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I CALL HER FREEDOM

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i call her freedom.....because the feeling im receiving is healing,

i feel her beaming a brightness, so rightious,

and when im fightless, shes the force that lifts this flightless, frightened, fighter,

and the chains aint tight enough for libertys lips,

emancipated by her infinite kiss,

its an intimate twist of fate,

i was a prisoner of war behind barbed wire gates,

i  was...too tired to break and barley awake,

but the kiss of life from lady justice is all it takes,

shook my foundations until the vibrations overcame my incarceration,

now im brazen,

she took the cuffs off,

i looked up, she nodded like...''this is the flight youre booked on''

shed my slave rags, my crown she gave back,

said ''heres the path to freedom, take this love and pick peace up on your way back,,

i call her freedom, because the feeling im receiving is appealing,

like i need it,

im free when she breathes the life into this heathen.

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Indigo

Thu 17th Feb 2011 03:18

It's beautiful, feels like two poem's in one, one about the freedom of a relationship and the other about the very nature of freedom itself as a concept. Deep stuff bro.

<Deleted User> (5879)

Mon 14th Feb 2011 21:02

hey you 2...:) thanx alot for your comments...i really appreciate them...petrova i will take that on board for future writing...i can lose my way toward the end sometimes...:)

<Deleted User> (8943)

Mon 14th Feb 2011 16:53

Hi Yosh, I enjoyed this piece, can relate to the feelings conveyed so well but felt it lost momentum after, "she took the cuffs off" x

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Feb 2011 16:48

This is so rythmic I swear I can hear you reading it. Full of vitality.

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