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Dave Bradley

Sun 4th Sep 2011 23:39

Vintage Coopey. Should perform well!

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Dave Bradley

Sun 4th Sep 2011 23:37

Enjoyed this Stella. I don't use Chanel myself, but the chocolate sounds nice. .

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Lizzie

Sun 4th Sep 2011 22:30

Thankyou :) I have no idea why it changes as I write it separated. X

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<Deleted User> (6315)

Sun 4th Sep 2011 21:10

Ann I thought I had commented on this but obviously not!

beautiful words Ann..x

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 4th Sep 2011 20:03

I like the new photo - your last one always looked, at first glance, like a large pair of breasts! (Nothing wrong with that of course!)

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 4th Sep 2011 19:59

I like this a lot. Have you any idea why your lines are not separated when you go to the "read more" option? It reads better when split up imo. Just wondered which format you prefered. I always read your stuff and find there is a lot more in it than at first glance.

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Lizzie

Sun 4th Sep 2011 19:38

Thankyou, Big hugs xoxoxox

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Philipos

Sun 4th Sep 2011 19:00

Enjoyed it. Conjures up a lot of powerful images for me but did wonder if the word 'Canker' might be more appropriate than Cancer in stanza 3, as you seem to be using an animal metaphor.

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Philipos

Sun 4th Sep 2011 18:51

I liked your clever device of conjoining the prof's interjections with your own recollections of things. Worked well for me.

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Philipos

Sun 4th Sep 2011 18:37

Very witty - loved it.

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Lynn Dye

Sun 4th Sep 2011 10:06

Thank you for your comment, Tommy. You were right of course, I may have a rethink on this one, lol.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 4th Sep 2011 09:48

Music and Poetry in Norway Square every day from 12.30-2.00pm. Enjoy! :)

(Plus loads of other arty stuff too!)

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 4th Sep 2011 09:08

Sounds lovely. I enjoyed the poem too.

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Isobel

Sun 4th Sep 2011 09:02

I like the title and the reasoning. There are a lot of damaged people out there and knowing that helps to understand the pattern of their behaviour.

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Isobel

Sun 4th Sep 2011 08:58

Oooo I want a Coco Chanel and chocolate day too - but I'm heavily committed to watching monkeys shit and rip my car apart (Knowsley Safari Park)...

The poem is lovely - very gentle and warming and original - very original! xx

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Lizzie

Sun 4th Sep 2011 02:07

Thankyou :) and thank heaven indeed x

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Kat Francois

Sun 4th Sep 2011 01:21

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Lynn Dye

Sun 4th Sep 2011 01:16

Enjoyed this very much, Stella, good one. x

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 23:05

No, I am not saying that.

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 21:45


hi Stella.

I,m in'klein'ed to say
this is a lovely airy
optimistic poem,
ideal for la femme.

I can almost whiff
what,with hands up has the perfume
of something that shall remain
non-present on my wifes dressing table.

haha! as if not!
if it did,nt,I would speechless
lying on a cold slab.

this leaves a lovely lingering odour
unlike the onion-like smell
of my arm-pits after a day
of d.i.y in t'hot sun.

cheers Stella.

Stef.

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<Deleted User> (9554)

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 21:32

I love this John; one for the future for me to do.
Yes? Good! I knew you'd say that.

Now check out my "Schnel Shock" audio.

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Lynn Dye

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 20:59

Well written, I really like this. :)

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Lynn Dye

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 20:35

Well, there's a vaster difference still between tyrants and our British parties, actually, which may have been worth commenting on. This was just intended to be a light hearted comment on how do you choose between two, three or four things that are all bad.
Are you in fact saying that maybe Hitler or Bin Laden were not bad then?

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 19:33


yeh-lets hope you CHOP them off
at their SAUCE

don,t wanna MEAT them again
they might claim a STEAK on this site

I always will have a BEEF
with SPAM
even if it is a CORNY one.

thanks for not MINCING your words
and PUDDIN' in a lot of work
HAGGIS that will be the last we see
of this POLONEY.

might catch you again next FRYDAY.

OIL be seeing ya-

CHRIS PEEBAYKON.

ps. hope all PANS out ok


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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 18:56

simplistically yet well described
all too common
nightly journey

that I for one travel all too often
most times
instigated you could say
by wizzywords spinning around
ones grey haired cranium.

the solution?
need I tell you?
no-not the palm pilot thingy-but
L'amour! cor!

cheers

P&S

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 18:41

You're confusing the issue Cynthia...unless otherwise stated-(as in +1 or -1) 1+1 always equals 2, as I qualified in my remark re 'dialectics'. Re 'the egg'. You are confusing a simple statement of fact with the qualifier of morality- I said: 'If I take an egg and crush it in my hand- it is an event- indisputable- and only becomes a matter for 'dispute' when a sentient being 'intervenes''. Murder is also an event and is covered by my initial statement.

