People questioning things
People explaining things
People thanking people
People praising people
People joking
People not joking
People arguing
People being nice
People being obnoxious
People being clever
People being stupid
People being selfish
People posting, people posting, people posting
People disappearing
People re-appearing
People searching for answers
People drowning
Invisible people drowning
La dee da dee da
A microcosom of life - this is what we are but the poem is great in making us stop and ask the question - what am I doing, really?
I love the sentiments conveyed in this, Isobel...
So true!
It might well have been how you were feeling at that dated moment in time but Isobel get right off the fence ... yeah yer so right
Poets drowning
Invisable Poets drowning
Well done Isobel
Gus xx
<Deleted User> (7789)
Sun 23rd Jan 2011 14:06
It made me laugh! I find it's often the attitude of people on any site, not just this, that is all about me me me and they don't give anything, except to curry favour, which isn't really giving, it's trying to take. It should be about the poems themselves but the way some people skim over lesser known people without commenting or encouraging (if it's deserved) is pretty nauseating.
Ha - I did think about something along those lines Paul - that was the only thing missing.
The poem is about WOL weariness, which can quite often mirror world weariness. It isn't a good poem but it reflects quite well how I was feeling on Friday 21st January at 10.00 pm. :)
<Deleted User> (7212)
Sat 22nd Jan 2011 11:50
if people keep posting - where's all my F***ing mail??
the post office are shite.
...is this about people then ?
people self-publicising
I agree with Steve. It's the nature of the electronic world that people become invisible more easily than in the 'real' physical world. A powerful, raw poem. The beat goes on, it sweeps us up, but every now and then a different mood comes along, and we stand aside and ask what is happening to people
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chris yates
Sun 13th Feb 2011 10:48
people people who's anybody anyway just people people who p*** us off ha ha love it xx