Philipos

Mon 14th Feb 2011 21:22

Hi Dave - I agree with all that's been said - masterpiece

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Mon 14th Feb 2011 21:02

hey you 2...:) thanx alot for your comments...i really appreciate them...petrova i will take that on board for future writing...i can lose my way toward the end sometimes...:)

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Mon 14th Feb 2011 19:59

so! it was your cakes I sat on! you owe me for a pair of fluffy brown nylon kex(oh yeh by the way-good poem)ta chuck.xx

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Isobel

Mon 14th Feb 2011 19:03

Thanks for your comments on some of my recent ones, Chris. Yes - knowing the current me, it does seem inconveivable that I could ever have disappeared. I know for sure that oould never happen to me again! Lovely to see you posting and on here more often! xx

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Feb 2011 18:01

Hey Banksy! We've had this conversation before - you and me and Antonionioni! xx

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Mon 14th Feb 2011 17:59

So - another TTC devotee :)

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Mon 14th Feb 2011 17:34

yo Yosh! love to hear this done rapstyle....cool poem dude...SW

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Philipos

Mon 14th Feb 2011 16:55

Hi Greg - re; Night Walk - yes another world indeed - such fond (and not so fond) memories - appreciate the commentsThanks also for comments on Jacarandas in Joburg - nice to feel encouraged

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Mon 14th Feb 2011 16:53

Hi Yosh, I enjoyed this piece, can relate to the feelings conveyed so well but felt it lost momentum after, "she took the cuffs off" x

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Feb 2011 16:48

Glad to see you back posting. What a good story!

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Feb 2011 16:48

This is so rythmic I swear I can hear you reading it. Full of vitality.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Feb 2011 16:47

This is so intriguing - I like it a lot.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 14th Feb 2011 13:29

Hi, Lynn! Beautifully written and really funny story. Enjoyed reading it. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Lynn Dye

Mon 14th Feb 2011 13:28

Hi Greg, thanks for your comment on "I'm Sorry, I'm English", apologies that I only just saw it and I have now answered on that thread.
Must add that I really enjoyed your East Budleigh poem, excellent. x

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Lynn Dye

Mon 14th Feb 2011 13:17

Gosh, Greg, only just seen this message, sorry. Agree about extremists, lowest of the low, and agree about Dad's Army too, it is the best.
I think my poem makes me sound much more patriotic than I actually am. My inspiration to write it was on reading in a puzzle magazine about a British actress. I realised she must be English, otherwise they would have stated she was Welsh or Scottish. This is where I think our pc has gone silly.

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chris yates

Mon 14th Feb 2011 13:02

Very thought provoking and touching poem obviously you have been moved by this mothers sad predicament :-))xx

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chris yates

Mon 14th Feb 2011 12:53

Great poem Isobel I think we have all dissapeared at some point but oh boy have you made a come back,keep it up girl fab xx

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chris yates

Mon 14th Feb 2011 12:40

Thank you for your comment Val hope to come to the Bolton venue soon xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 14th Feb 2011 12:23

This is completely charming, lyrical in thought and expression, and very loving. I think it is one of your best which I intend to read many times. The opening and closing stanzas are great crafting.

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Val Cook

Mon 14th Feb 2011 11:03

Oh Janet, its lovely.X

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Val Cook

Mon 14th Feb 2011 10:59

Brilliant Jane,skilfully put together. X

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Val Cook

Mon 14th Feb 2011 10:53

A different form of Valentine Thom, but it works.X

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Val Cook

Mon 14th Feb 2011 10:47

Chris you captured the moments so well. The last six lines say it all.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Feb 2011 09:28

To all you genius's of love - wherever you may be! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Mon 14th Feb 2011 07:33

Oooh, how evocative, great imagery but with enough unsaid to make me wonder and create, in my own mind's eye, reasons for the tears... lovely.

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Mon 14th Feb 2011 07:30

Thanks for your comments on my untitled piece Cynthia, much appreciated x

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Mon 14th Feb 2011 07:13

Thanks Chris, I really enjoyed the Tudor, was a great experience both reading and listening to others.

Well done with hosting :) x

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 19:27

it made the two old duffers pictured and 'anchored'together laugh as much as our old bodies allowed-haha...ohhh! wheres me tablets!

