Brian Blanchard

Mon 17th Dec 2018 17:41

Lovely Mark. Having never been there, I can still picture it as I believe many have taken a similar stroll down their own lane, and hopefully reached as comforting a resolution! A nice message at this time of year.

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Martin Elder

Mon 17th Dec 2018 16:38

Brilliant Randy . Is this one you have read recently

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John Coopey

Mon 17th Dec 2018 16:09

MC- What we have now is a consequence of what we voted for. And Alan is quite right - there never was a plan on “Leave”. Self-publicists like Johnson, Rees-Mogg, Davies, even Gove have played you like a fiddle and all to position themselves for their own gain. I too would be angry if I were in your shoes. As it is, I have the luxury of being sanctimonious.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Dec 2018 15:45

The comments about being in hock to the USA leave me smiling -
with family over there following WW2 and who are only too ready
to support an England that has the nerve and commitment that
served us in braver times than now.
The EU loves to call itself "Europe". I suggest you check when
they last displayed any interest in the PEOPLES of the countries of Europe and their hopes and wishes, And have a look at the words
of a founding father of the "project" who set out how it would work
without the "peoples" being aware of what was intended. If that is
your idea of something worth being part of, then count me out and
point me towards the rest of the world while the "project" led by its
Franco-German aliiance seeks to keep its floundering ship - the SS Deceit - afloat.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 17th Dec 2018 15:16

Thanks you guys and thanks for making this night of poetry one to remember!

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 17th Dec 2018 15:14

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Mon 17th Dec 2018 14:54

Hi Eve - I live in a safe, free country and always feel sympathy for those that don't and seek safety elsewhere. Obviously I don't know anything about the man in question other than what you have said in your piece, but I would ask how many safe, free, Christian countries he crossed to get to the UK. I'm not being flippant...just questioning whether he wants safety or whether he wants the UK?

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Alan Travis Braddock

Mon 17th Dec 2018 14:15

Well said John. Trouble was that the people who wanted us out of Europe a) didn't think about the consequences and b) didn't want the job of deciding what to do next and slunk off to their sheds.
Now what we have is an almighty cock-up which will leave us in hock to the USA if we don't look out. How many years do you give it before the NHS is stolen from us, like the Post Office etc.etc.?

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Alan Travis Braddock

Mon 17th Dec 2018 14:00

Oh I like this one. A poem for all of us old has-beens, better than a never-was perhaps, but still sad. Not long now, the even older train will call for us, and this one will stop.
Cheers, Alan

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Dec 2018 13:35

A mantra well worth repeating.?

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Dec 2018 13:34

Excellent analogy, Randy.?

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Mon 17th Dec 2018 12:58

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Alan Travis Braddock

Mon 17th Dec 2018 12:51

Thank You people. I wrote this some time ago but nothing happened then - either.
The interesting thing is that nobody ever suggests that filling the oceans with plastic and using up the resources of the planet is a GOOD THING - they just go ahead letting it happen.
You can't blame the poor sods on the bread line, all they want is a decent living. The problem is the bastards who want the whole world for themselves and are quite happy to steal it and will kill anybody who gets in their way.

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raypool

Mon 17th Dec 2018 10:45

Ghazala, so pleased you looked back on this - mostly triggered by the armistice day. Thank you.

Ray

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raypool

Mon 17th Dec 2018 10:41

Ghazala, thanks for looking back to this - it is quite a sight to see a field of lavender, spectacular! All the best to you.

Ray

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 17th Dec 2018 10:38

Martin, Ray, David and Big Sal, thank you very much for your comments. Always much appreciated.

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Bindu Trigunayak

Mon 17th Dec 2018 10:27

Dear Brian, that is what i was trying to say..may be I was not able to interpret it fully..Money has controlled us in every means..yeah for sure it gives security..but we are scanty of it,we cant even enjoy the happy moments of life to the fullest..today the value of money is like anything..if we want to lead a happy life with every resources without compromising anything with our comfort..we have to have plenty of money in hand...

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Mon 17th Dec 2018 09:47

Shades of Lionel Shriver...

...we need to talk about Don.

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John Coopey

Mon 17th Dec 2018 08:41

The government can’t be held to blame for 17m people telling them to build a submarine made of cheese. They can be held to blame for trying to build one rather than telling the people not to be so stupid.

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Poetikaly Anointed

Mon 17th Dec 2018 02:56

This is so true and wickedly written:

unless we have the things and the gadgets

we need for the things that need cleaning

With the other gadgets.

lol

We want...We NEED...We want some more...so we can need ever more...For a culture so bloated on consumption, we sure are underfed on morals and values.

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Poetikaly Anointed

Mon 17th Dec 2018 02:49

Dang...deep write. You had me going from the start...I was thinking somebody was dying of cancer or something. Never thought of that...

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Poetikaly Anointed

Mon 17th Dec 2018 02:46

This is so real and I relate on levels that I wish didn't even exist.