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Sat 3rd Sep 2011 18:39


indeed Neil is there sadly
for some,
a too well rooted and not neccessarily wanted
subculture.
damn the white collar criminals!

good lines abound in this poem.

thanks.

P&S.W.

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 18:25

Lynn there is a vast difference between Hitler and Bin Laden: numerically, intent, methods and results.

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<Deleted User> (7075)

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 16:43

Hi Greg, thanks for your comments there may be more on the way, its quite an enjoyable exercise. Win

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 15:02


oh-only a temporary glitch Johnnyboy
-you,ll be back forthwith-
if not sooner!

good advice from Kealan btw.

cheers Twelver Embley.

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kealan coady

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 14:54

Good poem, it reminds me of the saying (i think this is it) "In the darkest depths of desperation, man created god"

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kealan coady

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 14:50

You should try writing a non rhyming poem. Maybe your thoughts are being confined by this form. When writing free form, thoughts are much more capable of expansion and therefore allows more freedom of vocabulary.

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 14:47

Everyone at my writing group liked your poem very much - and were intrigued to find out what a villanelle was! Most of the group stick to writing prose you see. Thanks a lot for letting me read it to them.

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David Cooke

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 13:04

Hi Ann Thanks for clever comment on Piano which I hadn't thought of myself. In fact she was very quiet and unassuming which is another reason it was all so shocking.

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Lynn Dye

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 12:54

Thank you, Patricia, you are right, we are lovely, but I guess some men are not so bad!!! Thanks for comment xx

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<Deleted User> (6315)

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 11:14

ha ha...possibly out of the window with my own gallavanting off somewhere more interesting..sighs.. :)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 10:47

Harry, your comment on 'Considering Colour' is excellent, and I fully take your point. My aim was to steer completely clear of poetic 'values/imagery' and write something which bends the cold scientific terms into a versed/turned form full of cadence, out of the paragraph/caption genre into a more friendly eye-structure. Textbooks can be very intimidating. I'm still quite pleased with the effort; the facts might actually be remembered. THUS SPAKE CYNTHIA! Hahahaha.

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Andy N

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 00:42

Hi Elaine; - thanks for the comment on ticket to ride it was wrote on a summers day which i guess sums up the british summertime - lol but thanks for the comment again - hope you are good - speak soon xx

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Andy N

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 00:42

Hi Elaine; - it was wrote on a summers day which i guess sums up the british summertime but thanks for the comment again - hope you are good - speak soon xx

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Andy N

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 00:41

thanks cynthia for the comment here on the end of summer .. it's one to think bout which i hadn't thought about so all suggestions are welcome.. hope you are well - andy n x

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Andy N

Sat 3rd Sep 2011 00:40

thanks cynthia for the comment here.. it's one to think bout which i hadn't thought about so all suggestions are welcome x

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 2nd Sep 2011 22:25

Hello Cynth
Thanks for Twice Bless`d

Thinking on this:
Lots of the discoveries of science are marvellous (genes etc;) but we`ve all got so used to praising them in the terms the scientists use that they read dully. Alan Morrison in his poem `Aloneness` gives a description of `a hand` which approaches a wondering, poetic way of telling (and using)a scientific truth. Both poetry - and science - would benefit if we could do more of it.

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 2nd Sep 2011 21:35


really enjoyable poem
I love the open-endededness

the best to you.

Stef

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Philipos

Fri 2nd Sep 2011 21:33

Hi Ann, so glad you enjoyed 'Reminiscence' and for letting me know.

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 2nd Sep 2011 21:31

we get the gist of what you are saying and can relate to it.thank you.Patricia

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 2nd Sep 2011 21:26

and thank heaven indeed for those greater things.nicely written.thank you.Patricia.

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 2nd Sep 2011 21:22

hello again Lynn,this interesting poem goes to prove my point to you earlier,are,nt we women lovely and not warlike like some! my thanks.Patricia(oh and Stef I suppose)ha

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 2nd Sep 2011 15:00

You're confusing the issue Cynthia...unless otherwise stated-(as in +1 or -1)1+1 always equals 2, as I qualified in my remark re 'dialectics'. Re 'the egg'. You are confusing a simple statement of fact with the qualifier of morality- I said: 'If I take an egg and crush it in my hand- it is an event- indisputable- and only becomes a matter for 'dispute' when a sentient being 'intervenes''. Murder is also an event and is covered by my initial statement.

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Fri 2nd Sep 2011 14:29

Very good Hazel, I enjoyed reading this, good way of defining the word thought.....

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 2nd Sep 2011 13:21

Really enjoyed this poem Marianne. Lovely.

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