you
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