Beautiful, thought provoking and well-penned.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Dec 2018 00:23

The comments are appreciated - thank you. The Devon lane is a
real place from my past - in the South Hams between Dartmouth and Salcombe.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Dec 2018 00:18

Ask why the European Communities Act wasn't immediately repealed by Parliament when the result of the referendum was known, with the initiative with the government to put forward
proposals from the "people's power" point of view. Then ask if
the problem is actually Brexit OR those in Parliament who have led
us down the EU garden path and still want us there.
Remainers loath leaving
The EU - like grieving
For a mummy that guides them
But always over-rides them.
Brexit didn't suit
So they don't give a hoot
They're kids needing nannies
To wipe their little fannies
As long as they do
What the nannies tell them to..
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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 23:00

beautiful poem Jon. Thanks for posting

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:58

I assume that this is your song. I love the style of music and the video. I am a big fan of interpretive dance.
Love it Robert

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:53

I think that probably summed up the evening Nigel , but none the less a good night

Nice one mate

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:51

Ah terry nappies I remember them well soaking in buckets prior to going through the washing machine. what fun!. though a whole lot better than disposables

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John Marks

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:47

beauty can be found at any time

If you can stay clear headed

enough to find it

Which we can't....and avoid all the diversions and cul de sacs....which we also can't.

This interior monologue moves smoothly to dump us back at the beginning of a thought process.

Excellent poem

John

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:42

very very nice even with just these few words, but In would love to hear it put to music.

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:41

Absolutely superb Tom. So beautifully crafted . I love the line
'as angels hang from the clock.'
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:37

A wonderful poem made all the better for hearing you read it Andy. Although to be fair because I have heard you read so many times it is not difficult to imagine. there is a real richness in this piece
Love it

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:31

Another winner here Rich. I love the sparseness of words that help to drive the poem along. Love it

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:29

heady days indeed when mail was delivered with such alacrity and due diligence. I can even remember to deliveries a day.

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:27

I have been reading an article about the Amish this weekend which puts me in mind of antidote to such behaviour to constantly consume.
Love the poem Alan
nice one

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John Marks

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:22

Well sustained Peter. It is easy to let poems like this peter out. Snow is beautiful at first fall but soon the virgin blankness is trodden into sludge, at least in my city.

John

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AM Cash

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:04

Hey great poem makes my new one seem too boring

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Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:02

Consumerism.
We need more. Eat more. Spend more. And still we want more.
Are we any happier?
And at what cost? " We choke the weak". Our cheap £1 t-shirt made in Bangladesh by an 8 year old.
Were like locust. An infection. Eating away the planet.
We will burn out. But so will the planet unless we change our ways.

This is what your poem made me think about.

It made me think.

Love your work Mr Braddock.

Beno.

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raypool

Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:48

Exceptional, the external triggers of internal wonderings and struggles. It has an elusive quality which makes it so special; and I feel that there is escapism in the book reading and the awareness of that is a return into the void of sensitivity and also of no sense . That is where went in the poem.

So pleased you're back with new material Tom.

Ray

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raypool

Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:41

A nightmare of the search for a reason. A bit like the old testament, Sheboah begat Ezkarah, begat Noah, etc etc. I like the concept of a worldigig!

Ray

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Big Sal

Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:40

Great last line on the second to last stanza, Alan. Whole piece really.

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Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:26

Similar sentiment to be found in Cafe Scene.
Just going through your back catalogue.

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Don Matthews

Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:09

You have done very well here. I echo all the others with my feelings.
I like the lines

'High above the grey clouds parted
By the smiling sun outsmarted'

Don?

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Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:02

Everything does go. But when does someone start to think like that? 29, 39, 49, 59.
Think we should just enjoy all the beauty around us, whenever we can. Quite blatantly you see it all the time Maybe forget all the mundane crap of everyday life, and enjoy every breathing space. Maybe one day you will feel completely lost like your dad........ my dad, but worrying about it will only soil the here and now.
Every new page is a blank new day still to be written. Make it good dude.
Loving your work. Beno.

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raypool

Sun 16th Dec 2018 21:00

A wistful and optimistic eulogy for a place you obviously are proud of and look back to with fondness Mark. This has a real genuine power to convey a mood and transport us. Nicely rhymed, it all makes sense.

Ray

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 16th Dec 2018 20:54

Hi M.C. I always enjoy your poetry, but this is outstanding. A gentle journey of reflection. ?

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Sun 16th Dec 2018 20:50

Great flow Alan to describe a mad pursuit.

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Sun 16th Dec 2018 20:32

Wonderful Peter, congratulations. ?

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Mark Mr T Thompson

Sun 16th Dec 2018 20:20

Yep, it does!

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Sun 16th Dec 2018 19:26

I do feel the panic, and I can feel it slipping away, but rarely!!! Most of the time I'm drowning in it, and my trees are full.
Thankfully.
Beno.

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