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Lucy Marsh

Sun 13th Feb 2011 19:13

Highly amusing!

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 17:35

good one on the repaired tootsie young lady-catch you later-love-Stef.xx

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 17:07

wow! a lot of hard work here Lynn-all very picturesque images-lovely!-Stef.xx

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 17:05

lovely to see you back Lynn-phew! you had me worried I must admit-thanks for reading and commenting on 'stay'my best to you(psst-hows the toe now?)..SWxx

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Isobel

Sun 13th Feb 2011 16:52

I think this must be the poem that so moved my cousin, Chris. This stirs a lot of memories of my father also. You words evoke so much. x

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 16:47

For me, it's an excellent poem - but IMHO doesn't need the last bit.
I think it could end very well like this, or similar

....how my life has changed
I need you to walk the cliff path with me again -
I get lost when I’m out there on my own.

xx

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Isobel

Sun 13th Feb 2011 16:41

I thought it sounded familiar. I was beginning to think that your girlfriend must do a lot of sleeping... LOL. This is sweet and perfect for the time of year. x

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Adele Ward

Sun 13th Feb 2011 15:18

Enjoyed your poems. I don't get to travel much and will when my kids are older. If you're ever in London come and read at Camden and Lumen.

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Adele Ward

Sun 13th Feb 2011 15:16

Hi Andy

I enjoyed your poem and your bio. I spent a few years in Manchester as a little girl as my Dad was from there.

If you're sometimes down in London I help out at two venues called Camden and Lumen where they have regular open mics. You can find them on Facebook.

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Adele Ward

Sun 13th Feb 2011 15:13

Thanks for the warm welcome, and thanks for entering the contest Winston. I'm curious to see the poet Carol Ann Duffy selects!

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chris yates

Sun 13th Feb 2011 14:31

So many many words,"headlines turned hard and dry and brittle"the imagery is thought provoking xx

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 14:21

aww... that's really sweet. Lovely images ;-)

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 14:06

Hi Cynthia, thanks for comment on 'Nightmare' :-)

I appreciate your honesty here because i actually felt it was lacking something sensory but i couldn't seem to make more of it so went ahead and posted anyway.x

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 13:58

Hi Elaine, thanks for lovely comment on 'for the good times' :-)
much appreciated.x

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 13:57

Hi Andy, thanks for comment on 'for the good times' :-)

as for performing it? well...maybe one day.x

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 13:56

Hi Laura, so were you singing manic monday all day? ha ha

Thanks for comment on 'for the good times' :-)

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Philipos

Sun 13th Feb 2011 13:50

Hi Cynthia - re: Down to Earth - many thanks for the detailed analysis your comments always valuable - like yourself I have quite a varied background with mine straddling a Master's in Philosophy amongst other qualifications and 3 significant career paths followed by adventurous living overseas - poetry though has always been precious to me and some might regard me as aloof because I always seem to be working on the next muse - although I do have a whacky sense of humour probably born of my northern origins in the face of adversity x

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 13:22

Hi Ann - I can see that you've disabled comments on your latest - a lovely sad poem - but I thought you need to know that this is superfluous, as its obvious from the rest that they're gone - just my 2 cents !! xx

and as sit and think all this,

I realise that all the people
that I want to see today are gone

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 13th Feb 2011 12:48

Kath, this is a lovely description of breaking clouds, full of imaginative adjectives making common images freshly original. Apart from the obviously visual, I presume this poem can be applied metaphorically to just about any situation in life. I think good poetry is just the first turn of the spade in an endless hole.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 13th Feb 2011 12:28

Ann, your interest in archaeology so fits with my admiration of your deep imagination, I am flabbergasted I never considered the association before: a digger of the past, and digester of the seemingly insignificant to make a comprehensive whole. It was screaming at me. I greatly support the explorers, but often quail at their preconceived conclusions.

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Sun 13th Feb 2011 10:48

Cheers Andy, it was daunting but I was definitely on cloud 27 all day Friday ;) x

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chris yates

Sun 13th Feb 2011 10:48

people people who's anybody anyway just people people who p*** us off ha ha love it xx

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