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paper mache

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Like lifting lino - underneath

another world revealed.

Adverts for corsets, garden twine

and orthopaedic shoes.

News of a war, or peace in our time.

 

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I move the realistic rocks we made

for the museum. I painted them, grey and gnarled,

but it was you who made the frame.

And stretched between the two

is paper mache.

 

Seeing the stories from

not so very long ago.

Headlines

turned hard and dry and brittle.

Looking like a rock and yet

behind the grey façade

just words and words and words

meaning little now,

like life, enduring

in our paper mache.

love and time passing

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chris yates

Sun 13th Feb 2011 14:31

So many many words,"headlines turned hard and dry and brittle"the imagery is thought provoking xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 12th Feb 2011 22:07

I'm afraid it's more the orthopaedic shoes these days Mr Banksy! ;-) xx

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Sat 12th Feb 2011 21:46

I bet you've still got them corsets, haven't you ? - you know the pink perforated rubber ones with wire & rubber suspender buttons - you have, haven't you ? go on, tell me you have :p

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 12th Feb 2011 16:27

Oh! Gnarled! I wondered why my spell check thingy underlined it in red (and slapped me on the wrist!) I kept thinking it must be narled, but that didn't look right either. Silly me! Anyway, thanks so much for kind comments! xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 12th Feb 2011 16:16

I so like your unorthodox imagery that just captivates your readers.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 12th Feb 2011 15:26

I think this is very good, Ann. I like twine and time and frame, and brittle and little. And maybe I'm stretching it here,! but corsets and realistic. These words give it a structure, a bit of whalebone. I reckon it should be gnarled rather than knarled, but maybe you prefer it that way.

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Sat 12th Feb 2011 10:36

Brilliant. My friend who I wrote a book with (posthumously) wrote a similar one. I am now best friends with his son. I will post it now. It is called Things I Remember.

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